Hey People thanks for all the request's! Really lame excuse for not working on this story at the bottom :P

Russell Scottie

What if Tiny, aka Scourge, joined ThunderClan?
What if Stonefur had lived, Mistyfoot had died, and Stonefur is unable to forgive Leopardstar after the great battle with BloodClan?
What if Ravenpaw stayed in ThunderClan and told Bluestar the truth of Redtail's death?
What if Cinderpelt wasn't crippled by the monster and was able to tell Fireheart she loved him?

What if Tiny, aka Scourge, joined Thunderclan

I really like the idea of Tiny/Scourge joining Thunderclan. I might even make this a fanfic story! Thanks for the What if…'s! :D

"Hey Tiny" Ruby sneered. The tiny black kit bounded over to his sister and brother.

"We dare YOU to go into the forest and bring back a mouse…than you can play with us" Socks growled with an evil smirk. Tiny stood up bravely his black fur ruffled up.

"I will go into the forest and bring back two mice as proof" Tiny meowed. With a jingle of his collar Tiny dashed off out of his house folks den.

"I can do this" Tiny thought as he padded into the forest. The only sound he heard was the jingle of his collar, it was way too quiet. He lifted his head and sniffed. The distinctive smell of mouse lingered in the air.

"Finally" Tiny purred. He dropped into a crouch and slithered on his stomach trying to find the mouse. Suddenly there was a yowl and Tiny was flying. With a thud he crashed into a tree. Fear prickled his pelt. Blood gushed from an open wound on his side. Groaning Tiny stood up.

"SHOW YOURSELF" He yowled provoked that he was caught off guard. A large muscular tom stood in front off him he was grinning…an odd twisted evil bloody grin. Tiny swiped at the tom opening a wound on the toms leg. The tom spun around and snapped at Tiny. Tiny quickly dodged the attack and bite hard into the toms leg again. Blood splattered Tiny. The tom kicked him Tiny flew backward and smashed his head against a rock. Tiny lunged at him but the tom grabbed his scuff and shook Tiny rapidly. Tiny felt himself fly again and before he knew it he was dizzy, light headed and in much pain.

"TIGERCLAW STOP IT NOW!" A voice hollered. Tiny looked up and saw a blue-grey she cat and an orange tom. With that the world went black.


"ARGH its so bright" Tiny groaned. Tiny opened his eyes and saw sun rays shining in from a den. Tiny tried to lift his head but it was hopeless he was in too much pain.

"Hold still you'll hurt yourself" A gentle voice soothed. Tiny looked up and saw a beautiful she cat smiling at him.

"Who are you?" He asked.

"I'm Spottedleaf" The she cat purred. Spottedleaf helped him sit up. Tiny felt a little dizzy but he tried his best to stay sitting. Spottedleaf nosed a herb toward him. The black kit glanced at them with a disgusted look on his face. "Eat them and I will answer all your questions" Spottedleaf bribed. That was enough for Tiny. He wolfed down the bitter herbs and looked at Spottedleaf expectantly. She laughed.

"Where am I?" Tiny meowed looking around.

"The medicine den in Thunderclan camp"

"Medicine den? Thunderclan?" Tiny was confused what where all these weird names. Spottedleaf opened her mouth to answer but the world shifted. He was in the same den. The orange tom suddenly ran in.

"Hello Yellowfang has the ki- Oh hello" The tom meowed. Tiny recognised the tom it was the tom he saw before the world went black. The orange tom was carrying a mouse in his jaws. A wiry yellowish she cat took it from the tom and laid it down in front of Tiny.

"I'm Fireheart" The tom meowed. Tiny nodded and glanced at the mouse. He was starving. The wiry yellowish she cat pawed the mouse toward him. Tiny bit into the mouse happily. The food was furry but Tiny did not care he was too hungry.

"I'm Tiny" He meowed with a mouth full of mouse. He looked at the she cat. "where is Spottedleaf?" he asked. Fireheart and Yellowfang both looked surprised yet sad.

"She died a moon ago" Yellowfang rasped.

