Hello! I got my first critic! His name is Mr. Invisable and I'd like to respond to his critisism
Mr.I: 1. Characters are very OOC and notat all like how Rick wrote them. I understand if it's an AU, but this isn't.
Me: I told you strait you strait up that they are OOC
Mr.I: 2. Shorter chapters tend to make readers slightly irritated. Add more detail to lengthen the size.
Me: I make short chapters but I update near every day. I write them short because I have only so much time every day and I dont like leaving a chapter in the middle. It makes me forget the mood.
Mr.I: 3. Get a beta. Your language is very basic and too text like to be in a story. For example: 'WHAT R U DOING HERE'
should be written as, "What are you doing here?!" Stop using shortcuts while typing. Again, annoys readers.
Me: I just got back to school so I'm use to text type. I honestly only used it once or twice in this story.
Mr.I: 4. If you know it's cliche, don't write it. Try something new for a change. There are plenty of stories exactly like this out there. If you want to use the plot, fine, but seriously try something new. A different twist is always a good idea. It adds some freshness.
Me: I love this sort of plot line! I write to please myself and to improve. I enjoy reviews so I can improve. This was my first fanfiction, so I took a classic story plot. And, face it, you cant tell me what to and not to write! I don't go and tell you your story line is awful and you shouldn't write it. When people critisize my plot line, that ticks me off. I enjoy suggestions on my writing style, or to add more excitment a bully ect. but, you can't say that I cant write this style.
~Lizzy