Hey all you people,
Thank you for your constant support and reviews, especially FanFicFan13, who so kindly reviewed the following:
... Really. And you think MY writing sucks?I could be abrupt and mindless like you and flame this like you flamed all mine (i.e. "You SUCK") or I could give you a review kinda like this: OH MY GAWD OH MY GAWD OH MY GAWD! THIS STORY IS AWESOMEEE! SQUEAL!1!Personally, I'll go for the former.Annabeth and Percy are OOC. Very OOC. Percy does not say "it is". He's much too Seaweed Brain-ish for that. And please note that they don't say "mum". Rick Riordan is American, after all.Your spelling and grammar isn't the best. Wait. This is no time for CC. I meant:Your spelling and grammar stinks. There's a space after the end of a dialogue, you know.Why would Annabeth be so mad and then suddenly she's all subdued and stuff? Way too fast-paced.Geez. You think MY writing sucks? I still can't believe how you can say things like that.~FanFicFan13~
I am really grateful to FanFicFan13 for giving me this happy moment in my life and I recommend you go and read his stories, because they (insert word here).
Have a great day!
xoxo,
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