"But she took care of me and gave me herbs" Tiny meowed angrily.

"She died end of conversation" Yellowfang snapped. Fireheart looked sadly at Tiny.

"She probably took you to Starclan and nursed you there. Spottedleaf died the day you where hurt" Fireheart meowed his voice thick with grief. Tiny decided not to talk about Spottedleaf anymore and was finishing off his mouse when the blue- grey she cat strode into the medicine den. Fireheart and Yellowfang bowed respectfully to the she cat. Tiny lowered his head.

"Hello young one. I am Bluestar leader of Thunderclan" The she cat meowed.

"I'm Tiny" Tiny squeaked. The she cat looked very powerful and reminded him of the horrible brown tom.

"I'm sorry about Tigerclaw" Bluestar meowed.

"Tigerclaw? He did this to me? Once I get my claws on him" Tiny muttered angrily. Fireheart smiled at him.

"Don't worry he was severely punished and he still is being punished"

"I-I'm sorry I used up your clan's herbs I should not be here" Tiny Squealed. Bluestar let out a mrrow of laughter.

"You where not a burden. The clan was worried you would not live through the night but you where quite strong for a Kittypet"

"I am NOT a kitty pet" Tiny hissed. He quickly realized what he did and cowered again.

"You where very brave for a two legged pet. Most kittens would have ran away from Tigerclaw but you like Fireheart stayed and fought. If you where a little bigger I am sure you would have been able to fight him. If you would win, I don't think you would have" Bluestar meowed.

"Can he stay here he is 6 moons after all" Fireheart asked. Bluestar looked at Fireheart.

"I talked about that with Lionheart about that and because we cannot throw you out in the forest you will train in Thunderclan as an apprentice"

"Really?!" Tiny meowed excitedly.

"I can teach him about the clans" Fireheart meowed happily. "Besides he might want some company besides this bag of fleas" Fireheart motioned toward Yellowfang. Yellowfang lets out a mrrow of laughter and swatted at Firehearts ear.

"I'm more than fleas" She hissed. Bluestar laughed at Yellowfang.

"Fireheart and Yellowfang I will allow you two to give Tiny a proper kit name. Yellowfang when will he be ready to become an apprentice?" Bluestar asked.

"If he listens to me than 4-6sunrises" Yellowfang raspsed. Bluestar nodded and left the medicine den. Fireheart and Yellowfang looked at tiny.

"Tinykit because he is tiny for a 6 moon apprentice" Yellowfang raspsed.

"No he's not that tiny" Fireheart replies.

"Ya I could beat you in a fight" Tiny hissed to Yellowfang. She just laughs at him.

"We should call him Whitekit" Yellowfang meowed. Tiny looked at her like she was crazy.

"I'm Black" Tiny hissed in annoyance.

"Maybe Jaykit because he has blue eyes?" Fireheart meowed.

"Or Skykit" Yellowfang meowed.

"Why the heck Skykit that's a name for she cats" Tiny spat. Fireheart stifles a mrrow of laughter. Yellowfang narrows her eyes at Tiny and laughs.

After much debating between the three Tiny finally had a name…Ravenkit… 5 sunrises later

"Hi Ravenkit" Greystripe meowed. Ravekit meowed a hello. He padded into the clearing and sat by the entrance. Fireheart was going to bring him fresh kill.

"Don't go outside camp young one." Lionheart meowed. The entrance rustled and Fireheart came with Sandpaw and Tigerclaw.

"Here you go Ravenkit" Fireheart meowed dropping a vole at my paws.

"Can I give this to Cinderkit, Brackenkit, Brightkit and Thornkit?" Ravenkit asks. Fireheart droped a rabbit beside Ravenkit.

"You'll need this to feed them all." he meowed. Ravenkit drags the rabbit into the nursery.

"Yay mom Ravenkit brought food!" exclaimed Cinderkit.

"You should have some to Frostfur?" Ravenkit asked.

"No thank you Ravekit I'm going to share tongues with Bluestar" Frostfur meowed licking Ravenkit on the head.

"When I am apprenticed I will catch rabbit's too" Ravenkit boasted.

