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I AM SOO SORRY!
I WRITE THE CHAPTERS A DAY BEFORE I AM SUPPOSED TO, SO I USUALLY ONLY PUT THE REVIEWS I GOT THE DAY BEFORE! I am soo sorry!
I mean, like now, I will be writing this through Wednesday, and I just now got BUTLERPHAN666's letter of complaint that I didn't answer her plea, and I am soo sorry!
I hope you can forgive me.
And my sister is laughing to hysterics because of all the mistakes I made in the fourth chapter. I just have to say, that I typed it on a laptop and I hate typing on laptops. I have written this story on 3 different computers in my humble (snort) home, and what I would call the worst would be that stupid laptop. Like, I wrote the last of chapter seven on a laptop, and I am not too happy about that. I just want to apologize ahead of time if my grammar is all messed up. Just blame it on the laptop, even though I am not typing on the laptop at this moment.
Oh, and before you pull out your .9mm and shoot me into oblivion, I just want to make known that I am going to kill of one of the main characters, all because I can and that I want it to be deeper. I know it wont ruin the plot, because I already know what to do for the next, like, ten chapters (this will be a LONG story) and it will be successful.
You know you love me, so let it be known (review. I just love to brag to my sisters that I have whatever the high number of reviews I have and rub it in their faces) and I will be eternally grateful. You are all one big muse, and your spirit of reviews carry me on to write more.
That may have been a long authors note, but I just wanted to get it off my chest.
Hope you enjoy this chapter:
"One, two, three, four! Come on I know you can do better than that!" Hayden yelled at the dancing pair in front of them. They were working on the same steps for an hour, and both of them were getting tired
"No, no, no! I don't want you to do that! You are supposed to be feeling some love! Not hate! I can see the feelings you show to eachother and they aren't pretty! Get with the program Granger! You said so yourself that this is an easy topic for you!"
"Every topic is easy for me!" Hermione whined, "I am the smartest girl in the school ,
what do you think I am doing here if I could be off studying!"
"Oh shut up Hermione! You know that if you keep this up we will be in here for longer! Now just dance like a good girl or we will be in here through detention!" Malfoy hissed into Hermione's ear
"Wow, you called me Hermione!" Hermione whispered into his ear, "When did you start that up?"
"When I realized that being rude wont get you anywhere. Now, don't count your blessings right now! We have to get this done! I know you can do it!" Malfoy whispered, following what Hayden was telling them to do. It pained him to see that he was being nice to someone for a change
"what did I say about that! You don't do a move like that in this kind of a dance! You have to move your body in a circular motion! You have to move in a way where I think you are actually getting along! Where is that spirit I saw in you an hour ago?"
"I believe it is on a date with my pride," Malfoy growled, "What, with me dancing with you and him yelling orders at me, something must have been lost in all of this,"
"If you don't stop insulting me, what you will lose next is your manhood," Hermione said, reaching down and took hold of his crotch
"Excuse me, but I don't think that is a valid move!" Hayden criticized
"I hate you," Malfoy whispered, "But if I get angry, then we will be in here for another hour, and I am starving."
"Why do men only think of food?" Hermione asked, "It will only make you fat,"
"What may be the death of you may also help you live. Did you ever think of that?"
"Of course, I am just saying that if somebody doesn't take fact that the thing that can be a pleasure can also be their downfall. I mean, look at it, if you were to eat just enough to survive, there wouldn't be any starvation or world hunger. Everyone would be at peace with each other, and every one would be in harmony. Hunger and food can cause mood swings and emotions strong enough to hurt someone wlse. Do you really want to get into something so… trivial?"
"Shut your mouth… your giving me a headache." Malfoy complained as he was supposed to dip her
"Congratulations, you finally got it. I suggest you either shower or get back to your dinning. Hermione, may I speak to you?" Hayden said
"Um… sure…" Hermione said as Malfoy continued to the shower room.
