ahh sorry for the wait, I've been really busy with school! . anyways I'm gonna get this up before I have camp so I won't reply to anything for a week starting Monday. Also if I change it to 3rd to 1st POV I'll say but it should only happen at the start so I can describe it better :) enjoy!
" Willowpelt, how are the wounds?" A cat mumbled, "Her wounds will heal, no infections so I expect her to wake up soon," a soft voice spoke. I blinked, my vision was blurry but soon I could see clearly. I lifted my head, but pain seared through my whole body as soon as I moved, "Hmm? You're awake? Great!" A small brown cat with grey eyes peered down at me. "Who are you? And where am I?" I mumbled, before sitting up ignoring the pain, "Oh yes! You're in the medicine cat den, because you got hurt fighting that fox. Might I add that was very brave of you! I wouldn't attack a fox by my self. You must be so strong! And then Stonedust, Echolight, Darkpaw and Clearpaw came and brought you to me, and my I was amazed you were still alive and then-" the she cat stopped for a second, and sighed " Sorry for rambling, I do that when I'm excited, anyways I am Willowpelt, the medicine cat for LeafClan!" Willowpelt exclaimed, before glancing back at me. I flicked my ear, "So. When can I leave?" I asked, "LEAVE?!" Willowpelt meowed loudly, she gaped at me, "What? Am I not aloud to leave," I growled, the fur on my back starting to spike up. "No,no,no,no! Of course you can, but you would be great for this clan! I mean you fought a fox yourself and have good hearing, so basically a good hunter AND fighter!" Willowpelt rambled.
(1st person to 3rd person)
Crowstar padded out of his den, and headed over towards the medicine den. As he neared it he heard Willowpelt rambling on about fighting and hunting? 'What is she on about now?' Crowstar thought before sighing and walking into the den.
Feather immediately noticed that another cat had entered, and she narrowed her eyes on a black tom with white tail, ears and back left paw. Willowpelt saw Crowstar, and perked up, "Crowstar! She woke up!" Willowpelt said cheerfully, "Willowpelt weren't you meant to tell me if she woke up," Crowstar sighed before glancing at the cat. Crowstar padded closer to Feather, "So, what's your name?" Crowstar said before sitting next to Willowpelt, "Feather. " Feather said, coldly, her eyes narrowed into slits. Crowstar paused, and Willowpelt, watched intently "Well I have a deal for you," Crowstar said, narrowing his green eyes on the Feather, "What deal?" Feather said slowly.
"If you become a member of LeafClan, we will protect you and you will not be cast out of territories, you will have a Medicine cat to take care of you when hurt, or sick and you will be trained by a mentor." Crowstar said and Willowpelt nodded along with what Crowstar had said. Feather paused for a moment thinking, 'If I join, then there will be fresh prey, I can learn how to hunt and fight easier, instead of just testing things out and using Cloverstar to help me. And then maybe I can get revenge on the cats that killed my parents' Feather thought bitterly, her eyes narrowing slightly, " Okay I'll join. " Feather said.
"May all cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather beneath the high ledge!" ( I couldn't come up with anything sorry!) Crowstar yowled, cats soon started to crowd around the clearing, "As most of you know, a few days ago a loner, fought a fox, to help Darkpaw and ClearPaw, and I have decided to offer her a place in the clan, she accepted so now Feather will become a apprentice, and learn the ways of our code." Crowstar said, some of the cats in the clearing looked shocked while others looked happy.
Crowstar signalled for Feather to step into the the clearing. Feather padded forward and stopped in the middle of the clearing, "Feather you have shown us that you're worthy of becoming a LeafClan apprentice. From this Day forward you will be known as Featherpaw, your mentor will be Frostheart. Frostheart you have shown yourself to be, loyal and a strong fighter, I hope you pass these skills to Featherpaw and teach her our ways." Crowstar meowed.
Frostheart padded towards Featherpaw, and licked her should smiling. Feather looked up at Frostheart, and smiled slightly. The cats in the clearing started chanting "Featherpaw!Featherpaw!" Feather blinked and looked around. 'This is my home now.' Feather thought, before following her mentor as Frostheart beckoned her over.
i hope this is okay! I don't know if I did the right thing for the apprentice ceremony, but I just used what I could remember ahaha! Anyways please review and tell me what I could improve! If you want your OC to be in here just tell me about it, and I'll give you Fred's at the end of the chapters I use! bye for now! Oh and, I'm thinking of doing some art of Feather? Would you guys like me to add them to chapters or not? :) THANK YOU FOR EDITING THIS FOR ME Cascade Of Raining Ice! 33
