This is the seventh addition to my fanfic "Eternity In Her Eyes" I would appreciate any comments or tips for this fic
Desolation
Bra had one tear fall off that perfect cheek of hers, a tear full of resentment, betrayal, and possible love. After that she walked towards her flight and promising to herself she would forget this life of hurt; not only by him but of just any regular person. Her saiyan pride would only take her so far as to ignore the comments people would say about her and the immense pressure on her shoulders because she was the daughter of the great Bulma Briefs. What she wouldn't give to live a life full of comatose and procrastination. So much was expected of her but she was only one person. She wished she lived her life like Goten, full of bliss, naïve to the world and its huge problems. She had always been jealous at how he was always able to ignore bad people and the things they said. She had remembered how he told about how he would get mad when people made fun of him but she never saw him take any action. She was the opposite, her saiyan father's genetics kept her from taking any verbal abuse from some insignificant insects. She had only gotten into one fight her entire life; the doctors say that the poor girl would have to have hair stapled to her head from the severe pulling of it. It was pulled all the way and possibly never going to grow back. She also had both fractured arms and legs and when she was sent through the x-ray it revealed a comb possibly entered through the rear end. Her mother obviously heard of the fight and gave her a little talk about how this gave her company a bad look and that she would have to ignore anything that people would say that would hurt her feelings. Vegeta on the other hand gave his daughter and big hug and smiled proudly and said "That's my girl!" She still couldn't take her mind off that question, "why does he feel that way?" "How more subtle can one get?"
"Bra… where did you go?" "Bra come back please, please." "I love you" Goten woke up felling horrible it was weeks since he had heard the news from her mother. His words had hurt her so deep as to make her leave and not come back. "I'm such an idiot." "She made me realize what I felt for Paris wasn't love." "He had always wanted to please Bra when they were smaller, even if it was as small as opening the door for her. He recalled to the time they were small; he was 12 Trunks was 13 Bra was 10 and Pan the same. They were having a race between the prideful male demi-saiyans and the ever graceful female saiyans. It was pretty close but the boys had the lead. Bra wasn't really as interested in the race as the Pan, and Trunks and Goten. Bra tripped on a rock and fell to her face. Trunks not really noticing, still kept on racing with Pan as she was just as determined as he was to win. Only one person- boy stopped to see if the girl was hurt. She had a tear in her eye, she wasn't really hurt physically thanks to her saiyan genes but she felt betrayed. Her brother and her best friend didn't stop to see if she was okay. Goten came up to her and said "Its okay I fall all the time but I just get back up, come on we can finish the race together." She smiled and gave Goten a hug. Trunks and Pan were at the finishing line waiting for their best friends. Goten was smiling and making funny faces to entertain Bra while walking to catch up with the others. She looked happy and Trunks and Pan could see it. To love and be loved we put aside self-centeredness and experience unity with another, and compassion peace, joy, excitement, and fulfillment are the inevitable results. All Bra wanted in her life was to love and be loved. Somehow the goofball that so masterfully hides his true emotions from the world, brought out the feeling of love in her. It was only until now that the naïve delinquent realized the same exact thing. "I might've been affectionate towards Paris but I never really remember when she showed that affection back towards me." "I feel like a owe Bra a huge explanation and I should go right now." "So why don't you?" Goten turned around to his once best friend. Goten felt so guilty for hurting Bra's feelings that he really forgot his anger towards Trunks. He actually felt some pity for the guy because Paris ran away from him and he actually liked her. Also he had hurt the feelings of Marron and his niece. It might take a while for them to forgive him.
Trunks was brainstorming ideas for the new project his mom would need by this time next week and he couldn't concentrate. He felt depressed that neither Pan nor Marron would talk to him. "I'm going to go talk to them" he thought in his head. He flew out in the crisp evening air the sun was just setting leaving beautiful streaks of light. He had found the girls taking a ride in their car, he wanted to surprise them. He jumped in front of the car but to his disappointment the girls didn't stop the car but instead Pan floored it. "Oh, Shit!" Trunks jumped out of the way just in the nick of time and saw Marron sticking her tongue out and Pan stuck her middle finger out the window so the lilac haired man could see the rage she felt. He wanted to fix things between them but he might have to use force. "Umm… Bra we're not going anywhere" "What're you talking about baka we're in a car right now driving at maybe 90 mile per hour, how can you say that?" "Look down." Pan stepped on the brakes to make sure and looked under the car sure enough Trunks was lifting it with one finger. "Okay not funny, put the car down Trunks." "Okay but promise you won't thrash me once I let you guys down." "NO!" Trunks cautiously let down both the girls and to his surprise there were no looks of attempted murder on the girl's faces. No, the looks on their faces were a mix between detestation and tumult. The girls obviously had a reason for the looks, and right now they were just trying to enjoy their day off at the mall. "Girls all I can say is that I'm very sorry you had to see that." "We're not girls." Marron snapped at Trunks. "Okay ladies I just came to apologize to the both of you and say that I'm sorry that you had to see that." Now they would have accepted the boy's apology if they both didn't love him as deeply as they did. To them, what he did was unforgivable especially since she meant so much to Pan's uncle. "That girl was a slut but you had every chance to say no, why didn't you?" "Okay I guess I owe you guys an explanation." "Well I first started seeing Paris about a month and a half ago, she was looking for Goten at the Son's house but he wasn't there." "I also came around looking for him but I found Paris instead." "She invited me to her apartment; we've been friends since that talk at the mall." The girls blushed when they remembered the antics they went through to catch his attention. "Well we saw more and more of each other throughout the month and one day I felt that things were going good so I asked if she would like to be with me, and she gladly accepted." "When my mom told m0e was going to hold one of those party things where all the z-senshi is gathered I decided that I would bring Paris and tell everyone but my plan blew up in my face." "Does my uncle still hate you?" "Actually I just talked to him yesterday about it and apologized for being a dick and not telling him." "Well we won't forgive you as easily." "Please, please forgive me I never meant to hurt you." "You guys are my friends please trust me." Trunks used a puppy dog face to try and lure the girls into gaze of sorry. "Alright, alright" Pan finally said. "We forgive you but don't ever do that again" Marron said. "Okay we can all go back to being good friends." "I have a question though, why did you guys care even more than Goten when I was with Paris?" They blushed and hid their faces away. "No reason, just that you're our friend and we didn't want to see you get hurt." Both girls sighed relieved that their wits had saved them from something they felt should be put off for the moment.
All of the friends now were walking down the street when they saw a familiar face. "It's Goten!" Marron said. Pan looked to Trunks then to Marron, they both had noticed that Goten wasn't the same cheery blissful moron that they all know and loved. "I guess he is still torn about it." The girls had heard of the news of Bra leaving but they thought of it as nothing serious, Bulma lying to them said that she was going to do some research for Capsule corp. They found out the truth when a week had passed and she still wasn't home. They went back to Bulma demanding to know the truth. She told them about the note. Goten had been contemplating on how to find Bra as she didn't reveal where she was heading. Bra made sure the pilot of the family jet never told anyone. "Hey Goten, how you doing?" He looked up to see the daughter of Krillin and his niece. "I'm alright, I see you guys made up." Yeah we did, Goten let's all go out to a club tonight all four of us." "This should be interesting" Goten thought to himself.