I'm glad that people liked the last chapter I did as well.
I'm sorry about the O'Neill thing as I said he went home then in the next chapter I said he was on the base. That was my mistake and I'm sorry. O'Neill stayed on the base.
Everything that has happned so far has just been a prologue for the main part of the story. I will update as soon as I get three reviews. I know I have been hard on Jonas but a lot of people don't like the character so by being slightly horrible to him it fits in with what people want more. To any fans of his out there other than me it will start getting better for him soon.
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Earth
Jack, Sam and Teal'c stood on the ramp, in Sam's hands were files containing some of the information that the Kelownans had required. General Hammond had already spoken to the leader of Kelowna and they had agreed that the information that the SGC offered was sufficient to trade for Jonas Quinn.
"Are you sure that you don't want me to come with you Jack?" Daniel asked anxious not to be left behind again.
"We have already been embrolied in one argument with the Kelownans we don't need to get involved in another Danny." Jack said kindly knowing how insecure Daniel felt without familiar faces around.
"Just be careful. Make sure you bring Jonas with you." Hammond said
"Will do." Jack said before adjusting his baseball cap and leading Teal'c and Carter through the gate.
In a matter of seconds the three members of SG1 found themselves on Kelowna with several smiling diplomats standing in front of them.
"Hi." Jack said with a cheerful smile and a wave determined to prove that he could be diplomatic when he needed to.
"Have you brought the information that we asked for?" a woman asked. Jack was struck by her similarity to Daniel and imediately labelled her as a nerd.
"Yes it's here." Sam said holding up the folders. Jack groaned silently he was going to talk to Carter about showing what the other party wanted straight away.
"Give them to us and return to your planet we will send Mr Quinn to you." One of the men there said
"That was not our agreement. You said stated that if we gave you information you would release Jonas to us." Jack said his voise gradually getting louder.
"We require the services of the traitor for a short while longer just to verify the documents you have brought for us." the man said again. Sam put a warnning hand on Jack's arm knowing he was about to say something that he'd regret later.
"Fine. Return Jonas to us in an hour or I'll get my buddy Thor to come and zap him up." Jack said being as polite as he could manage.
"We will return Mr Quinn to you in an hour." the man said as Sam handed over the required information and Teal'c dialed up home.
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Jonas ....
It had been maybe 5 hours since they had last come for him when Jonas was dragged out of his cell once more. He knew that it was going to be worse this time as he was tired and very close to giving up all hope. He knew that if they questioned him too much then he was going to tell what they wanted.
"You obviously mean more to your coleagues on Earth than you thought Mr Quinn." the man from the previous night said
"Wha .. what do you mean?" Jonas said not sure what had happened.
"Just a short while ago your teammates brought us the military technology that we wanted." the man said.
"Why are you telling me this ?" Jonas asked trying to pull his brain out of the sludge it had gone into and back into working order.
"We need you to check the information they gave us before we let you go." the man said
"I told you that they didn't let me look at anything. How can I tell you wether the data is valid or not?" Jonas asked
"Just look over the information for me Jonas and you can go where ever you want." the man promised. The man guided Jonas forward towards papers on the table in the middle of the room. Jonas glanced over them imediately recognising them as plans for various weapons and propulsion systems.
"I ..I don't know." Jonas said
"I think you do Mr Quinn." the man breathed into Jonas' ear before twisting the young mans arm behind his back so hard that Jonas was surprised it didn't break.
"I don't know." Jonas said again.
"Do not lie to me Quinn." the man shouted releasing Jonas' arm and knocking the other man to the floor. Jonas caught his head on the table as he went to the floor and couldn't help but give a short cry of pain.
"I don't know." Jonas said again gingerly touching his forehead where it had struck the table, he drew his fingers away and could see the blood on them
"Stop lying to me Quinn." the man shouted and raised his fist.
The deputy head of the Kelownan secret police came to find his superior as the hour that Jack had given the Kelownans was almost up and Jonas needed to return to his planet of choice. He slowly opened the door of the room where Jonas had been taken and stopped dead at what he saw. The young scientist lay on one side of the room, his face was covered in blood, one of his arms was bent at an impossible angle. His t-shirt lay over to another side of the room and what looked like burn marks dotted his chest.
"What did you do?" he asked his superior who was sitting in a chair with his feet up unconcerned by the body by the wall.
"He lied to me. He had to be punnished."
"You don't realise what you've done do you. You've killed him, you could have started a bloody war with Earth."
"Throw the body back through the Stargate let them deal with it. As far as we are concerned a traitor is dead having paid for his crimes to the full extent of the law."
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Earth ...
"Why haven't they sent him through yet?" O'Neill demanded starting to pace once more.
"They will." Sam said soothingly
"Indeed O'Neill Jonas Quinn will be returned to us shortly." Teal'c said. As Teal'c said that the alrams began to blare, Daniel jumped and dropped the book he was reading looking round owlishly from behind his glasses.
"It's the Kelownans." the man at the computer teminal said.
"Open the iris then." Hammond said. The iris opened nothing came through for a few minutes then the event horrison rippled and somethingcame flying through. It rolled down the ramp and came to rest at the the bottom half on the concrete. SG1 hurried down the metal steps and stopped just short of the body. Sam covered her mouth with her hands in horror.
"Oh no." she gasped lying before them was the body of Jonas Quinn...
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What do you think of that chapter ?
I like it. I know I'm being realy horrible to Jonas but as he is dead now I can't be so any more.
