Stark

Stark leaned against the front gate waiting. When he saw the bus quickly approaching, he opened the gate. As the bus got closer to the gates, about a dozen demons stood in their way.
"Where the hell did you come from?" Stark yelled.
"No one gets in or out." One demon pushed Stark down.
Stark's, well Zoey's, phone started to ring and he pulled it out of his pocket.
"Hello?" he asked.
"It's Darius. How do we get in?"
Stark covered the phone and took off so the demon things wouldn't hear.
"The trapdoor at the East wall!" Stark whispered and shut the phone.
As he was putting the phone into his pocket, he ran right into Desdemona. She smiled wickedly and made a tisk, tisk.
"I think I'll have Rosemary torture Zoey right about now. What do you suggest, Stark? Fire, Water, Air, Earth, or... do I crush her spirit?"
"You bitch!" He spat at her.|
She raised her hand and smacked him across his face. He was about to say something, when she vanished. Literally vanished.
"Oh, Zoey. What have I done?" He thought aloud and was knocked out by a demon.

Zoey

Melantha, Rosemary, and I had stopped talking when we heard Desdemona approaching. We knew it was her because she muttered something about Stark and torture. That can't be good.
"You, girl!" She yelled at me.
"Me?" I asked innocently.
"You insufferable little bitch! Yes, you."
I stifled a smile. "What do you want?"
"Hmmmmmm... You tortured."
I gulped. Hum, what's going to happen to a girl that can control all five elements? I don't exactly know.
"Rosemary!" Desdemona snapped.
Dang, she's mean.
"Get the rope and fill up the tank." Rosemary looked at me sadly but did as she was told.
Uh, oh. I'm going to be drowned? A girl that can control water is going to be drowned? Rosemary came back, covered my mouth, and tied my hands and legs with rope. Great. Maybe I should have called water to me. Oh, well too late now. Desdemona hung me over and tank and dropped me in. It was so hard to breath, but after about a minute she pulled me back out. This went on for about ten minutes.

Stark

"She's suffocating!" Stark took deep breaths and sat on the floor with his back against the wall.
He put his head in his hands and kept taking deep breaths.
"I couldn't save her." He whispered over and over.
"Stark? You can still save her," Aphrodite said shakily.
"Aphrodite? But you- you, Darius, Stevie Rae, the Twins, and Damien..."
"You can see me?" She asked.
"What the hell do you mean, I can see you? Of course I can!"
"But I'm in the middle of a vision."
"Oh, I see what you mean."
"What happened to everyone?"
"Desdemona. That's what happened. She sent you guys to another House of Night to get red fledglings. Zoey got captured, I was knocked out, she's being tortured, Desdemona let loose millions of demons, all hell broke loose, and you guys are trying to save us."
"OK. Now that I know what's going on, I'll try harder. We can't lose either of you." Aphrodite waved and the vision ended.
"That was weird." Stark said as Aphrodite and Darius came running towards him. "I just saw you."
"What the hell do you mean, Stark? I just got here." Aphrodite put her hands on her hips.
"The vision you had. The one that said I could actually see you."
"Oh."

Zoey

I was finally put back in the cage and I could'd stop gasping for air. When I finally stopped gasping, I called the elements to me.
"Air, come to me. Go to Damien and tell him I'm OK. Spirit, come to me... Go to Stark. Tell him I'm OK and that I love him." I finished in a rush before I got extremely dizzy.
Damien should inform everyone else that I'm OK.
"Zoey, I'm so sorry!" Rosemary cried as soon as Desdemona left.
"It's OK." I assured her.
It wasn't her fault. It was Desdemona's fault. Rosemary is only five and she should not be put through this. I felt the warmth of a fire, the cool grass beneath me, the coolness of a river, and a summer breeze join me. Melantha, who was next to me, gasped as she felt the same thing I felt. The elements filled me up. I thanked them and they left. Before they left, the four elements spun around me as if giving me a hug.
"That was awesome!" Melantha smiled.
"Always is." I replied. "When do I get out of here? I don't think I could last another day."
"In the morning." Rosemary informed me.
"Good. I miss my friends and my chest hurts."
Rosemary smiled and nodded.

Stark

'I'm OK. I love you,' Zoey's voice whispered through the air and he was filled with spirit.
Stark smiled and picked up his head.
"What happened?" Aphrodite asked.
"She's okay."
"How do you know?" Darius asked this time.
"Spirit."
Aphrodite smiled this time. "She really is okay."
Stark nods. "We're going to find her in the morning."

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