NOW IN DRACO'S POV! WOOT!
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What's going on? Why did Granger have to stay back? I keep thinking that there is something wrong, but I am to good to go back. I walked down the corridor, absolutely oblivious to what is around my surroundings. Bloody Gryfindor's, have no idea what the concept of reality is. Here I am, the better dancer, and yet she is the one who gets to stay behind for pointers. Wait… pointers… THAT SLUT! First she is all over and under Potty, and now she is getting that Canadian boy! Bloody little skank! What does she think she is doing trying to do? Get into bed with every single flesh on the earth? I mean, I didn't know she had it in her, and this entire time I thought she was a lesbian, but my gosh! I had no idea!
Just wait till father hears about this. Wait… father isn't to know. He already hates the bitches man candy, he will obviously hate her. Even though he hates her already for being… well just being.
"What the…?" I said. There, in the middle of the hall, was Muddy and Potty, going at it like muskrat love. The little whore!
"Oh! Sorry!" Granger said wiping her lips
"Don't apologize to him, Hermione," Potter said grazing her neck, "Just forget about him,"
"O…kay…" Muddy went back to her business… whatever she charged, while I just walked away. I had no business there and it wasn't something to get worked over.
"Over here Draco!" A shrilling cry mixed with desperate lust and agony called from behind me. I apparently had already reached the Great Hall. Imagine that.
"I saved you a seat!" Pansy said. As I look around, I notice there is not a singe empty spot around her.
"Where?" I had to ask. I needed to know what kind of twisted logic was lodged into her brain.
"Right under me, sweetums! Listen, pookie pie, I have already named the children! Demitri and Delora! I mean, isn't it fab? I know, I know, I am only a little young, but-" Pansy started. What was she talking about?
"What are you talking about?" I asked
"Well, remember during the summer when we had all that fun?" Pansy batted her eyes. She was up to something
"Um… What fun?"
"When you spent the ENTIRE week at my house while my parents were at one of their vacations, but we all know it was marriage counseling in the states, and you told me you loved me, and we-"
"Wait, I don't remember telling ANYBODY I loved them! I never have spoken those words! Not even to my mother!" I said. I knew it was a lie because I have never spoken those three words put together in such a way.
"Well, you may not have said exactally that, but anyway, I'M PREGNANT!" Pansy bellowed for all the world to hear
"What? With who's baby?"
"Yours silly! And it's TWINS! A girl and a boy, I believe. Well, my mom was going to take me out of school but I said no! I needed to stay with the father. I didn't think that she would say yes, but she did! I am due in four months!" Pansy giggled. I didn't know what to say
"Are you absolutely sure its mine?"
"Yes!"
And then the world became a big black world of darkness
Her hands where around my waist, I moaned in happiness. I wanted more, and she gave it to me. Her lips were locked with mine, she was on top of me. I deepened the kiss, hoping that maybe she would let me go on. I turned it around so I was on top. Her hair was so soft and smooth, her skin was softer. I turned to her and whispered sweet nothings in her ear, kissing her neck and shoulders. It was rushing to me like blood in my veins. The scent of her skin soothed me into a trance where I can think no more. We were both in pain, yet we felt the same. "I will always love you," the words filled out of my mouth, coming straight from the brain
I woke up with a start. My body was sweating, and I cant remember what has happened in the last twenty four hours. Who was the girl I was dreaming of? I cant put my finger on it, but she is awfully familiar. Maybe she is one of my mom's friends daughters that came to visit me for Christmas break. It was as clear as day, but I cant remember what was happening to me.
I opened my eyes, for real this time. I had refused to open my eyes earlier, fearing that my wishes wouldn't be the one staring at me. it was Hermione granger who was settled next to my bed.
"What are you doing here? I thought I told you I never wanted to see you again?"
"You didn't. you just said I was annoying" Hermione defended herself. "You were out cold for about a week… you know? What, with a gash the size of England on your head, we thought you would be dead!"