"Ya right you can't even catch green cough" Cinderkit teased.

"Yes I can…I-er mean, I can catch anything I want" Ravenkit started but ended up ducking his head in embarrassment. Cinderkit mrrowed in laughter, so did Brackenkit, Brightkit and Thornkit. After they all finish eating Ravenkit looks outside. Bluestar called a clan meeting. Bravenkit, Thornkit and Brightkit padded out of the den with Cinderkit and Ravenkit behind them.

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the high rock for a clan meeting" Bluestar's call rang though out camp. Ravenkit and Cinderkit sat beside Brightkit in front of the nursery.

"Cinderkit, Brackenkit, Thornkit, Brightkit and Ravenkit you have reached the age of 6 moons" Bluestar meowed. Frostfur ran over and begin to lick the kits.

"Mom" complained Brightkit.

"Ravenkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Ravenpaw. Your mentor will be Fireheart. I hope Fireheart will pass down all he knows on to you." Bluestar turned addressing Fireheart. Ravenpaw could hardly contain his excitement Fireheart was going to be his mentor! "Fireheart, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from me You have been very fortunate to have more than one mentor. You will be the mentor of Ravenpaw. I hope you pass down all they have taught you down to Ravenpaw." Ravenpaw touch noses with Fireheart. Cinderpaw gets Greystripe as her mentor. Brackenpaw gets Lionheart. Thornpaw gets Mousefur and Brightpaw gets Whitestorm.

"Ravenpaw!Cinderpaw!Brackenpaw!Thronpaw!Brightpaw! " Everyone cheers. Ravenpaw closed his eyes and silently thanked Socks and Ruby without them he would never have become a Thunderclan apprentice!

Many Moons later! (Okay this is a really random shipping I just thought of!)

I pad through the under growth with Fireheart at my side.

"I knew Tigerclaw was evil" I hiss angrily.

"Yes I agree. I knew he was evil as well" Fireheart meows. I pick up my sparrow and mouse. Fireheart has a robin and vole. As we enter camp Thornclaw, Brackenfur and Brightheart run up to me.

"You might want to you see Cinderpelt" Brightheart meows. I drop my mouse at the fresh kill pile and still with the sparrow in my mouth I run into the nursery. Cinderpelt is panting.

"Ravenfeather" Cinderpelt pants. I nuzzle her affectionately. She suddenly yowls in pain. Yellowfang mutters to herself as a black and silver cat tumbles into the moss.

"Awwww she's so cute" Brightheart purrs taking the kit from Yellowfang and begins to lick it.

"Is everything running smoothly" I asks nervously. I remember being there when Silverstream gave birth. She had died. Cinderpelt who had fallen out of tree had spent a 2 moons in the medicine den so her leg could heal. After watching Yellowfang help a she cat give birth Cinderpelt was able to help Silverstream. Even with her skills Silverstream still died.

"Yes everything is fine" Yellowfang rasps. Cinderpelt yowls again and soon a silver tom with black stripes tumbles to the moss.

"Lick him" Yellowfang orders. I lick the kit. He soon starts to breathe. "One more Cinderpelt" Yellowfang meows. Cinderpelt nods weakly. Brightheart sets the she kit down and picks up some moss soaked in water. Cinderpelt shakes her head. Suddenly she starts to pant again and soon a little she kit tumbles to the moss. She looks just like me. Yellowfang licks the little she kit.

"That was the last one" Yellowfang meows. The two she kits and the tom start to suckle from Cinderpelt.

"We should name them" Cinderpelt purrs. I nuzzle her before lying down beside her.

"The black and silver she kit should be Spottedkit" I meow. Her pelt is dappled black and silver. This is my way of thanking Spottedleaf for keeping me alive.

"The tom he should be Jaykit" Cinderpelt purrs. I smile as I remember Fireheart and Yellowfang trying to give me names. I almost ended up as Jaykit. We both look at the small she kit.

