I've decided to give up on this story at least for now so if anyone wants to adopt it then it's fine and feel free to change anything you find wrong it just don't take away everything I set up for it and the only demand I have is that you make the saiyans a bit more human in behavior like that they enjoy the simpler things is life like music, I want Goku to be introduced to Metallica in my story, PM me if you're interested, I'm also interested in a collaboration one day too