I'm so sorry for not updating in so long but I've been buried in family and school related issues but now, I must finish this! Get ready for the battle!
(And since I'm so late, even though I had lots of good reasons, I'm going to make it nice and long.)
-NuclearStoryteller
Just to make sure that all of you saw this...)
Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the show 'Ed, Edd'n Eddy', Danny Attonuchi, the producer, owns it.
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Solar Flare: An Ed, Edd'n Eddy Story
Chapter 7: The war with the Andromidan
"DIE!!!" He roared, powering up his cannons.
"Let's turn the tables on this guy!" Kevin said, appearing from the shadows.
Ed stood up from sitting down to trick the Andromidan leader and locked on.
"Fire!" Ed and Kevin commanded.
The rest of the gang (besides Double-D, he's working on the shuttle...) ran up right next to the two and locked on.
"Oh, no you don't!" The Andromidan said, emphasizing on the last word while thrusting himself over 5 miles away from the desolate ground.
They all just stood there in the cave, wondering what the heck just happened.
"Don't just stand there! Let's go!" Kevin commanded, running toward the exit of the cave.
They got out off the cave and stared into the sky. They didn't see him.
"I really want some gravy." Ed dumbly said out of nowhere.
"Well, lucky for you, the Andromidan leader is full of gravy and hot toast!" Eddy said, hoping to get Ed's hopes up.
"Gravy and toast? I don't remember my book saying that!" Ed exclaimed.
"Well then, lumpy, I guess that I know more than you!" Eddy lied.
"Am I interrupting something...?" Something said from above the cave.
It was the Andromidan leader, and let's just say he wasn't exactly happy. He was still in mid-air, and when he landed, he smashed the entrance of his home cave. "Since I'm one of the last of my kind, I might as well act like it, now prepare to die!!!" He roared.
Then, he began to show its true form. It began to look more organic than it was before.
Its 8 legs sunk into its abdomen and then 3 larger legs slowly grew out from it, then; a long neck came out the top of the abdomen and at the end looked like a sort of claw at the head. After that, a large blue light appeared at the middle of each leg, I guess you could say that it was a kind of tripod.
Then it began firing. A blinding beam came from the alien's head and dug into the ground, making a hole with a circumference of 10 feet, just missing Sarah.
"You fat head!" Sarah yelled, locking 10 missiles on him. She fired and failed to hit him. It simply disintegrated and revealed a violet-toned kind of force field; which only responded by wobbling for a few seconds.
"What the?" Kevin said to himself. After the Andromidan leader powered up, he finally woke up from gazing, dropped on the floor, and rolled away from the blast.
"Surprised?" He evilly asked. After finishing the sentence, he split his head into three heads and powered up again.
"Run away!" Ed commanded. They all ran, but had nowhere to run behind, for the alien had destroyed every boulder in sight.
"Just lock on already!!!" Sarah demanded, about to punch Eddy in the face before he grabbed it and nearly crushed it.
"I planned, remember?" Eddy evilly added. "Kevin, Rolf." Eddy calmly called.
"Yes, Ed boy?" Rolf asked.
"What?" Kevin asked, too.
"Alpha, squadron K.R.E." Eddy commanded.
"No way, man. I'm not--" Kevin was about to argue before a laser beam shot 1 inch away from his helmet and face.
"I'm still here..." The Andromidan leader said, before shooting another beam from one of its heads.
"Right now, I'd just say keep locking on!!!" Sarah commanded.
"Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!" Jimmy screamed, and fell on the floor. He was unconscious.
Sarah immediately looked over in Jimmy's direction and saw him, and the ground next to him that was flaming and giving off smoke.
Sarah gasped and then faced her head down, crying. Ed saw his little sister and saw her crying.
Ed simply gave a glare to the Andromidan leader. He glared back, powering up his three beams up as much as he could.
Everybody ran as far as they could, besides the three. (Ed, Sarah, and the Andromidan leader)
"My name is Klaskull, remember that in hell." The Andromidan leader calmly said, with a hint of anger.
"I will, but you'll be the one with the moldy toast and the green gravy!" Ed dumbly exclaimed.
"...What?" Sarah and Klaskull said, confused.
"Of course! Then your species has taken over Earth and eaten all of the gravy! So, that's why my gravy tub is full of bad gravy!" Ed said again.
"You know what, you're stupid, prepare to die." Klaskull quickly added, before powering up and shooting Ed's gun, melting it. "Agh! Why do the bad guys always miss in all of the stories!!??" He said, splitting his three heads into nine heads, two more heads emerging out of the sides of each of the three heads. "I'll never miss now!"
He shot all around the two, making a deep ring around them, 100 feet in diameter. He continued and the two just watched, not thinking what could happen, besides one.
"Uuauuuauauuuaaauuu..." Ed said, while closing his eyes, still standing up.
A minute later, the two were still watching the beams circle around them.
"What are you--" Ed said before being cut off by the ground shaking and the ear-drilling screeching of the lasers stopping.
"Run away!" Ed slowly and dumbly said, pulling Sarah out of the circle.