"She can be Nightkit" I purr. Nightkit, Jaykit and Spottedkit. I lick Cinderpelts cheek. I look at the kits before looking out of the nursery. I try to imagine what would have happened if I never was dared by Socks and Ruby. Or if Tigerclaw never attacked me. Without them I may have never met Cinderpelt. One day I will see all three of them again and I will thank them…even Tigerclaw.

Okay That was long J I will try to make the other answers long too!

What if Stonefur had lived, Mistyfoot had died, and Stonefur is unable to forgive Leopardstar after the great battle with BloodClan?

"I hate you" Stonefur roared angrily. Leopardstar looked shocked at Stonefur. "Because of you Mistyfoot is dead" He screeched.

"My fault?" Leopardstar meowed bewildered.

"You sided with that piece of Crow food Tigerstar and HE KILLED MISTYFOOT"

"It was not my FAULT" Leopardstar hissed.

"SHUT UP NO ONE LIKES YOU" Stonefur hissed his fur risen. He was low to the ground, as if he was going to pounce on Leopardstar. "HE KILLED MY MOTHER" Leopardstar shrugged as if she did not care…she probably didn't.

"It was her own faul-"

"THAT IS IT I AM LEAVING RIVERCLAN" Gasps and shocked screeches ripple through Riverclan.

"No You will stay" Leopardstar hisses she looks at Stonefur shocked that he wants to leave.

"I AM LEAVING"

"You're my deputy you cannot leave. Besides the leader's word is the law" Stonefur's eyes are slits.

"Your not my leader" He spits before padding away from his clan mates.

"WHERE WILL YOU GO STONEFUR?" Leopardstar calls out.

"I know some where that will welcome me"

"You want to join Thunderclan?" Firestar asks surprised. "I-I thought you where happy in Riverclan"

"Yes I want to join Thunderclan. I was happy in Riverclan but Leopardstar sided with Tigerstar and-and she's just a mouse brained fool. Only crow food would follow under her leadership" Greystripe looked shocked as well.
"Well there is nothing stopping you from joining Thunderclan" Firestar meowed

"Thank you Firestar you don't know how much this means to me. Your just like my mother always kind and always there. Th-Thank you, you really have no idea how much this means to me"

Bluestar smiled proudly at her son from Starclan" You don't know how much this means to me" she purred.

Okay that was short. But if you don't understand what happened well, Bluestar is pleased that Stonefur is joining Thunderclan and how he complemented her and Firestar.

What if Ravenpaw stayed in ThunderClan and told Bluestar the truth of Redtail's death?

"Y-Yes I'm afraid of Tigerclaw but I'm no coward I won't abandon Thunderclan" Ravenpaw meowed boldly to Firepaw and Greypaw. "You two go find who murdered Spottedleaf. Right now I need to convince Bluestar" Firepaw and Greypaw exchanged glances.

"She won't believe you" Firepaw meowed.

"Who said I am going to visit her" Ravenpaw replied his eyes sparkled and a mischievous grin spread across his face. Firepaw and Greypaw smiled.

"Good luck Ravenpaw" Greypaw purred.

"Greypaw if I'm correct Brokenstar will invade our territory he knows that we sent most of our warriors out to look for the kits. He and Tigerstar will try to murder Bluestar. You my friend will need to find Yellowfang. Firepaw you will go into Shadowclan territory. You two find a meeting place. Firepaw if Brokenstar and his followers come go try to find Greypaw and go back to camp. If they don't come wait for Greypaw and Yellowfang. Yellowfang will help you get the kits." Ravenpaw ordered.

"Yes Ravenstar" humoured Firepaw. "be safe" with that the two ran into Shadowclan territory. Ravenpaw let out a shaky breath and ran as fast as he could into Riverclan territory. His black fur ruffled as the wind blew harshly. He quickly swam through the river and ran through Riverclan territory. He sniffed the air. Mistyfoot.

"Mistyfoot" he hissed. The she cat jumped up.

"Ravenpaw?! What are you doing here" she hissed angrily.

"It's an emergency and only you can save Bluestar" Ravenpaw looked at her sadly.

"I'm sure we can lend you some herbs why did you not send Spottedleaf?" Mistyfoot turned around.

