I decided to try my hand at poetry. Geez oh man (points to whoever gets that literary reference). This isn't really formatting how I want it to, but I don't know how to change it. My apologies in advance.

Disclaimer: Today in my philosophy class I wrote this poem instead of listening to my teacher discuss the possible creation of three additional gender categories, and I still don't own the Ninja Turtles. MLIA.


G is for Gates:

Don't open the gates

Don't take me in

It's my turn

I'm not ready.

Don't open the gates

God please!

Don't take me in

It's my turn

I'm not ready.

Don't open the gates

How could this happen?

Don't take me in

God please!

It's my turn

I'm not ready.

Don't open the gates

I should go before you.

Don't take me in

How could this happen?

It's my turn

God please!

I'm not ready.

Don't open the gates

You can't you promised!

Don't take me in

I should go before you.

It's my turn

How could this happen?

I'm not ready.

God please!

Don't open the gates

Please you promised I should how could you go I before you God this can't happen.

I'm not ready.


In my head, Leo is the one that's not ready, Raph is "God please", Donnie is "How could this happen", Mikey is "You can't you promised", and Splinter is "I should go before you." This is kind of angsty, especially for me. It probably stems from how annoying philosophy was today.

I don't typically attempt poetry, so y'all's feedback and critiques would be very much appreciated! I wonder, do you see what I was trying to do?