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Tobias' POV
I woke up the next morning much earlier than usual, about 5 o'clock to see Tris in the same position as she fell asleep in. I'm so happy she is mine because I don't think I would be able to survive without her. And I don't care if it sounds cheesy because it's true.
I felt her slowly awaken as she squeezed tighter to me. I returned the hug and she looked up at me. She was so beautiful, even if she wasn't to anyone else, she was to me.
"Hey." She whispered into my ears.
"Hey beautiful," the only reason I called her this is because she is beautiful," are you hurting?" she slowly looked away from my eyes and I felt her nod against my chest. I could help but feel guilty. So I sat up urgently and looked at her.
"Tris, is there anything I can do? I feel really bad? I'm so sorry." So many more things were rushing through my mind. I cant believe I hurt Tris just for my pleasure.
Tris POV
"At this moment Tobias, I just want you. And just because I hurt doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the rest of it." She looked back into my eyes and I could feel her smiling. That's when we started to kiss. Deep and passionately and it made me feel like there was nothing to worry about. And I climbed onto tobias so I was facing him and could kiss him straight on. I could feel his tongue against mine, and although I only felt this for the first time a couple of days ago, it felt like I had known it my whole life.
Tobias started to tickle his way up my back whilst we rolled over, like little children giggling and whispering to each other. And as the kiss depend Tobias started to moan my name. It made me feel amazing and it made me so wet. He started to kiss my neck whilst tickling my hips and I could feel all the butterflies built up in me. "Tobias," I moaned," I love it when you whisper and moan my name."
"Tris, I love it too."
All of a sudden there was knock at the door." Maybe if we ignore it, they will leave." Tobias said hopefully. And the knock continued. "Stay here ill get it." I said jumping out of bed hoping to return as quickly as possible. "Tris, you haven –"
"I'll only be a second Tobias stay there." I walked to the door and just before I opened the door I realised I didn't have my top on, just my black, silk and lace bra. I opened the door ever so slightly a popped out my head so whoever was at the door could only see my head. As I stood and looked I tried to work out who was there. But I should have worked out who wasn't.
Uriah, Zeke, Christina, Will, and the rest of our gang. Uriah spoke," Morning Tris," He tried to walk into the room, but I quickly stopped him," you can't come in!" I snapped.
"Why not Tris?" he said suspiciously.
"Because…" I couldn't think of anything to say and I kind of stood there awkwardly and saw all there smiles creeping up on their faces.
"Well, what are you guys doing here?" I heard tobias speak behind me as he approached the door, topless but luckily he put on pants.
As he opened the door, I stayed behind it as he chucked me a dressing gown so I could cover up as he could see me stood there in my bra. As he appeared at the door, everyone's faces seem to be covered in more smiles.
"Four, we would love to leave you to your business, but were going to crash Amity's fun fair for a laugh. We wanted to invite you and Tris." Zeke said trying to contain his laughter.
"Shall we go Tris?" I walked out to the door way in my dressing gown and I thought I had something on my face because everyone has the biggest grins on their faces.
"Yeah sounds fun! But was there really need to get us up this early?" I said confused
"Well, we don't want to be caught by Eric. He would most likely explode." Zeke kind of said in-between laughs.
"Ok, then we will get ready and be down by the train in 15 minutes."
"Bring your swimming costume!" I wondered why but I didn't decide to argue. And with that we shut the door and me and Tobias went and got ready.
I left my Bra on because it gave me some confidence and chucked on a light top and a pair of skinny black jeans. Tobias wore a pair of black jeans and a black v-neck top that showed his muscles.
"Every girl at Amity, is going to be all over you in that top, showing all your muscles like that," There was a slight tone of jealousy in my voice, as I rubbed my hands all over his chest.
"But you're the only one I want over me Tris." He said winking at me. we laced our hands and walked down to the train. Everyone was stood there looking at us, with the same faces they wore earlier whilst stood at our door. Then we got a series of catcalls from them, teasing us about how they found us this morning.
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As we sat on the train waiting to arrive at Amity, I was sat on Tobias' lap facing him leaning on his shoulder, I was kind of tired so drifted off slightly. Although I wasn't talking in the conversation between Zeke and Tobias, or taking it in, I could still here it. I could feel Tobias' voice against my hair.
Tobias' POV
"Is Tris asleep?" Zeke asked quietly.
"I think so. Why?" I was a bit curious into why
"Why she so tired Four?" he gave me a massive smile and I realised what he was getting at but I chose to ignore it.
"Well, you came knocking on our door at 5am?" I casually said.
"Yeah, that's only 1 hour earlier than you have to get up normally Four? What did you and Tris get up too?" luckily everyone on the train was spread out over the carriage so no one could hear us. I just looked down to Tris and stared at her perfectly blond hair.
"Did you…?" and I just looked up at him, "FOUR!
"SHHHHHHH! I don't want everyone to find out, not for my sake but for Tris'"
"Well, not to rain on your parade, but when we turned up this morning, and came back down here to wait for you too. We kinda discussed our ideas about what we thought went on.."
"You What?!"
"Its fine mate. Everyone's happy for you!"
"I feel kinda' bad though, cause I don't think Tris enjoyed it, i think it hurt her" I said looking down at her to feel her breathing on my neck, still asleep.
"Well it would. She's an abnegation s-"
"She's a dauntless." I corrected him.
"Well she's from Abnegation, so I take it you were her first. So it would hurt either way. Anyway I need to go speak to Marlene." With that he walked off and sat at the other end of the carriage with Marlene. I felt a rush of relief because even though I hurt Tris, it would have hurt her anyway.