"WAIT! No you need to come with me." Mistyfoot snarled at him as her response.

"it's a trap isn't it" she spat.

"NO! I goofed a while back. I made it sound like Redtail killed Oakheart and Tigerclaw killed Redtail" Mistyfoot stopped growling and sat down.

"Oakheart was killed by a rock slid" she replied. "How does this save Bluestar?"

"I know Oakheart was killed in a rock slide but Tigerclaw murdered Redtail. I tried to explain it better to Bluestar but she refuses to listen to me" Ravenpaw pleaded.

"I-I don't see how telling her Oakheart was killed in a rock slide will help you prove Tigerclaw guilty"

"That's where you come in. You will say you're a witness"

"Lie!? No I won't lie to Bluestar"

"You won't lie. Please Mistyfoot come with me and I will show you." Ravenpaw padded forward. "Please Mistyfoot you're my last hope"

"Ravenpaw we're in Shadowclan territory I'm starting to trust you less and less" Mistyfoot hissed.

"be quiet come look" Ravenpaw hissed back. He followed Yellowfang's, Firepaw and Greypaw's scent as the padded through the forest.

"It's almost time my clan mates. In a few seconds Tigerclaw will escort us to his camp and we shall rule Thunderclan and than we will take over the other clans" Brokenstar yowled. Triumphant yowls ripped through camp. Mistyfoot's eyes widened.

"Here I am now. You can call me Tigerstar already." Tigerclaw meowed as he padded into Shadowclan camp. "However I do believe some cat here does not belong. Two cats in fact. A Riverclan she cat and a Thunderclan Tom" Tigerclaw glared right at Ravenpaw.

"Mistyfoot we need to get out right now" Ravenpaw meowed franticly.

"We will deal with them first then with Bluestar" Brokenstar yowled. Mistyfoot just stood their her eyes wide in fear.

"We need to leave NOW" Ravenpaw shoved into her.

"GET THEM" A tom yowled. Ravenpaw ran with Mistyfoot as his side. A she cat yowled and bit Ravenpaw's tail. He yelped in pain and with a burst of energy dashed off. Mistyfoot ran quickly to stay beside Ravenpaw.

"I thought you promised me we would not get hurt?" Mistyfoot yowled.

"I said you but not me" Ravenpaw yowled. "Look I'm slowing us down you do ahead and warn Bluestar." Ravenpaw continued. He tried not to be scared but he was terrified right now. His body shook as he said this.

"No I stay with you" Mistyfoot yowled dodging a blow from a tom.

"WOULD YOU RATHER LOSE ONE CAT OR ONE CLAN" Ravenpaw screeched. Mistyfoot looked at the ground.

"I'm sorry Ravenpaw" she whispered and ran faster than before leaving Ravenpaw alone with a mob of Shadowclan cats.

"How noble" sneered Tigerclaw. Ravenpaw ran faster he had to get away. Suddenly someone grabbed his tail and flung him to the ground. Tigerclaw loomed over Ravenpaw.

"I-It's too late Mistyfoot has warned Bluestar." Ravenpaw squeaked.

"Do you really think two cats can defeat us" Tigerclaw roared. Ravenpaw looked away.

"Brokenstar lead your clan to Thunderclan I need to finish dealing with Ravenpaw" Tigerclaw laughed. Ravenpaw glared angrily at Tigerclaw.

"I normally would kill you Ravenpaw but I'm saving my strength for Bluestar" Tigerclaw growled. Ravenpaw wanted to yell angrily. He wished Tigerclaw would just kill him already. "I also don't want you to die" Tigerclaw hissed. "But there is no problem in hurting you a little more" Ravenpaw opened his eyes in horror.

