Okay um...

I'm gonna be truthful, I go around and see "be nice this is my first story" that kinda stuff. I just wonder, is your condense in your creation not found enough to the point that you will not take blunt advice? I understand feelings, being a female my self, it's just you can be gifted with a talent. But you can only go so far with out hearing the bluntness of people who don't see the beauty you see in your work.

Before I start to rumble I'm just saying that, I'm open to mean and nice reviews. I'm not gonna hold any thing against any one...

So on with the story!


Melissa's face was shaped in horror; Alucard had a packet of medical blood in his hand and was he drinking it?

She felt utterly sick to her stomach, not from disgust mind you, but from shock. "Little Red" he murmured looking to her, she swallowed the dryness in her mouth down her throat, "So you drink, blood?" She asked, "Are you in a cult?" her horrified expression deepened. "I am a monster" he said staring with a blank look in his eyes, "Monster? Your a vampire, if your a monster" She started, her face shifting to anger, "Are you really a Vampire?" she asked stepping closer to him and into his room, the air about her became intense with anger and seriousness, it was almost slightly intimidating to Alucard.

The door that was left open slammed shut behind her, she let out the pent up scream and leaped forward. She landed in Alucard's lap and curled up shaking, the anger and the seriousness all gone as she mewed and shook. "What was that, Big Red!?" she asked clinging to Alucard, he smirked, "the door, Little Red" Melissa's head snapped up to look at him, "No, really?" she hissed with sarcasm, making Alucard laugh.

He patted her head, and leaned back continuing to drain the packet; Melissa was stuck in her pose. Lay back on her side with her legs in between Alucard's. She helplessly felt like a doll, her head rested on his chest and she felt sleepy. She closed her eyes and just listened to Alucard drinking the blood, it sounded unappealing, the sounds were in fact unappealing, but she said nothing. She never felt so calm and since she sat like this with her own father, she was after all a hopeless daddy's girl.

Even though he did beat her, break both her arms and starved her countless times, leading to her being 'Little Red'. But now she felt safe something she didn't ever feel with her father, she inhaled deeply making her nerves numb and relaxed. She heard the door open and close; Melissa simply grabbed part of Alucard's vest, with out opening her eyes.

"I didn't think you had a heart, Alucard" said Walter as looked at the two, the vampire snorted, the brim of his hat blocking his face from the old man. "So should I tell Sir Integra" Walter said as he laid another packet on the bed side table, he turned to leave but was confronted by Integra and Victoria, "Sir Integra, Miss Seras" "Alucard, I was hoping for you to be more responsible" Integra began with a stern voice, "She followed me" he said simply, "I can not control her" with that said Integra growled, "She is a catholic! She is more trouble then she is worth, Alucard!" She snapped, "They may send Anderson in to take her to Rome!" Alucard tossed the empty packet aside and took off his hat and tossed it to his coffin bed. His arm held Melissa close as he stood up and set her down on her feet, she opened her eyes and looked up at him "Splendid" Alucard breathed. "That is fantastic" Alucard hissed a evil smile bracing his face, every one in the room new he was happy with that, but the little girl who stood next to him had no idea. "So you want me to leave?" she asked clearly sounding upset and hurt.

Alucard scooped her up with one arm, and looked into her eyes, she leaned back slightly scared "Little Red" he said in a stern voice, she understood what he meant. She smiled brightly, "Big Red" she said excitedly; Alucard laughed loudly, the girl finally figured out now that she had found her home, her new father, and a new chapter in her life had finally been marked down.

She was excited in what was to come; she didn't care if it was good or bad…


I'm hoping people got what I wanted to do with Melissa and Alucard, I thought it was cute.

So now onto the fighting, the blood, and loosing body part that Hellsing is known for!

Thanks for reading and please Reveiw!