Oh, now I remember. I was unconscious because of stupid pansy. I just really wanted to think, but nobody can really think when they are victimized by their ex girlfriends.
"What happened? Why do I have a gash on my head?"
"Well, you passed out and hit your head on the edge of a table. I ran to you and Harry thought you were out to get me so he hit you with a curse, causing you to be rammed into the closest wall where you didn't miss a single table or chair in your path. There was blood in every direction and Harry had to serve detention for the rest of the week! And to top it off, Pansy thought you were dying so she put some weird charm on you, but it didn't work because you were levitating in the air for about ten seconds. It was a good levitation charm, but after she freaked out and you reached the ceiling, you were dropped, and everyone thought you were dead by then."
What the? I am thrown, flown, and cut and this was all when I was passed out.
"You ok, Malfoy? You look kind of pale,"
"I am fine, Granger! Now, get out of my room!"
"I already have an idea for the end of our dance! Do you want me to show it to you after you get out?" She asked me, but not in a mean mocking way. A… sort of nice way.
"I am fine, but I rather you show it to me after I get out. Now will you please get out of my room?"
"No can do good buddy! I mean, what would you do without me? You would be so lonely,"
"Better than being with you, that's for sure!" I said. I swear, Granger needed to take a hint.
"Leave Granger! I need some time to think by myself." I said. It was true, because I didn't need someone luring over me when I have to think about… children
"I can't! Don't you see? I have to stay with you until you get better! Dumbledore assigned me as your tutor. I can't just walk up and leave! If you understood for just one second, then maybe we can get something done. I have all the homework for you from all of our classes, including dance and Care of Magical Creatures, with all the footnotes and highlighted selections that will help you write the essays." She was talking and talking and talking. I couldn't make her stop
"Would you just shut up! Cant we just, I don't know, get through this step by step? Like, hand me all the things that are easy and we can go from there." Maybe we can get this done without fighting
"We cant do that. I will tell you what you need to do for every class, and then you can decide what to do. What I think of easy may be hard for you,"
"Whatever, just tell me what to do."
Granger told me that I needed to write five feet of parchment for Transfiguration on the difference between a grub and a worm; four feet of parchment for the ways you can grow a gillyweed without water for Herbology; four feet of parchment for Potions on the uses of limp root; seven feet of parchment of the history of magic in-between 1843 and 1856; five feet of parchment of the inhabitants on the Mystic River and what they do for Care of Magical Creatures; a map of the my career using the mapping book for Astrology; and listen to a song for an hour for dance.
"All this in one week?" I shouted.
"I think you understand that school is important, and that the Professors are just doing there job? Well, you have been out for a week but that doesn't mean that you can take off another week for doing the work. They said that two days after you wake up is when you are to finish the assignments."
"What! I am to work on all this crap and finish it in a stupid week! That's crazy!"
"Well, you are to stay in bed all day for two days, I think you can get it done. And I brought one of my CD Players for you to listen to the CD with the song we will use. I took the liberty of putting some choreography on the dances, but I still don't think we can finish this without your input-"
"Shut up, we can through this without your blabbering. I somehow think you can comprehend the words, don't you think?"
"Okay. Here is the work, I will just be hanging in the back."
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I didn't think work could be hard, but this is a killer! She just sat there, not helping me one bit, making me do all the work! And I had to do it all by myself! What is this world coming to?
"Granger, what is the inhabitants of the mystic river anyway?"
"Look it up! I am not going to hand you the answers whenever you want!"
"Whatever,"
I had already finished the Potions essay, and now I was working on Care of Magical Creatures.
Someone came in about halfway through the essay.
"What are you doing here?" Granger asked the person, "No visitors."
She closed the bed up, sliding the white sheets hanging from the wall all the way around the bed
"But I need to see him, it's urgent"
"No visitors. If he is bothered, then it would ruin everything. Get out or I call the nurse,"
"But I need to see him, I have so much to tell him!"
