Hey there everyone thank you so much for sticking with this story it was really fun to write. However it has come to my attention that some of you aren't aware that the dialog for this story is from a song on the movie The Swan Princess. If you aren't aware of the song then please listen to it before writing reviews because I don't appreciate rude people. I've never claimed to be a strong writer, I wrote this just because I was bored and it was fun however the blatant rudeness from the last reviewer was ridiculous. And since they did it anonymously I have decided to address it here.
This is what they said: Losing IQ chapter 6 . Apr 13
This is my idea
This is my idea
This is my idea
Of a complete waste of time! This was a horrible story. It almost could've been a tolerable/borderline decent storyline, until you repeated the same stupid phrase over and over again. Even though it doesn't really make sense, and it certainly doesn't flow.
You failed to actually capture anyone's personality in this dreadful piece. So, kudos for writing such crap.
Now first things first you should always take it easy on new writers because if you leave bad reviews then you'll discourage people from becoming better therefore missing out on whatever amazing stories they could come up with. Second I'm sorry you weren't aware of the lyrics but that doesn't mean you have to be such a jerk and leave such a rude review.
So to the jerk who left this review let me say this. If the story was a waste of time then why did you continue reading. Not to mention the fact that it wasn't meant to capture anyone's personality it was just a short little story that became multiple chapters. It was never meant to be a major story it. I'm sorry you can't understand that. I'm writing this to you because of all my years of writing I've never gotten such a terrible review from such a pretentious jack ass but new experiences happen all the time. So thank you.