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Thank you to all the people who reviewed. 8 reviews...and I only asked for 5. You guys are just amazing. Here are some people who I would personally like to thank:

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You are the people who would always review, and tell me how much you like my story. So, because they are always reviewing and leave really awesome reviews, I'm going to give them UNLIMITED cookies! And they get 10 cakes! See...this is what happened when you're a good reviewer! You get cookies and cakes!

And I know that the cliff hanger was really bad. I just wanted something to keep the story more interesting. I want this story to be a little longer than I expected it to be. And don't worry, they will go on their date...just not quite yet.

I think that's all I have to say...wait...yup. That's it.

So, introducing Chapter 7 of Fate: The Accident


Austin was plain out sobbing at this point.

Here he was, before with the biggest smile on his face, on his way to go on the perfect night with Ally...and then this happens!

He raced to Ally, and pulled her in close, examining her closely.

She was extremely pale, and was unconscious. She looked the same as when he last saw her, put it looked like she had been injected with poison. As he picked her up, she was as cold as ice, and still laid lifeless, not moving at all. She was so limp, Austin was afraid that she would even stand if she was woken. A few minuets of him still silently sobbing, and trying to wake up Ally, Mr. Dawson came running in, panic written all over his face.

He took one little look at Ally, and he was almost as white as she was. "WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!"

Austin carefully put her down, guilt bursting out as quick as a canyon. "I don't know...I just found her like this."

He walked over and touched her arm. "She's cold as ice...did you call an ambulance yet?"

And that's when the guilt finally exploded all over. "Shit...I didn't even think about that." He heard her dad starting to say something, but was already running down the stairs and ripping the phone off the stand, and dialing 911 as fast as he can.

"911, what's your emergency..." Austin spoke into the phone, and started spilling all the info he could produce. After he was done, the person on the other end said, "Thank you. We're on our way." He hanged up the phone, his heart ready to break at any second.

What could have happened to Ally? This wasn't making any sence what so ever. She was fine a couple of hours ago. She was acting like herself. She wasn't showing any signs of sickness before...it just wasn't adding up. After standing there for a good 15 minuets, he slowly went up stairs, ready to cry at the sight of Ally.

As he walked into the room, he saw Mr. Dawson sitting next to Ally, fussing all over her.

He got up and walked to Austin. "Well, the good news is that she's...alive," he looked like he was about the break out crying as well, "But the bad news is that she's getting worse every second. What did the hospital say?"

"They're on their way. They should be here any minute," Austin said while fighting back tears. But they were taking to long...

"Ok. I'm going to go down stairs and wait for them. Will you stay up here and watch Ally?" He rolled his eyes when he wasn't looking. That was such a dumb question! Not stay with Ally...yeah right.

"Sure thing." He nodded his head and walked over to Ally while he watched him leave out of the corner of his eye.

What the hell is wrong with him? He didn't even pick her up and put her on the bed? Some dad. He walked over to her and picked her up as carefully as he could be, and set her on her bed, and sat down next to her. He brought his hand to her face and moved her hair out of her face. He couldn't help it anymore. He closed his eyes, and started to cry again. This couldn't be happening...not here...not now! He looked up again, and wiped away the tears. He couldn't cry. He wouldn't. For Ally. He took a deep breath and looked at her once again before grabbing her hand.

"I'm sorry..." Austin started to say, but he was interrupted by some person coming in...with a gurney!

"Thank God." Austin muttered as he moved out-of-the-way, as more and more people came flooding in with bags full of medical equipment.

After what seemed like forever, they finally stopped fussing all over her, and put her on the gurney and headed out the room. He was right on their tail, right next to the last person in the line. Once they reached the car, they put her in the back, Mr. Dawson climbing as soon as she was in there. Austin started to walked over there, put someone put their arm in front of him.

"Sorry sir, you can't go in there." He had a real deep british voice...and smelled really bad. Austin tried not to puke.

"But you don't understand, I have to go in there..." He trailed off as he started to walk to the ambulance car again. The man walked in front of him again, and this time did a hard push, almost knocking Austin off his feet.

"Oh come on! I'm the one that found her like that in the first place!"

He just smirked. "Tough cookies kid. Get lost, before I'm forced to get the police."

Austin bailed his fist, but headed in the other direction, anger all over.

There had to be a way to get into the car. But knew it was too late, as he turned around and saw the doors close, Ally along with everyone crammed in the back, and drove off with the sirens blazing off, and Austin almost of the verge of crying again. Fighting back tears for the thousand time, he headed home. But he had a weird feeling that he couldn't explain. Like someone was watching him. Once he felt like he was far enough from Ally's house, he took a quick glance back, and saw that one man who was telling Austin to get back...following him?


He stopped dead in his tracks, expecting him to stop too, but saw him still following.

Once he reached him, he felt a hard grasp on his shoulder, and was forced to face the smelly man.

"Dude, what are you doing?" Austin tried to get out of his grasp, but he had hands made of steel holding his wrist so he couldn't move.

"What did you do? Did you give her any kind of medicine crap to make her like that?"

"Your crazy! Why on earth would you think I would do that to Ally?" What the hell was wrong with this man? Who was he?

"Who are you? Why do you care so much about Ally and me?" He put on a serious face, and the mans rotten face broke into an evil grin, giving Austin an uneasy feeling.

"You want to know why I'm so focused on killing that bitch?" His voice sounded of pure evil.

Austin backed away as much as he could from the mans iron grip. "Y-your focused on w-what?" Austin could barely speak.

"She ruined my life. If it weren't for her, I wouldn't be in this crap I'm in. You and her-especially her-better watch out. I'm everywhere." Austin was completely scared at this point. The man let go of his wrist an started to walk in the opposite direction.

What was he talking about? Was he the one resonsable for Ally accident? For her almost dying?! Why would he do that to her? Austin could barley stand at this point.

Still in shock, Austin turned around and sprinted towards the hospital.


I'm such a horrible person.

I'm always leaving you with cliff hangers! Why do I do that? Even I don't know!

I honestly did not expect this myself. I just went while I was writing. I'm so weird...

And sorry if you thought it went by to fast. Like I said, I wasn't really thinking as I wrote this...not the best writing strategy. Anyway, I still have no idea where this is going. You guys can give me ideas in the reviews. I promise the next chapter will be a happy chapter. And if I don't...you can kill me. But then think this...how will the story continue? HA! Got ya there!

So, 3 reviews for the next chapter! Only 3! I'm shorting it, but the more the merrier! And all that reviews get's an cookie! But as for the people that I mentioned on top, they will always get cookies. [::]

All reviews are awesome!

Thx ur awesome! :)