Hey guy's what's up Im so sorry about the first chapter Ill re write it so it will make more sense. After chapter 8 Ill rewrite chapter one okay. Alright nothing else to say but let's get to the story
I didn't make Kid Icarus Uprisi...

Zake: *Walks in the room* hey everybody

me: noooo leave me alone go away

Zake: How's it going I hope you guy's missed me

me: no,no one missed you.

Zake: Yes they did,they must be waiting for me to piss you off.

me: You already are now leave me alone.

Zake: Never I will torture you and torture you mwahahahaha

Me: *pick's up phone*

Zake: what are you doing

me: *dails phone number* hey Rose can you come over for a sec

Zake: noooooooooo please don't let her come here.

me: *closes phone* to late sucker

Zake: NOOOOOOOOO

Rose: Hey everybody it's your favorite character Rose CherryBlossom. And the second character of link11747. Lol he got the idea of me when he found a rose in his garden XD.

Zake: He did not

Rose: Yes he did you can ask him.

Zake: *stomps over and pulls my collar* Is that true baldy

Me: *eyes get dark* WHO YOU CALLIN BALDY YOU LITTLE PIECE OF SHRIMP. AT LEAST I'M NOT 4'2" AND ROSE IS 4'6". I"LL TAKE YOU NECK AND WRING IT SO HARD THAT NO ONE'S GONNA BE ABLE TO PUT IT BACK! HOW DO YOU LIKE THAT SHRIMP BRAIN!

Zake: WHAT SHRIMP BRAIN HOW DARE YOU! HEY HOW ABOUT NEXT TIME YOU CAN INVITE ME TO YOUR BALLET RECITAL. AND AT LEAST I DON'T HAVE A PICTURE OF...

me: *covers mouth* Hey dude not in front of the reader's.

Zake: What thats not fair you told them my secret how come I can't tell them yours.

Rose: Because he's the author and you cant give out is secrets. On the other hand you are shorter than me XD.

Zake: Why are you all so mean to me.

me: Because you are a fake person hahahahaha

Zake: You know what i'm out of here *exits room*

Rose: That's right run coward. Anyway pay up you.

me: What do you mean pay up.

Rose: I helped you get rid of him so pay up.

me: *gives $20*

Rose: pfft that's it.

me: fine *gives $200 and put's head on desk* Im broke alright

Rose: That's better anyway he doesn't own KIU. Only he should get that picture off...

me: shut up with the dumb picture! oh yeah one more thing i'll be writing in first person from now on k XP

Viridi pov

I almost had him,I was so close to him why didn't I hurry. After the dark man grabbed me and took me away,I squirmed to get free. But he held on,his hands like the Prometheus chain. "I need more time with him please" I cried. He looked down at me and smiled with evil look "Too late little goddess should of hurried up." I continued to fight and squirm but he wouldn't loosen his grip. His hand didn't even twitch when I clawed him.

Maybe i'll ask for a 10 minutes instead of 5.

Flash back

After the world wen't black when the dark guy hit me. I woke up in my chamber the curtain's were drawn and the light's were out. I tried to call my children to turn on my light's but no one responded.I get up and head towards the curtain's. When I open them there's a man standing in the door. His face is hid by a mask so I can't get a good look on him. "Who are you and where did you come from." He smiles at me "Come on you don't remember me" He holds up a pair of white angel wings "you punched me". I was going to flash back but,come on how could I forget. I smile at that "oh yeah that felt pretty good". He smile's at me even more which creep's me out even more. "How did you know I wasn't the real Pit anyway." I roll my eye's and put my hand's on my hip. "Well it's pretty obvious 1. Pit hates broccoli 2. Your hands were to hard and 3. You didn't ask for my permission to come to MY TEMPLE!" I yell out the last part because he doesn't seem to be listening. He take's out a watch and check's the time "Well Pit is gonna be hear in 15 minutes you have 5 minutes with him before I come and pick you up. Understood" POOF He disappears in a black cloud leaving me in a confused state. He left a note on the floor and I pick it up and read the content's 'this maybe the last time you see him'.

Last. Time. I. See. Him. what is that supposed to mean. If this is the last time I see him I'm gonna have to make an impression. I put on my best dress which has pink all over and let my hair loose. I use my powers to make my teeth pearly white (even though they all ready were). And head outside I change the view to cherry blossom which makes it match with my gown.

Flash back end

And thats what happened before I got taken away. Well I cant get free of his grip so might as well sit still.

Next thing I know i'm in a weird machine. It looks more advanced then anything i've seen. Even the aurum don't have technology like this. The man sits me down in the seat in front of him. Probably so that he can keep a watch on me. We're in the machine for 20 minutes. He doesn't move to take of his helmet or anything. He just sits there watching me,which gives me the creeps. I decide to check out the machine and see how it works. to my left there was windows but they wouldn't open no matter how hard I tried.

To the right there was a door which had a sign that said 'cockpit room'. I have no idea what that meant so I decided to just leave it alone. After what it feels like an hour a bump disturb's me from falling asleep. The dark man gets up ,comes over to me undoes the belt around my waist and helps me off the chair in a gentlemen style. "Well look who decided to be nice" I scold him. He leads me to the door which opens by itself. "Hmm so classic even my door's can do that" I think to myself. When we get outside I see a bunch of humans running around doing what it look's like a setting up a party. One off them (which looked like the leader) was being followed by two more in white robes which had sword's in there hands and there heading straight for me.

I was going to end it there buuuuuuuut I decided that was to short. ok moving on XD

While the three men were heading towards me the dark man grabbed my wrist and started running towards a elevator.(Viridi knows what elevators are because she had some in her reset bomb factory) He click's on the 25th floor and the elevator goes zooming up. After we get to the 25th floor he drags me to a dark room."You'll be staying here from now on. There are clothe's in the closet and lunch will be in 01:00 hour's" He press's a switch that illuminates the room which is full of plant's. I feel right at home as soon as I step in the room. "What is this your place" He turn's around and start's to leave. "Welcome to Vortex HQ".

And done Sorry about it taking so long I'm not getting that much reveiws probably because of first chapter is messed up.

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