If you want to know what happens next then review or I won't do any more.
I'm sorry about the O'Neill thing as I said he went home then in the next chapter I said he was on the base. That was my mistake and I'm sorry. O'Neill stayed on the base.
Everything that has happned so far has just been a prologue for the main part of the story. I will update as soon as I get three reviews. I know I have been hard on Jonas but a lot of people don't like the character so by being slightly horrible to him it fits in with what people want more. To any fans of his out there other than me it will start getting better for him soon.
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Earth
Jack, Sam and Teal'c stood on the ramp, in Sam's hands were files containing some of the information that the Kelownans had required. General Hammond had already spoken to the leader of Kelowna and they had agreed that the information that the SGC offered was sufficient to trade for Jonas Quinn.
"Are you sure that you don't want me to come with you Jack?" Daniel asked anxious not to be left behind again.
"We have already been embrolied in one argument with the Kelownans we don't need to get involved in another Danny." Jack said kindly knowing how insecure Daniel felt without familiar faces around.
"Just be careful. Make sure you bring Jonas with you." Hammond said
"Will do." Jack said before adjusting his baseball cap and leading Teal'c and Carter through the gate.
In a matter of seconds the three members of SG1 found themselves on Kelowna with several smiling diplomats standing in front of them.
"Hi." Jack said with a cheerful smile and a wave determined to prove that he could be diplomatic when he needed to.
"Have you brought the information that we asked for?" a woman asked. Jack was struck by her similarity to Daniel and imediately labelled her as a nerd.
"Yes it's here." Sam said holding up the folders. Jack groaned silently he was going to talk to Carter about showing what the other party wanted straight away.
"Give them to us and return to your planet we will send Mr Quinn to you." One of the men there said
"That was not our agreement. You said stated that if we gave you information you would release Jonas to us." Jack said his voise gradually getting louder.
"We require the services of the traitor for a short while longer just to verify the documents you have brought for us." the man said again. Sam put a warnning hand on Jack's arm knowing he was about to say something that he'd regret later.
"Fine. Return Jonas to us in an hour or I'll get my buddy Thor to come and zap him up." Jack said being as polite as he could manage.
"We will return Mr Quinn to you in an hour." the man said as Sam handed over the required information and Teal'c dialed up home.
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Jonas ....
It had been maybe 5 hours since they had last come for him when Jonas was dragged out of his cell once more. He knew that it was going to be worse this time as he was tired and very close to giving up all hope. He knew that if they questioned him too much then he was going to tell what they wanted.
"You obviously mean more to your coleagues on Earth than you thought Mr Quinn." the man from the previous night said
"Wha .. what do you mean?" Jonas said not sure what had happened.
"Just a short while ago your teammates brought us the military technology that we wanted." the man said.
"Why are you telling me this ?" Jonas asked trying to pull his brain out of the sludge it had gone into and back into working order.
"We need you to check the information they gave us before we let you go." the man said
"I told you that they didn't let me look at anything. How can I tell you wether the data is valid or not?" Jonas asked
"Just look over the information for me Jonas and you can go where ever you want." the man promised. The man guided Jonas forward towards papers on the table in the middle of the room. Jonas glanced over them imediately recognising them as plans for various weapons and propulsion systems.
"I ..I don't know." Jonas said
"I think you do Mr Quinn." the man breathed into Jonas' ear before twisting the young mans arm behind his back so hard that Jonas was surprised it didn't break.
"I don't know." Jonas said again.
"Do not lie to me Quinn." the man shouted releasing Jonas' arm and knocking the other man to the floor. Jonas caught his head on the table as he went to the floor and couldn't help but give a short cry of pain.
"I don't know." Jonas said again gingerly touching his forehead where it had struck the table, he drew his fingers away and could see the blood on them
"Stop lying to me Quinn." the man shouted and raised his fist.
The deputy head of the Kelownan secret police came to find his superior as the hour that Jack had given the Kelownans was almost up and Jonas needed to return to his planet of choice. He slowly opened the door of the room where Jonas had been taken and stopped dead at what he saw. The young scientist lay on one side of the room, his face was covered in blood, one of his arms was bent at an impossible angle. His t-shirt lay over to another side of the room and what looked like burn marks dotted his chest.
"What did you do?" he asked his superior who was sitting in a chair with his feet up unconcerned by the body by the wall.
"He lied to me. He had to be punnished."
"You don't realise what you've done do you. You've killed him, you could have started a bloody war with Earth."
"Throw the body back through the Stargate let them deal with it. As far as we are concerned a traitor is dead having paid for his crimes to the full extent of the law."
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Earth ...
"Why haven't they sent him through yet?" O'Neill demanded starting to pace once more.
"They will." Sam said soothingly
"Indeed O'Neill Jonas Quinn will be returned to us shortly." Teal'c said. As Teal'c said that the alrams began to blare, Daniel jumped and dropped the book he was reading looking round owlishly from behind his glasses.
"It's the Kelownans." the man at the computer teminal said.
"Open the iris then." Hammond said. The iris opened nothing came through for a few minutes then the event horrison rippled and somethingcame flying through. It rolled down the ramp and came to rest at the the bottom half on the concrete. SG1 hurried down the metal steps and stopped just short of the body. Sam covered her mouth with her hands in horror.
"Oh no." she gasped lying before them was the body of Jonas Quinn...
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What do you think of that chapter ?
I like it. I know I'm being realy horrible to Jonas but as he is dead now I can't be so any more.
If you want to know what happens next then review or I won't do any more.