TheAnnoyingOne97:
Does Not Own:
- Percy Jackson and the Olympians
- Characters that are not her's
- Forbiden Fruit: the tempation of Edward Cullen
Do Own:
- Plot
- Lucia Fuller
- Victor Leroux
- Nikolas Athanas
- All of the PJatO books and THO books (but not The Mark of Athena, still don't have that :( )
The day that Lucia Fuller, daughter of Nike and self proclaimed Ruler of Awesomeness (to which most would look at her strangely and walk away whenever she shouted out her title), discovered fanfiction, was a bad day.
First of all, her baby brother Nikolas Athanas left to go back to his home in New York City, leaving her all alone with her big brother, Victor Leroux. Now, if Lucia was the Ruler of Awesomeness, then Victor was the King of Annoyance. When he wasn't flirting with her friends or bugging Draco Khalid, he was always found hanging out with his sister.
But not today. He was out on a date with Lucia's best friend, Amore Jemison, leaving her all alone and bored out of her mind.
If it was any other day she would be with her friends, but no. Everyone was busy.
Andria Graceton, a daughter of Demeter, was blessed with the task of being Demeter's messenger again, traveling back and forth from the Underworld and wherever Demeter was.
Tessa Nicols, one of Apollo's children, was no where to be found (but Lucia suspected that she was out of James Frey, Iris' son).
Rose Talison, Amore's sister, was spending the day cleaning up the Cupid Cabin.
And whenever she tried to approach Draco he would just walk away.
So here she was, sitting in the center of the Nike Cabin with her laptop, looking for something to cure her boredom.
She looked through her emails, and saw that her old friend from Seattle sent her something.
"Luci," it said, "I miss you soooo much! Since I missed your birthday-"
"By like five months, twenty-six days, and seven hours and six minutes." Lucia thought to herself cynically.
"I decided to send you something that I think will cheer you up!"
Lucia saw the link that was attached to the message and clicked on it, bringing her to a website.
"Fanfiction?" she said to herself, "And what the heck is Forbiden Fruit: the tempation of Edward Cullen?"
She decided to continue to read on, not knowing that later she would regret it.
AN hey guys this is the new improved verson of my story, hope its better this time! btw i am young and have dyslexia i find spellin hard but its meant2 be unformal ok! no critisism pls! tis story goes out 2 my bf zac(kisses!) amd my besfreind Tiffi LOVE YA GRRRL! EDWARD IS OUR GODD!(we wanna SEX him gud!)
"What about that Zac guy? Why would you want to 'sex' Edward 'gud'.
love &blood becky mac! xxx x x xx
UPDATE: I have a proofreader and I have cleaned up the spelling and grammer on this chaptor a hell of a lot as you will see (thank u vickie!) i will be imrpoving the next chaptors soon.
"Th-This is updated and edited!?" she screamed in her head.
Chapter 1 – Altantiana
Hey, my names Atlantiana Rebekah Loren (but everyone calls me Tiana or just plain Tiaa).
"Well don't you have an awful name. Note to self, give future kids normal names."
I am a 16 year old girl and I live in Forks, Washington!
"FORKS, WASHINGTON?! NOOOOO!" she shouted, remembering the last time she visited the small town.
"So... many... empousai..."
My hair is long and pale like spun gold and skims to my waist like a pale shimmering amber mist.
"Since when was gold pale? And can amber be turned to mist somehow?"
My eyes are deep forgetminot blue and my delicate fentures are lilly white and pure as the winter snow in moonlight. I've been told by loads of sleazy, ugly, HORNY guys that I'm real pretty and look like a model or a bunny girl (some of the guys who like me are really old and try to make opt with me its disgusting and weird!)but basically a lot of the girls I meet tell a different story.
"And what do they say, dear poor Tiaa. Wow, that name sounded awful when I say it..."
They say I'm too ivory white and ethereal
"Last time I checked (which I believe was last week when Victor wrote a poem for Ammo using my pocket dictionary) being called ethereal is a complement..."
and too skinny and that I look anorexic which i don't care about, but I think its seriously disrespectful to people with REAL eating disorders (btw i'm so totally not anorexic! I eat loads I just never gain weight and I'm not thin enough to be anorexic anyways, I think they were just being BIATCHES especially this one ratty brain called Ellie Mayfair who I hope freaking DIES in PAIN with SHIT ON HER FACE! Sorry, I'm not really such a batch but she is SO horrible if you met her you'd think the same!)
"Now dear, CALM. THE. HADES. DOWN. And its not nice to swear."
"But you just did."
"Shut the *beep* up, Other Lucia."
"You did it again~!"
"... Maybe I should talk to Chiron about the voices in my head..."
"You probably should."
