A/N: okay here is Ch.6! Thank you for reveiwing Angelic Fluffle. Yeah, I like just noticed that... :( opps! This is my first warriors book and my first book with a blind character. Just so everyone knows in Ch.3 where I wrote: Brookkit struggled to look around the den. It was a medium-sized crevice in a rock-wall. I messed up and put 'look' sorry bout' that. She can't see. I might make another mistake like that, just know that she's blind and she can't see... Just remember REVEIW= NEW CHAPTER! Oh and thank you Lovepaw for helping me figure out that name... all of the rest of you will just have to wait to see what I'm talking about :) MAHAHA!


Ch.6

Brookkit was working hard to get her pelt perfect. Just a couple of minutes ago Honeystar had come up and told her it was time she became an apprentice. Her ceremony would be any moment now. She wondered who her mentor would be. Suddenly she felt a sharp pain in her tail. She knew the scent right away.

"Cowkit!" she yelled at Whisperwind's youngest brown and white spotted tom kit.

"Why don't you want to play with us?" the one moon old kit replied.

"My apprentice ceremony is any minute now Cowkit, I don't want to get my pelt all dirty," Brookkit replied calmly.

Another white tom bounded out of the nursery followed by a silver and white she-cat and a brown tom.

"Hi Owlkit, Lilykit, and Dirtkit," Brookkit greeted Whisperwind's other kits calling their names in order.

"Hi Brookkit," the three kits replied.

Brookkit could feel a weight shift in the ground and Cowkits scent slowly growing stronger. She whipped around and pinned Cowkit to the ground gently.

"How do you do that?!" Cowkit whined.

"Practice," Brookkit replied as she smelt a new scent. "Honeystar's about to call the meeting!" she called out to the kits as cats started to gather around Highrock.

"Let all cats gather around the Highrock for a clan meeting!" Honeystar's voice rang out.

Brookkit sat down right below Highrock.

"First, Swimpaw is ready to go back to Riverclan as their full medicine cat. Hawkherb will be taking him to Moonstone tonight so he can receive his full name," Honeystar paused to allow the clan to cheer on the young Riverclan tom. "Also we have one kit that is ready to become an apprentice. Brookkit, step forward."

Brookkit felt like she had some very angry butterflies in her chest as she stepped closer to Honeystar.

"Brookkit, you have reached your sixth moon. You are one of the first blind cats in quite some time to try to become a warrior apprentice. None of them have ever succeeded. The path will be very hard. Are you sure you want to do this?" Honeystar asked.

Brookkit shrunk back in her pelt. She had already given Honeystar her answer. What Honeystar had said had stung her. She let out a deep breath and straightened out.

"I am sure I do," she finally managed to answer.

"Okay. Brookkit until you receive your full name you will be known as Brookpaw," Honeystar's voice rang out.

Brookpaw almost yowled, 'It's not 'full' its 'warrior!' But she bit her tounge instead. Clearly Honeystar didn't believe she could ever be a full warrior.

"Spottedsky, you are a new warrior but you have a good heart. You will be Brookpaw's mentor," Honeystar said.

Brookpaw bounced over to Spottedsky and licked her shoulder. Spottedsky returned the gesture as the clan shouted, "Brookpaw, Brookpaw, Brookpaw!"

Finally after most of the cats said good luck to Brookpaw she managed to except the crowd and reach the camp entrance where Spottedsky was patiently waiting.

"Sorry," she dipped her head to her mentor as they walked through the camp entrence.

Brookpaw followed Spottedsky's paw-steps and scent through a twisty path through the forest. All the sudden the paw steps stopped and started to come towards her. Brookpaw prepared herself for the attack as Spottedsky leaped. Brookpaw aimed a fast-paw at Spottedsky's chest but the she-cat was too heavy to knock off balance. Brookpaw rolled out of the way just in time as Spottedsky landed on the ground where she just was standing. Brookpaw could feel Spottedsky get back out and start to circle her trying to confuse her. All the sudden Spottedsky's scent disappeared and so did her foot-steps. Brookpaw opened up her ears to listen for her. She caught a noise. She could hear the tree branches above her creak softly and the leaves rustling more than usual. All the sudden the branch creaking and the leaf rustling stopped and Brookpaw knew that Spottedsky was dropping down towards her. Brookpaw stepped out of the way and felt Spottedsky's soft thud on the ground. She leaped on top of Spottedsky after she was unbalanced from the sky.

"Ok, you can get off of me," Spottedsky croaked.

Brookpaw jumped off of Spottedsky and gave her pelt a quick licking.

"Honeystar had her doubts and asked me to give you that little test, well Brookpaw, it seems you passed with flying colors. You have a very good chance of becoming a warrior if you can take on more than one cat at once," Spottedsky said. "Come on, that's enough for tonight, be up early tomorrow and we can take a tour of the borders after you take care of Flamesky."

Brookpaw happily followed Spottedsky back to camp. She would prove Honeystar wrong about blind cats.


A/N: Remember REVIEW= NEW CHAPTER!