"I hate you" he screamed trying to get up. Tigerclaw laughed darkly before pressing his claw against Ravenpaw's neck. Ever so slowly Tigerclaw dragged his claw down Ravenpaws chest. He pressed down so that blood weld up. Ravenpaw yowled in pain. Tigerclaw smiled and started to claw quickly at Ravenpaw's back. Blood splattered around him. Ravenpaw screamed and begged for mercy. Tigerclaw picked Ravenpaw up by his scuff and threw him against a tree. Ravenpaw felt the world go black for a moment. Tigerclan pressed his front teeth against Ravenpaw's head. Slowly Tigerclaw dug his teeth into Ravenpaw's head and drag them downward. Ravenpaw thrashed wildly trying to get away. Blood fell into his eyes blinding his vision. Ravenpaw screamed again. Tigerclaw bit down hard into Ravenpaw's side. Blood coated the ground. Tigerclaw smirked at the sight of a bloody Ravenpaw.

"Whoops looks like you might die after all…Looks like I will have you head hanging on the wall of my den sooner than I thought" Tigerclaw sneered before biting into Ravenpaw's leg.

"You see no one can stop me. I'm going to become leader" Tigerclaw yowled in pleasure and ran off into the night. Ravenpaw did not die. He lay there in a pool of tears and blood. Blood. It soaked him and it soaked everything around him.

"SOMEONE KILL ME" he thought.

"RAVENPAW!" came a scream. Ravenpaw saw Firepaw.

"GREAT STARCLAN" screeched Yellowfang.

"SOMEONE WAS KILLING HIM" Screamed Greypaw. Ravenpaw could see the world getting out of focus.

"he is still alive" whispered Yellowfang as she carried him. "we should kill him"

"NO" Firepaw yowled. Ravenpaw mentally attacked Firepaw. He wanted to die. The moment theY entered a bloody Thunderclan camp gasps sounded out.

"Ravenpaw what happened to you?" asked Tigerclaw. Bluestar looked shocked.

"T-That can't be Ravenpaw. Ravenpaw is black not red" whispered Sandpaw.

"TIGERCLAW DID THIS" Ravenpaw screamed. Hot tears fell down his face.

"Yellowfang try to save him. Ravenpaw I know you don't like Tigerclaw but I don't think he would do that to you"

"YES HE DID" screamed a sobbing Mistyfoot. Even though the world was blurry Ravenpaw could see blood on Mistyfoot not as much as himself but she had blood. Ravenpaw felt ferocious they tortured her too. "I WAS THERE THE DAY ON THE SUNNING ROCKS TIGERCLAW KILLED REDTAIL. OAKHEART WAS KILLED BY A ROCK SLIDE. RAVENPAW SAVED MY LIFE TODAY. HE BROUGHT ME HERE TO CONVINCE YOU. RAVENPAW ALLOWED TIGERCLAW TO ATTACK HIM IN ORDER FOR ME TO TRY AND ALERT YOUR CLAN" Mistyfoot screeched. "TIGERCLAW IS A MURDER. HE BROUGHT BROKENSTAR" she yowled.

"Why you little" Tigerclaw growled he launched himself at Mistyfoot.

"TIGERCLAW DON'T TOUCH HER" Bluestar screamed. She flung herself at Tigerclaw angrily.

"Whitestorm and Lionheart escort Tigerclaw off our territory. Take Firepaw and Greypaw as well." Bluestar ordered. Ravenpaw felt pain seer though his body.

"Ravenpaw I'm sorry. I should have believed you. I will never forgive myself for what happened to you." Bluestar meowed she look horrified. Ravenpaw started to loose hearing. He knew Bluestar was doing the dying apprentice ceremony. The world began to turn dark and the pain began to ease. The last word he caught was

"Ravenfeather"

What if Cinderpelt wasn't crippled by the monster and was able to tell Fireheart she loved him?

Fireheart raced through the forest. He felt as if he was flying. He wished he was.

"Cinderpaw will fall into Tigerclaws trap" He thought. Suddenly with a burst of energy he ran into the clearing. Delicate, beautiful Cinderpaw was sniffing the edge of the thunder path.

"NOOOOO!" Fireheart screamed. He dove at her and bowled her over. She landed on the grass just as a monster rolled by.

"Fi-Fireheart. You saved me" she panted smiling gratefully at him. Fireheart looked up panting. Shaken up he refused to answer. He almost lost her. First Spottedleaf now almost Cinderpaw.