Anyways I am quite tall and slim and but with really big boobs that I used to HATE because they look noticeable on my slender body and draw to much attention but now i like them and don't care who stares at me!
"How can she look anorexic and have big boobs? You slender and yet you have no breast st all."
"Other Lucia... shut up..."
"And I thought Tiaa didn't like attention from old perverts."
"Even you sound weird when you say that name."
"I am you."
"Not important!"
I have a lip ring and recently put black and indigo and magenta streaks in my long pale blond hair. I smell like mint and cinnamon.
"Hmm... would mint and cinnamon be compatible?"
"I'm pretty sure that Papa experimented on that."
"Yeah, but it exploded in the kitchen."
I wear mostly black and hot pink, deep purple and neon blue and listen to COOL music!
"And what type of music would that be? Rock? K-Pop?... That reminds me, I need my daily dose of Gangnam Style..."
It is my first day at school in forks as I just moved here to live with new foster parents Dave and Marie. They are nice and all very hole some sweet people but it is not like having a real family. I've been hurt to many times to let people close to me and I don't talk to them very much. My real mom died when I was born and I never knew my real dad.
"How would you know what having a real family feels like?"
I sometimes wonder what he is like and if I will ever get to met him.
"Is that foreshadowing that I hear?"
"Don't you mean read?"
"... Don't be a smart *beep* with me. It's rude."
Dave gave me a ride to school and I smiled faintly as he wished me good luck and I got out of the car and went into the school. Loads of people freaking stared at me as I walked down the hall. I was wearing tight black leather pants with silver chains at the waste and a red fishnet-like top and you could see my black lacy bra through it.
"Well, isn't she a whore."
"I don't know. The tight leather pants remind me of Grease."
"Do you mean Sandy? Last time I checked, she wasn't wearing silver chains and a red fishnet like top."
I ignored whispers and the big pink cheerleader imbosils pointing at me.
"How can a cheerleader be fat? And what's an 'imbosils'?"
"Ask Draco later. Now, continue reading."
I was used to it and I paid no at-tension to the guys asking desperately for my number(like hell I'd even LOOK at the horny little donkeys!) and told a ditsy blond cheerleader called Jessica to STFU(!) when she called me a freak!
"By horny little donkeys, she means Democrats, right?"
Next time she tries anything I'll hit her in the eye cause NO ONE messes with me nemore!
"Anger problems~!"
My first day I was relay board, I sat gazing out of the window into the gray cloud-embittered sky for most of the morning, My teachers all looked at me disprovable but said nothing cause they probably new I was a foster kid and a Gothic and didn't want to upset me in case I cut them up as they slept,.
"I have a friend who was in the foster program, and he isn't a bad person."
"He's a hobo."
"Yeah, but he isn't a bad person."
My ears are pierced four times, I have a tattoo of a scorpion(like S my birth-sign!) on my ankle and a Gothic cross on my shoulder, and on my hand i have a weird birthmark in the shape of a seven-pointed star that I've had all my life.
"You're a Scorpio!? I'm a Taurus!
"The sign for Scorpio is not an 'S'. Its more of an 'M' shape."
"And is the seven-pointed star birthmark going to mean anything? I have a feeling it will..."
Your probably wandering why I'm bothering to tell you this,
"Not really."
"I don't know, I'm kinda curious."
"The last time you were curious, Amore somehow ended up in Mr. D's secret room."
"... That wasn't my fault!'
"You hesitated."
well I tell you now I am no ordinary sixteen year old girl.
"Are you a demigod too?!"
"Lucia, this involves Twilight, I don't think there will be any demigods in this story."
I have a secret, a dark and forbidden secret witch I am only just beginning to understand
"Hey, she spelled forbidden right!"
"It was probably the editor that fixed that... have you ever notice that 'forbidden' is pretty much just saying 'For Biden'?
"Yeah, and how 'abomination' sounds like 'Obama Nation'.
"That's just weird."
"Agreed~!"
When I sleep I hear whispers in another language and even though I understand them at the time, when I wake up i can't remember it! I also see weird faces in my dreams that fade to nothingness when I open my eyes and I swear out the corner of my eye my birthmark glows shocking bright gold and gets relay hot sometimes but when I look properly it is back to normal boarding scar-color!
"I see weird faces in my dreams too... but they're mostly people that I know from Seattle."
"Like Hobo Bob?"
"He likes to go by Robert... and he's not that weird looking."
"He's got the pedo-stash."
"... Okay, I'll give you that."
I am really gracefull like the running anti-lopes when I run very fast and am stronger and faster than most people.
"Are you sure she isn't a demigod?"
"Well, you don't run very gracefully, nor are you stronger then most people."
"I'm stronger than you~!"
"I am you."
"Pooey..."