"Get out, Pansy. I don't think he wants visitors,"
"We'll let him decide now wont we? Drakie poo! Do you want me to see you?"
"He is asleep, I don't think you want to see someone asleep!"
"But, I NEED to see him!"
"Get out!"
Pansy stomped out of the room, not turning back and sobbing the whole way.
Granger opened the curtains and smiled, "I didn't think you would want any visitors when you are studying. Oh! It's getting late, I need to go to bed! I'll take your Potions essay and give it to Snape if you like."
"Um… okay…"
And she left, leaving me to sleep into deep slumber, even though I wasn't tired.
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So whatdya think? I am in Austin right now because my sister made it for MATH COUNTS, STATE. I think she will do good, because she has already won a calculator for even going. I hope she does well. My family is uber competitive and we all are in sports of some kind.
I didn't post on Thursday because that was my relax day, and on Friday is when we left. I am so sorry for not getting you this earlier but I just had to think of something up. It is a six hour drive from my house to Austin, so I should get a lot of chapters in. I am sorry, again, and I hope you liked the chapter. It is a multi-plot kind of story and I wont you all to get confused. It is a really hard to write story, so bear with me.
MY 100TH REVIEWER WAS HGBookworm! THANK YOU!
Kudos to all my many reviewers:
HgBookworm: I didn't think of any sport Hermione would be in besides swimming. I can't picture her lifting weights or wrestling, so I thought of her swimming
Angelbornnhell: I would be crying to if my butt was kicked almost daily by a strong male
Devil's poodle: like the lines? Well that's good because I am probably not going to up more jokes
NeVeRmInD2: I am not telling who I will kill off or who will kill them, but all I know is it is a main character that will die.
Lazy: Thanks! I love the dancing parts and I will soon make it good again.
Hawaiian-Rachael: Yep… but it is always a luxury to be evil… you get more POWER!
LadySerpent: I love the Star Wars movies and I even got to learn what will happen in the next one. There is this website that tells you camera shot by camera shot what is happening and I already know. I started crying after reading it, because it is so sad!
JewelBlossom: I needed to make a character or two out of my own, that way people wont complain that they are out of character or what ever.
Butlerfan666: everything I put in the story may be used to tell the future. Like in this chapter, I put that Pansy is pregnant, and I am an idiot for making her pregnant (I didn't make her pregnant, draco did, but you get the picture right?) I love it that you review a lot, that's awesome. You were my first reviewer
Laura: I hope you really don't die, because then you wont know what will happen next!
Butlerphan666: sorry I didn't put you on the reviews. I take the reviews I got the day before I post the story and then I put them up. Like, if you make a review about the 5th chapter I would put them on the seventh chapter. Or if you post a few seconds before I finish writing the chapter then you will be put up so I'm sorry
Lady-Delphinea: I am sorry you have to go to class, because school is dumb (but smart!) and I don't like school anyways so yeah.
Lauren: thank you I will try until it gets boring
Jackie: I hope you see what I will do with him!
Fantasy-princess09: that's okay, I just am happy that you are reviewing. What is your story?
HgBookworm: sorry I didn't get it b4 but that's because I don't catch on to things to quickly.
Aime: yeah I have seen the movies, but this wont have the same plot like the movie. I thought they were good too!
Laura: I am soo sorry! I had to go on vacation and all that jazz because of my sister but I hope you like this!
Tristanlover59: thank you for clearing that up. I watched the Gilmore Girls and I loved Tristan too, but Dean and Jess had more of the get go with her then Tristan, unfortunately.
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Serena B: I love salsa dancing because you use you feelings rather then talent. Like, if an amature (spelling?) started salsa they wouldn't feel the emotions that a professional feels because they haven't made the progress I hope they would. Don't think to hard on this because it may or may not make sense
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