"Why? You could have been killed?" Cinderpaw meowed. Fireheart looked away.

"Because I'm your mentor" he replied. Cinderpaw moved closer to him. She knew he was not telling everything.

"Annnnnnndddddddddd" she asked. Fireheart looked her up and down. She would be made a warrior soon. Her assessment would be soon so it would not be that weird….would it.

"I er-" Fireheart shuffled his paws awkwardly. Cinderpaw rolled her eyes and sat her back to him.

"You know I like you too right" she purred. Her eyes where angled to the ground. "Its not weird to like your apprentice Fireheart…as long as they like you back" she glanced at him her eyes glimmering.

"Your playing with me aren't you" Fireheart meowed angrily. His heart lifted however. Cinderpaw stood up and faced him.

"Your playing with me aren't you? Of course I am" Cinderpaw meowed mocking him. She suddenly busted out laughing and fell the ground laughing hysterically. Fireheart sighed. All hope gone. He liked Cinderpaw a lot. He loved it how she was funny and always hyper. "wait you do like me don't you?" Cinderpaw suddenly asked standing up.

"N-No I don't like you" Fireheart meowed looking away hurt. Suddenly he felt Cinderpaw lick his cheek. He looked at her in shock.

"Good because I love you. Not like. Love" she whispered. Fireheart's heart suddenly sprang up. He nuzzled her lovingly.

"Cinderpaw you crazy she cat tricking me like that. I love you too" He meowed.

"Lets go collect those herbs for Bluestar how about that. Just the two of us" he purred. Cinderpaw purred back in response.

Moons later

Cinderheart lay on her side beside Fireheart. She sighed happily. Her dreams had all come true. Fireheart was her mate and she had given birth to their first litter of kits. She watched as Mistkit, an orange and grey she cat paid close attention to Yellowfang as she talked about herbs. She and Fireheart knew she wanted to be a medicine cat. Flamekit an orange tom was play fighting with his sister Stormykit. She was grey with a patch of orange on her head. Cinderheart though to herself that she was grateful that they where not all toms. Imagine having to control 3 rambunctious Fireheart's. Sandstorm was handling it well. She was hurt at first but later remained friendly with Fireheart and Cinderheart. Sandstorm and Dustpelt had also became mates.

"Mooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmm. When can Maplekit and Willowkit come to play" whined Flamekit. Cinerheart and Fireheart let out a purr of amusement.

"They where born a moon ago Flamekit. Their not as strong as you" Fireheart meowed.

"HA see Stormykit I told you I was strong" Flamekit boasted jumping toward Stormykit. She let out a squeal and jumped on Cinderheart in fright.

"Calm down Stormykit." she purred. "Now go teach that Shadowclan warrior a lesson" Cinderheart continued putting Stormykit on the ground.

"Thunderclan always wins Flamekit so give up" Stormykit meowed. Cinderheart and Fireheart purred. Closing her eyes Cinderheart tried to imagine what life would be like if she was hit by the monster.

Lame excuse for not writing: A dog ate my computer -_- told you it was lame

Jayfeather: That's a total lie dogs eat cats not computers

Dawnpetal: Told you it was lame

Scourge: Who's this Cinderpelt and where can I find her?

Dawnpetal: o.O

Scourge: she sounds kind of cute

Jayfeather: She's a medicine cat mouse brain you CANNOT LIKE HER

Dawnpetal: …

Scourge: Looks who's talking

Dawnpetal: Shut up you two. Any how ya I am sorry I did not post in a while. I do have a life too you know…Okay another lame excuse

Jayfeather: Your probably going to promise that you will write more often and break that promise too

Dawnpetal: I will TRY really hard to work on What if and My last chance and my other stories more often.

Scourge: Promise? :}

Dawnpetal: Promise

Jayfeather: Your going to break it

Dawnpetal: Shut up because I know what you did last Friday

Jayfeather: o.O

Dawnpetal: But in all seriousness yes I am going to try to post more often and I will try to write in better detail!

Jayfeather: Remember to R&R&R

Scourge: And as always thanks for reading