So this is an author's note. Actually, it would be correct if I called it an 'author's plea for help'.

I don't like this; posting a 'chapter' - if it can be called one at all - dedicated to asking for help. But it's the only way I know that can somewhat ensure I get the right kind of help.

What I'm trying to say is that I'm stuck. Not in the author's block kind of way. I know exactly what is going to happen. I'm nearly done with the next chapter. My problem is the 'Do you guys even understand what I'm trying say' kind. Right now, I have no one to bounce ideas back and forth. I have no detailed analysis of my work so far. I don't even know whether you guys even like Satsuki! And she is supposed to be one of the major characters!

So I need a beta reader...

For all 6 chapters so far. Preferably one who likes what I'm doing here. However, instead of correcting grammar and the like - I'll do that when I have nothing better to do - I want you to dissect each scene like an English professor on caffeine and point out what works and what doesn't. What needs more explaining and what has been over-explained.

So if any of you are willing to help me you know who to PM.

It's me by the way. PM me.

'Cus, you know, this is my story.

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