I used to just think i was relay athletic but now I'm not so sure, I think there might be something else at work, something so much more mysterious and eeire.
"Maybe its because you're too *beep* perfect."
"You said a bad word! And I wonder if there's a word for that..."
Lucia looked out the window of her cabin and saw that one son of Athena that unfortunately got caught on her radar. She rushed towards her window, opened it, and shouted out to him, "Hey Draco! I got a question for you!"
He kept walking, as if he didn't hear her at all, so Lucia jumped out of her window and tackled him.
"What do you want, Fuller?"
"What do you call a person whose to perfect they can't be real?"
"A Mary-Sue."
"Really?"
"Yes. Now get off me."
"But I don't want to."
"He has that 'get-off-of-me-before-I-rip-your-eyebrows-off' and you know that I love my eyebrows!"
"Naw, looks more like the 'get-off-me-before-I-jump-you-myself' face."
"Really?" the orange haired girl asked out loud.
"Really what?"
"Oh, nothing." she said, getting off the poor boy, "I'm just having an argument with that voice in my head."
He looked at her strangely for a moment, and then walked away, leaving Lucia to her thoughts.
"Does Draco really have a 'get-off-me-before-I-jump-you-myself' look?"
"If he does, that was it."
"Why'd he use it on me?"
"You really are innocent, aren't you?"
"What makes you say that?"
"Well, you didn't know what was going on in that one motel in Vegas."
"... To this day, I still don't got a clue..."
"Lets just get back to the story."
"Okie Dokie~!"
She skipped back to her cabin and grabbed her laptop as she plopped onto her bed.
The truth hovers so softly on the brink of my memory sometimes but if only i could remember the weird things that clung to the edge of my mind as I slept!
"Wait, how do you know that you dreamed something, and yet you can't remember it."
"You do the same thing."
"If it was really interesting, I think I would remember it."
"You don't remember that one dream were Draco was dressed up as Kakashi and Victor dressed up as Gai and had a huge fight, destroying all of Camp Half-Blood."
"Hmm... Victor could totally pull off the green jump suit..."
"You didn't really pay attention to what I said."
At lunch I sat alone in the corner and scanned the cafeteria quietly with my eyes smoldering dark blue beheath my long black lashes and my slim thighs curled under me.
"Is she supposed to be like the female version of L?"
"Naw, L is cooler."
"Agreed~!"
It was the n I noticed an unbelievably jaw-droopingly hawt HAWT HAAAAAAAAWT dude with tusseted blondey-brown hair, golden yellow eyes like wells of hot caramel and pale sexy features.
"Ugh, what a hypocrite."
"What do you mean?"
"She doesn't like it when guys stare at her, and yet its okay to ogle at 'hawt' guys."
"Well maybe she's in love~!"
I'd never felt this way about anyone before and I'd totally never felt this weird feeling that I'd met someone before but I had no idea where
"Told ya~!"
and i knew it was impassible because I'd freaking remember someone THAT hawt!
"Her proclamation of love would be better if she didn't add in the word 'hawt' in it."
A girl sat next to him with long brown hair with her arms dripped over him like a freaking flesh-eating plant so i thought well whatevah, hes taken.
"But this is love! You need to fight for your man!" while thinking this, she unconsciously snapped her fingers in a zig-zag.
"Don't encourage the fictional character."
She wasn't nearly as hawt as he was, she wasn't ugly though. I figured I was maybe prettier then her. I never really saw myself as beautiful but i'd guessed from thinks others had said, plus this girl wasn't great looking but anyways I'd never try to pilch with another girls' BF cause thats just low.
"Not really. Its only when you take your friend's boyfriend. Now that is low."
"Yeah, Amore took Victor away from this one girl that neither of us knew. It didn't interfere with the girl-ble."
"You still believe in that stupid book you bought from Hobo Bob?"
"Yup~!"
So I got up to leave the hall thinking I'd go and smoke some bald drugs in the locker room while no one was there.
"What are 'bald drugs', and where can I find some."
"I think she means 'bad drugs'."
"Why would she want to do that?"
"Why would you want 'bald drugs'?"
"To make Victor go bald, duh. Maybe Amore will finally leave him afterwards..."
As I waked over to he exit I couldn't help but notice the hawt pale guys musky eyes as they met mine.
"Since when can eyes give off a scent?"
"The day since people started spelling 'hot' as 'hawt'."
I locked away hurriedly. I smocked dope in the locker room for a bit then I wondered to my next class. I bumped into someone in the corridor and my bocks fell everywhere!
"Jeez, I wonder who bumped into her?"
"I think I know!"
"And who would that be?"
"Eli Howard!"
"That jerk who always knocked over everyone's books back in middle school?"
"The very same!"
"I don't think the writer knows who Eli is."