I woke her up by lifting her chin with my forefinger and thumb and kissing her. She looked at me and then whispered in my ear," I love you Tobias."
"Not as much as I love you Tris." And we kissed again but for longer until we got a series of catcalls:
"Get a room." From Uriah
"Maybe we should have left you two to it this morning," from Zeke. And then a lot more followed after from everyone. And I then I broke away from Tris looked out the window and saw us drawing closer to Amity.
Tris POV
After hearing Tobias and Zeke's conversation I cant wipe the smile of my face. A) because he's not ashamed to talk about me to his friends and b) because he really does worry about how I feel.
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When we got to the fair ground, we definitely looked out of place. But because we were at Amity as long as we didn't disturb anyone, we would be ok. I've never seen so many colours and flashing lights in my life. There's Ferris wheels, roller-coaster, massive balls of bubble-gum pink candy floss on sticks and a swimming pool. Because it was quite hot outside today I couldn't keep my eyes of it. I don't think any of us could. This is why they told us to bring our swimming costume, and the more I think about it I don't want to get in. I barely expose myself to Tobias let alone all our friends.
Tobias could tell I was worrying and pulled me out of our group.
"You don't have to go in if you don't want to."
"I think I should."
"Why? You don't have to prove anything to anyone." I know I didn't have to prove it to anyone else, but I did have to prove it to someone.
"I have to prove to myself." I could hear the others arguing over what to do next.
"No, you don't. Let's jump in, in our clothes!" Tobias said with a thrill in his voice.
"But Tobias what about the oth-" and before I could finish what I was saying he grabbed my hands and laced his fingers with mine and started running at the swimming pool. Once I felt the water hit my skin, I felt so refreshed. I felt Tobias' hand clasp around my hips because he knew, I couldn't reach the bottom or swim. When we bobbed our heads above the water we broke into a kiss. But before we could even get started a series of splashes followed.
Everyone else had jumped in, in their clothes. I couldn't help but laugh. Tobias looked into my eyes and locked them there. His deep navy eyes made me want to melt in his eyes and forget who we were with. "Tris, I don't mean to break the moment, but your tops see through." He said whilst laughing. I looked down and realised it was. You could see my bra straight through it. My face went bright red. Tobias pulled me to his chest to hide me.
"Why were you looking Four?" I had to call him Four in public because no-one else called him Tobias.
"I couldn't resist. Your so beautiful." I buried my head in his neck.
"What am I going to do. I can't let everyone see." He took of his top and handed it to me. I felt guilty because he probably didn't want to take his top of but he wanted to protect me.
"Tobias, put it back on you don't have to." He shook his head and put it over my head. And then he ran his fingers through my wet blond hair.
Tobias' POV.
I gave my top to Tris for two reasons. 1) I knew she barely let me see her half naked let alone all our friends and 2) I couldn't bare the thought of all the other guys seeing her like that.
"Did Tris forget that if she jumped in her clothes her clothes, they would go see through?" Zeke called.
"It's not for her benefit, but for mine Zeke."
"Why's that?"
"Couldn't let any of you see her could I? She's mine!" I shouted back as they were a little distance away, but close enough to see. I turned around to Tris and kissed her on the lips. It only lasted for about 5 seconds until we swam over to the others. We did have a good time in the pool for about an hour until we all climbed out. The girls wanted to go get Candy Floss and go in the fun house, so we left them and headed for the roller-coasters. But before I had one last word with Tris.
"Let me come with you?" she said pleadingly
"No, Tris go with your friends. You don't have to spend the whole day with me." although I wanted her to stay I know she wanted to be with her friends.
"I want to stay with you."
"Tris, go with Christina, you know you want to. Ill be fine."
"Ok, promise me one thing."
"Anything." She closed the gap between us and whispered into my ears so no one else could here.
"I can spend the whole of this evening and tomorrow, with you and only you Tobias."
"I couldn't think of anything better." Then she ran off. Her wet blond hair falling down her back, and my black top falling just above mid-thigh.
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Tris POV
On the way back from Amity, Everyone was dry, besides the girls hair. We all had such a good time at the fair, it was like we didn't even belong at Dauntless.
I was cuddled with Tobias. Will and Christina, Zeke and Marlene and to my surprise Uriah and Lynn were all sat together talking. But It wasn't every day conversation. You could see them whispering into each other's ears like me and Tobias do. I rested my head on Tobias bare chest and place my hand on his abs. And we both fell asleep.
Tobias' POV
I woke Tris up when we were almost at Dauntless and picked her up, placing my hands on her butt and walking to the carriage doors, I let the wind blow her hair till I turned around and placed her down to jump.
When we all jumped out the Train and started walking back into Dauntless, when we saw the person we least wanted to see. Eric. He was stood with about 6 guard's behind him.
"So, what are all you doing outside of Dauntless?" Eric asked with a proud sound in his voice.
We all stood there silent.
"Who's idea was this?" again no one spoke. "Well I guess you're going to all explain to these guard's if you don't speak up." No one would be able to beat these guard's, I've never seen them before but they wouldn't be beatable.
"It was me." Tris spoke out. And then before anyone could say anything Eric had her by her arm, dragging her into the compound. We all tried to run after her, but the guards held us back. And before we could get past us she was gone.
Tris was alone with Eric.
Ok guys! Hope you liked this chapter! Sorry its quite long but wanted to fit it all in.
I MIGHT NOT CONTINUE WRITING.
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