Chapter Five Untidles
UR OLL JUST SAINTS y cant u just except jEsuss it wold mae ur life so much mor engoyable u would never haf to worr/ again

Now I am a saint? Honestly this needs to be pointed out: I honestly hate it when people include religion into their warrior stories, wanna know why? Because not everyone is the same religion as you, I understand for like Christians (like myself) you try to get people saved on a chapter or two, but making it a continuous thing gets annoying, especially if you can't spell the name of your so called savior.


Starpaw said "I..i….." she was so foncusded! (Foncusded- confused and focused?) These two cats had asked her to be their mates and what was she supposed to do? They we both handsome and everything, but bot had mates! And she loved them both! Firstar was so kind and he obviously liked her a lot. Graystripe was so funny and cool.

"!" said Starpaw ass (haha, ass I can imagine the assed being there) she ran in to the forest. It was too much she couldn't choose!

She run and ran and run until her paws her hurting her. Then she relised she crossed the broader. Oh no she though Shadowclan will get me. "What are you doing here?" said Blackstar she walked up.

"I'm sorry!" mewed Starkit "I didn't mean too!'

That's ok" said Blackstar. "No one's perfect." "No that's not true." Said Starpaw, offended. "StarClan is." "What do you mean?" meowed Blackstar.

"Well the give us all this help and stuff" said Starpaw. "Without them we would be lost." She said.

"I guess that's true" Blackstar said, "besides I didn't really mean that anyway."

"Oh really why?" said Starpaw. "because you are." (Blackstar meowed should go here)

'WHAT' YOWLED Starpaw jumping away Blackstar Tried to nuzzle her. "WHAT ARE O TRIG TO DO MOLE STRAEP ME?1?" (mole straep me? Molest me)

"e—" Blackstar started to explain, but, Starpaw was to quick

"no" she said "I don't need another tom after me!" "I got enough problems right now anyway!"

"but you're perfect." Said Blackstar. "you beat me in battle you HAVE TO BE "

"NO!" shitted (LOL!) Starpaw Again running into the forest. Tears rolling down her checks she was crying. 'it's too much" she though. "StarClan help me….!"