"Well, she's writing a story based in Washington, maybe she knows him."
"Lucia, E.L. James based 50 Shades of Gray in Seattle, and she knows diddly squat about that place."
FRICK! FRICK! FRIIIICKK!
"... She's insane."
"Says the girl who talks to the voices in her head."
"I hear that a lot of people do that."
"WTF!" I screamed loudly, "watch where your FREAKING going you asshole!" (i have anger problems)
"Anger problems~!"
"She just stated that. And who screams 'WTF' anyways?"
"... Not me..."
"Yes you do."
"... Shut up."
"I'm so so sorry" he said in a voice like wet heaven "please forgive me my lady"
"What's wet heaven?"
"... You really don't want to know."
"Hey! You hesitated!"
It was the hawt pale guy!
"Like OMG! Its the totally hawt cute pale guy! And he knocked over my books and called me a lady! Eeeeeek~!"
"... You're weird..."
"Says the girl who talks to the voices in her head."
"You already said that!
"Yes, but I'm just proving my point."
"There's seven more chapters... Should I continue reading?"
"I don't know. The story line sucks, but its fun to make fun of it."
Lucia was so busy talking to the voice in her head, that she didn't notice that someone opened the door to her cabin and walked in, nor did she see the pale blue glow coming from the intruder's weapon.
"Why are the lights out?"
"I suspect that its 9:00, or something like that."
"Really? It took me like five hours to read like maybe two hundred words?! That is soooo scary!"
Apparently so."
"AHHHHH!"
Someone pinched her in the sides, and she fell off her bed, her body shutting down for a bit.
"Dang, Lucia! What are you still doing inside on Halloween?!"
"Halloween?!"
"Well, today is the 31st of October. Do the math."
She looked up and saw her brother, dressed up as Darth Vader from Star Wars. Behind him stood Amore (who was dressed up as Padme Amidala) and Nikolas (who looked adorable as Luke Skywalker!).
"Nicky?! What are you doing here!?" she asked her little brother, slowly getting up.
"You were supposed to be taking me out Trick-or-Treating, but you never came over," the small boy explained, "So I I.M.'ed Victor to ask him if he poisoned you again-"
"THAT WAS ONE TIME!"
"So he came over to pick me up with Amore."
"How could I forget spending the night with my little Nicky!?"
"Its because of the story."
"But how?! I could have easily just walked away from it!"
"Not this type of story. Not one so bad that it can be addicting."
"No more! I won't ever read another chapter of that story ever again!"
"Nicky, do you still want to go out Trick-or-Treating? The night is still young, and they pass out candy at every cabin here." she said to Nikolas, walking over to him and ruffling his blonde wig.
"Hmm... Okay!" he beamed.
"Great! Just let me change!"
And so she did. She shoved everyone out, well, except for Amore, and she changed into her costume.
She walked out of her cabin dressed up as Eowyn, her favorite character from The Lord of the Rings, and she took her brother out Trick-or-Treating, seeing a lot of scary things, like Cat talking like a valley-girl ("Like, so totally Halloween is my fav holiday eveah~!), little Lauren in her wolf costume arguing with Miya, who was in her vampire costume ("TEAM EDWARD ALL THE WAY!" "I DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS!" "Oh, its something that came up during the Twilight phaze." "Really? You mean those stupid movies?" "Yup~! I'll let you borrow the books.") and many other things.
Nikolas had a lot of fun out with his sister, but Lucia couldn't help but continue to think about that one fanfiction.
She has been sucked into awfulness that is fandom.
TheAnnoyingOne97: And that was the Halloween Special~!
... Not what you guys were expecting, eh?
Well, it originally wasn't going to be the Halloween Special, it was going to be a new series in the PJatO fandom where Lucia discovers fanfiction, but I thought I could add in a little Halloweeny goodness in there.
So look forward to the new series called Lucia Discovers Fanfiction in a couple of days, maybe a week. Every character that is in this story, will also be showing up in that one, but it will mostly be Lucia-centric (hope you guys still read it though)
ALSO! I have this new idea with a big, and I mean BIG, quest! The plot is still being looked over, but I'll give you guys a summary:
A quest without a prophecy, these eight young demigods will be up against monsters and mayhem as they search for a missing object; Pandora's Box.
And that's all you guys get for now! Now, for that story it isn't only a first come, first served kinda thing, no, I will be choosing seven demigods.
They can be from this story, or they can be new, but if anyone wants their character in it, please P.M. me
And now, happy belated Halloween, and I hope everyone will have a great Veterans Day!
P.S: I really hope that no one was offended by the Democrat jokes that I put in, they just popped up in my head while I was reading Forbiden Fruit: the tempation of Edward Cullen, that and it was Election Week, I've been cracking jokes about both parties, so please don't flame me.