Then, the ground started sinking into the ground, at over a foot a second.
"Thought you could win, eh?!" Klaskull happily and angrily roared.
"Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!" Ed yelled, ignoring Klaskull, trying to grab the ledge of the higher ground-- he got it, but he couldn't pick himself and Sarah up, and fell into what seemed like an endless void, falling, falling, falling, and never stopped falling until the ground stopped falling, through the toxic atmosphere, killing the two.
"Muahahahaha!!!" Klaskull evilly laughed.
"Ed, wake up!" Sarah said, seeing that Ed had been 'falling asleep' for 5 seconds.
"Run away!" Ed dumbly said again, pulling Sarah toward the outside of the circle.
When they were only 30 feet away from the outside of the circle, the ground started to fall down.
"Somehow, I knew this would happen." Ed smartly but tiredly remarked, only 10 feet from the edge. The ground was only a mere 1 foot in depth.
Ed carefully flipped Sarah above onto the higher ground (how do you carefully flip somebody?) and he just jumped up, along with his momentum helping him.
"Help!" Ed called to the others.
"We're on it!" Kevin replied, seeing Klaskull power-up again. "Just watch out for the lasers!"
"Okay..." Ed said as if he didn't want to.
"Alright, Eddy, I'm going with the Alpha thing, okay?" Kevin said, looking at Eddy, then Rolf. Rolf just nodded.
"Alpha, B-2, squadron 8-5-2!" Eddy commanded.
Kevin and Rolf locked 8 missiles on Klaskull each and picked Eddy up by the feet.
Klaskull was busy shooting Ed until he finally got him, and knocked him out-- or possibly killed him.
"That's two down, only six to go." He chuckled. He looked toward the others and saw the three doing something that Klaskull didn't know of. "Trying to do a special move, eh?"
Kevin and Rolf threw Eddy toward Klaskull and Eddy locked over 5 missiles on.
"Fire!" Eddy ordered, and Kevin and Rolf fired 8 each and Eddy fired 6 missiles.
"You're never going to win!" Klaskull said, powering his 9 lasers up, opening his shield to fire.
"We're gonna win, alright! Just... you---" Kevin said panting, before the missiles finally hit Klaskull, he had what seemed like Electromagnetic lightning coming from his nine heads, and his body. He wouldn't move.
"Did we win?" Eddy said, looking to see what the others' responses would be. It was very calm, no wind, no sudden movements, no sounds whatsoever, excluding the talking.
"Let's make sure." Kevin said, right after that sentence, Klaskull fell onto the cold floor, blowing up dust and rocks, making more dust. When all of the dust went away, Kevin stared at the, what seemed like, dead Andromidan body, laying there, no motions or anything. "Or maybe I should check myself..." He locked-on his missiles; he had 17 missiles locked onto him.
"I was kidding... now help me..." Kevin demanded in an annoyed voice.
Sarah locked 9 on, Nazz locked 13 on, Rolf locked 20 on, Johnny locked 15 on, and Eddy locked 12 on; they walked back over 100 feet to make sure that
They looked very calm, and slightly happy, but no smiles were on their faces.
"Fire." Eddy said, firing his weapon right after he commanded.
The missiles were launched, hitting Klaskull with all of them, breaking him into pieces, causing him to make an explosion himself, reassuring the cul-de-sac members.
"Looks like we won, Plank!" Johnny cheered, throwing Plank into the air.
"Now, let's get to the shuttle, Johnny, pick--" Eddy was about to finish before Ed jumped up into the air like a dog, snatching Plank in-between his teeth.
"Ed!!!" Johnny exclaimed, chasing Ed while he ran towards the shuttle.
"Let's pick Jimmy up and, wait, when did Ed get conscious?" Eddy asked, confused by what he just saw.
Everybody else just lifted their shoulders.
"Whatever... just pick Fluffy up and let's go." Eddy finally finished.
Rolf picked Jimmy off and they were on their way to the shuttle.
30 Meters (90 feet) away from the shuttle...
"Only a little farther..." Eddy said, walking.
Sarah was holding Jimmy in her arms, with Jimmy still unconscious.
"Just walk around that boulder..." Kevin said, slightly tired from all of the walking and shooting.
They suddenly heard Double-D's voice, making them pause and stand still.
"Ed, no!!!" He whined, worried.
"Gravy!" They heard Ed say, thinking he was about to screw something up.
They suddenly heard an explosion.
"That better not be the shuttle!" They heard Johnny say from the other side of the rock.
"I believe it was..." Double-D moaned.
Eddy moaned, putting his hand to his forehead, wiping down to his chin. "We're doomed..."
Hehehe... I nice cliffhanger for all of you! I hope this is all enough for all of you! And remember, reveiws give me advice and may improve this story and/or my writing in the future in other stories!!! (I hope that you all liked the fact that it was longer than usual!!!
Come back next chapter to find out what happened to the shuttle!!!
One more thing... school is starting again and I won't have as much time as I used to, so please, don't rush me too much!!!
