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Fang pov:

I tucked my wings into the long slashes made in the Fancy (as Dr. M called it) shirt I

was going to wear on the date with Max. Every time throughout the day that I wanted to talk to her,

Nudge and Angel shooed me out of the room they were making her over in. They kept telling me that

it would ruin everything, I had no idea what that meant. I quickly slipped on the black jacket I was

going to wear, and then a leather jacket over that, just incase Max got cold.

I stepped out of my room, and shut the door behind me. Dr. Martinez had given me extra money,

so that I would be able to pay for everything, after I had spent all the money I had saved up to buy

Max a special bracelet. The lady who had helped me out had said that the stones were Amethyst and

Aquamarine, and the band was a crossover of gold and sterling silver. The woman had also said my

fiancé would love it. I knew I was tall and looked older than my actual age, but did I look that much

older? I walked down the hall and into the living room, waiting until Max came out. It took about ten

minutes until I heard Nudge pretend to be blowing horns and Angel called out excitedly, " Now,

pronouncing, the newly-made-over Maximum Ride!" Ella, who had been holding a sheet in front of

Max, let go.

I stood there, awestruck, and stared at Max. She looked SO beautiful! Her hair was pulled back,

and a cascade of ringlets showered over the sides of her face. Her dress was a sleeveless, sapphire

blue and a creamy-white streak, cut across diagonally. The skirt part of the dress was knee length

with ruffles at the bottom, and the back was cut straight across her shoulder blades, just above where

her wings were so that they wouldn't show. Her eyes had light and dark blue eye shadow, and a light

pink blush was spread across her cheeks. Tiny rhinestones decorated the sides of her eyes, and glitter

was lightly showered over her face. A small tiara was placed on top of her head of curls. Every stone

and charm was glittering. Finally, a sapphire, butterfly necklace adorned her neck, and sapphire

earrings dangled from her ears. How I knew about all this stuff, and the names for everything? Not

just the girls had to listen to Nudge ramble on about fashion and makeup.

" You look… very nice…" I wanted to say she looked absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way,

but the other girls were standing there. Nudge frowned at me, and her eyes narrowed.

" Max does not look 'very nice', she looks absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Stunning, perfect, and wonderful

in every way! Maybe, in your pig mind, she would be hot, because I guess no boy in the world has the

brains to know the difference of cheap and sketchy to glamorous! WE SPENT ELEVEN HOURS ON

DOING HER OVER, and all YOU can say is VERY NICE!!!!!!! Ugh! Boys are SO clueless!" She stormed

out of the room with her head held high, and Angel and Ella were soon to follow.

" Sorry, I was going to say that you looked absolutely gorgeous and beautiful, but every one was

around… and…" Max's eyes lit up and she stared into my eyes.

" … and it would be embarrassing?" She smiled at me, " I know the feeling."

" Let's just go now, I think that there are quite a few spies around here, listening." I took hold of

Max's hand and we opened the front door, to find six bird kids, and one human (Ella) tumbling into

the house from pressing on the now opened door.

" Sorry… we won't bother you any longer… have fun!" Angel smiled sweetly up at us. Angel, NO

FOLLOWING! Just stay at home with the rest of the flock and be good! Please? She started giving the

pleading Bambi eyes, but I shook my head no. Okay, fine…. She started giggling in my head.

What's so funny? Oh, its just Max is thinking about how incredibly good-looking you are in

that jacket.Well, I was fine with that. Max and I walked a couple blocks away from the houses and

neighborhood. I was about to jump into the sky, when she pulled me down.

" Um… I don't think that flying in a dress would work." She looked a little self-conscious, and I

squeezed her hand.

" It's okay, we can walk." We turned the corner, and headed towards the movie theatre. I made

sure that there were reserved tickets for Twilight, the new movie that almost every teenage girl was

dying to see. Nudge filled me in that Max really wanted to see it, so that was what we were going to.

At least there would be vampires.

Please R&R! I'll make the next chapter really quick, I didn't want to make this chapter too

long.