Okay so there will be some of brutality in this chapter. But other than that if there's anything that you want to suggest including OC's I will read and most likely respond to you or respond to the comment in my notes before or after the story. reviews and constructive criticism is allowed and encouraged.
Chapter 7: Unbound
(Soren's prov)
"NO, its not possible. Your... your the Daughter of the Death Angel" Soren yelled as Shadow's gem power activated, " Stop you wont be able to control it, the power will consume you".
(Pearl's prov)
Pearl stared at Shadow and remembered the Death Angel. ( The Death Angel, I only knew her by that name, to think that the Death Angel was obsidian. And that our new friend if her daughter. Rose was the only one who could stand up to her, and she nearly died each time.) "Shadow stop, Soren is right. You cant control that power, it like a ragging beast that kills all in it path." Pearl shouts as she sees Lapis run by.
(Lapis's prov)
Lapis rushes out as fast as she could to stop Shadow. Suddenly she hears a laser blast, and is swallowed by a blast from Pertidot's hand ship. "Ahhhhhhhh..." She started to scream but fell over and went silent. Shadow was finally finished and said "Obsidian Armor". She saw Lapis fall, stop moving.
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(Shadow's prov)
Shadow could barely control himself as a huge force of darkness builds up. In his mind he hears (Give up, let me take control) Shadow forced herself to stay in control. She let out a monstrous roar that echoed though the air as he said "Lapis". When she stopped and stared at Pertidot's ship. More dark energy this time black bull horns spout from her head trough her snow white hair, a tail with matching shad of black emerges from the base of her back/spine. Shadow drops her jaw to let out another roar as her teeth then become jagged and sharp and the skin and muscle on her check begins to rip so her jaw could extend lower, "RAAAAAAAAOOOORRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH". Her black tee shirt fell off in this transformation, leaving her with the bandages covering her breast. Shadow covers her eyes and hunches over a little as ripped and torn black demonic wings sprout from her back, dripping blood from them. Shadow struggling to stay in control hears the song that she asked Lapis to play. Lapis, no she has to help her. "Must help Lapis" she said to herself sounding very much like an animal not human. She saw another beam was about to be lunched at her, Shadow rushes past Jasper knocking her down. Shadow stops in front off Lapis and the other gems who had come to get Lapis out of there. "Jasper what are you doing, your supposed to kill them. I am so reporting this to the king." Pertidot said as she fires the beam on maximum power. Shadow uses her body as a shield and her wings to cover everybody. The beam hit causing a large explosion. That shred's the beach apart.
(Hematite's prov)
"Awwww, damn I really wanted to see who was stronger me or Shadow. Well better head back to home-world." Hematite said as she took a step forward, but stopped as she saw the smoke clear. "No way" were the only words she could say.
Okay two things, one Dante Watterson I know I said that Soren would fight this chapter but I thought this up and liked it, so put the fight up for next chapter. Also to make up for it the next chapter will mostly be about that fight. Also I need more OC, if ant of you want to submit one go ahead there only few no's like no love interest Amethyst, she is taken. But ant ways I need about six more. If I don't get any by chapter 9 or so I will make up more even though I am not good at it.
