Hi, Shainingu here. I have a few comments...

1) From writer to reader, please call me Brandi in reviews. Arigato.

2) To moonlitephox, who posted: I like the premise of the story. but the way that it's written takes away from what it could be. there are gramitical errors and words used out of context in the sentences.and sometimes a sentence is missing whole words altogether. if you can have someone else proof read your story before you post. I know it's time consuming but trust me it will help. You'll get more fans, more reviews as well. I know if this story is rewritten it will be one of the better stories on But keep up the good work anyway because at least your work is posted.... I know I make mistakes. A lot of them, but I don't really-- okay I care, A LOT. But see, I am only 13. So it is very common for a girl my age to have grammer and context errors! (Man, now I sound like a computer...)

3) And finally, a disclaimer... Inuyasha © of Rumiko Takahashi and Sunrise Company. Not me, even though I wish to own Inuyasha and Kagome... And the Bead of Subjugation...

4) I do accept flames, but... Don't critise my writing abilities. After I reread the posted story, I see a lot of errors... They really burn my eyes... But don't point them out, please?

5) Now I wish for you to read The Missing Girl, by me. It may be about Rin, but also Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship. And later on, Miroku and Sango's. And let others know! PLEASE!