Summary: Same scenario as other fictions, girl get sucked into favorite game…Only what if she was turned into something other than an Elf. I know bad summary. This is my first fiction…So please be nice and patient…--

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Now are there any questions about this story or any remarks on it

Inuace: Yeah, You need to be more descriptive in this story. In addition, don't be in a hurry to finish it. Let the readers enjoy the story.

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Okay…Anyone else.

SilverEyes18: I agree with Inuace, but I think you did a good job in describing, Diamond. He sounds cute! --

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Okay….Well lets get on with the story shall we.


To say the least I was glad to be going home, the only problem was, Diamond insisted on coming with me. If he even looks at me in a way I'm not comfortable with, I will hurt him bad.

(Normal POV)

Meanwhile, Jak and Daxter just had a "meeting" with Krew, who was going to blow up the metal-head nest, but doing so, it would destroy everything in it's way, including Haven City. Ashlen came just in the nick of time to get them too, because suddenly there was an explosion.

(Serena's POV)

As she and the ass walked to the slums there was suddenly there an explosion. "What in hell's name was that!" I exclaimed

"Not, sure" Diamond relied and continued, "But maybe we should check it out"

I suddenly remembered that Jak was going to go see Krew. "Shit" I whispered. Diamond looked at me curiously. "I know where to look. I'll see you later Diamond." With that I ran and jumped onto a zoomer, which thankfully had its keys in the ignition. I drove toward the Hip Hog Saloon to find Jak and Daxter.

Upon entering I found Daxter starring at a game machine.

"Who wants to bet I'll beat the head score." Daxter said

"Now this I've gotta see." I said Jak looked down at me and said, "Where have you been?"

"You don't want to know." He just shrugged at that comment.

"Okay Daxter, let's see what you can do." Tess said

"Stand back and watch a pro at work." He said generously

(I'm not going through the game part so, sorry)

"Great job Daxter!" Tess exclaimed

"Yeah, but there where real live metal-heads here they'd be begging for there lives." As he said this two large metal-heads came in

"Umm, Daxter", Jak began

"Not only would they be begging they's be…"

"Daxter", I saidpointing behind him.

He looked and said, "Jak, I think these trophies are still alive!"

Jak then shot both of them and said, "What are metal-heads doing in the city?"

I then stole Daxter's line and said, "Yeah, where's Sig when you need him."

Tess said "Krew sent Sig on a mission to open some door."

"Looks like we need to find him", I said looking at Jak, "let's get going"

We then went to the tower, went underwater, and found him in the underground passage.

"Hey, big guy" said Jak as Sig shot at us

"Don't just stand there, help me shoot these bad boys." He said then he said some other things as well. We then went through a door, only to run away from a giant metal-head, which looked like a scorpion, which fell into a crater-like hole. Then we had a puzzle to figure out.

"Come on Sig we're almost to the exit." Said Jak

"You cherries are pretty good", he said, "better than I expected. I believe our next move should be to bust in the metal-head nest and destroy the metal-head leader himself. Just you and me kid, what do ya say to that?"

"I believe, you've gotten yourself a new partner, right Jak", I said jabbing his side. Just then, the metal-head we had been running from, fell from the roof, onto Sig, who fell into an endless hole to his death.

"So, what's plan B", Daxter said


GoodMorningBeautiful2005: So what do you think? I'll get chapter 8 out by the end of the week.