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Luke's POV

Turns out the Doctor was wrong. As Clyde brought the axe down heavily on the glass, it shattered into tiny shards that went everywhere. Max protected her head as most of the shard went in her direction. She looked up and realised she was free, I saw a beaming smile across her face. Then something happened that no one expected. The remaining parts of the glass cube reformed and recreated the darkness Max was once in.

"No!" I shouted, I was sick of things happening to get in the way. as the Cube quickly reformed, Clyde looked hopefully.

"I could smash it again." He asked. Sarah Jane gave him another glare.

"We hesitated. If we have a little speed, then," Clyde suggested.

"Actually I can see the logic. And Sarah Jane the sonic lipstick could do something." Maria said. She hadn't said anything for a while.

"Actually, that would make sense." Mum was warming to the idea.

"So, I smash, you, erm, sonic lipstick, and Max you need to get out as soon as we tell you to ok?" Clyde raised his voice when he was talking to Max.

"Clyde, I may not be able to hear anything but I still know what your saying." Max protested.

"Oh, but anyway, you need to be quick on the getting out before the glass comes back to get you." Clyde said, suddenly taking charge of the situation.

"Got it." Max told us. I knew she couldn't see to the end of her nose but she gave us a thumbs up anyway. She got up off her bum and rested on the balls of her feet, crouching in a 4 foot Cube for someone a little of 6 foot was hard (I didn't know how tall she was but it wasn't hard to make a guess). Clyde brought the axe down heavily on the Cube, using even more force than he had before. Mum used the sonic lipstick to do something, none of us where sure what. Turns out it blew the whole Cube up.

"Max!" Mum screamed. I knew she would completely blame herself and wouldn't let any of us tell her that she is not to blame. But after the initial explosion and the flames and smoke had died down, I could see Max's huddled up figure. Surprisingly enough the Cube did not start rebuilding as it was completely blown to smithereens. I went over to Max and crouched down next to her, placing her hand on her back just below her neck between her shoulder blades. She looked up at me.

"Wow." She said, staring deep into my eyes with her light blue ones. I noticed for the first time how beautiful her eyes were, and how long her blond-brown hair was, it came easily halfway down her back when it wasn't tied back.

"Wow what?" I asked, not completely sure why she had wowed.

"Erm, I dunno. I guess I never thought I could get out of there and then you lot blew it to bits with lipstick." She sounded truly dumbfounded, and I can honestly say that she was amazed at what we could do. But then we all realised that while we were sitting there a load of alarms were going off and guards were trying to get through the door we had locked.

"Lets get out of here!" Maria exclaimed. We all went to the door I had seen the Doctor looking through and ran down the corridor. The light corridors were now dark and metallic with no hope of seeing outside light, just like Mr fosters office was now looking.

"Where are we going?" Rani asked.

"Follow me." Max declared. I didn't know what her plan was, but something tells me it incorporated the Doctor.

Doctor's POV

I wasn't rushing to get to Mr Foster's office. I wanted to give Max some time so I know I had a back up plan, but I knew she was behind me all the way. When I had seen Luke through the window in the door, I knew I had a chance of not getting to Mr Foster's before they did but I didn't want to take a risk of being caught and locked up and not being able to do anything. 5 minutes after seeing Luke talking to Max, I heard a loud explosion, and then sirens going off. I knew it was them so I started running so I could get to the directors office before someone caught me running and presumed it was my fault. I got to the office in minutes, knowing that they wouldn't be far behind.

"Foster," I confronted, getting his attention. He had been doing something on a big switch board, and I had no problem with stopping him doing it. I started to circle him, trying to get me between him and the board, which I reckoned was quite important, he fell through my trap, or away from it.

"Doctor." He replied to my earlier comment.

"I know what you're doing Foster." I said, trying to use a menacing tone.

"And you're going to stop me, blah, blah, blah. They all say the same thing Doctor, and it usually does work." Mr Foster said, Ialmost laughed but then anger surged through me and I was menacing again.

"And I'm not going to break that chain. I WILL stop you Foster, and you are not going to stop me." The Doctor protested.

"Yes, but I will forcibly break the chain Doctor. Starting with you." Mr Foster pulled a gun out his back pocket, I wasn't scared, regenerating wasn't an easy process but I'd live, I'm sure Sarah Jane would help me, maybe. But nevertheless I put my hands up to go with the whole human act. I remembered the sirens blaring and wondered where Sarah Jane had got to.

"I could kill you with one bullet Doctor. Do you want to die?" Foster threatened.

"Not particularly but I could live." I replied. (did anyone see my little joke there?)

"Ok, maybe it would be more than one bullet." Foster said, taking what I said the wrong way.

"No I mean I could literally live." I told him, a hint of sarcasm in my voice. It was fun teasing him.

Call him Frosty Flakes if you really want to hit his final nerves.

Max! Where are you? Are you ok?

I'm fine, a little battered from the Cube explosion as I'm sure you heard. I thought you might need more time so 'accidently' went the wrong way.

Thanks, helping anytime soon might help.

I've got a plan, don't worry. Max didn't elaborate in the slightest.

Do you want to tell me what it is.

You'll see soon.

Max's POV

I was running again. If I told the Doctor what I was going to do, I knew somehow Foster would find out. I knew which door the Doctor had entered through and I was going to send Luke, Maria, Clyde, Rani and Sarah Jane and I was going to go through a back door, experimenting with one of my skills, invisibility, and disable the circuit board somehow. I got to the door and saw the Doctor with his hands up a gun pointed at him through the little window.

"You guys stay here, I'm going to go round the other way and attack from the other side." I stated.

"I'm coming with you." Luke protested.

"No, I have a specific plan and I need to go alone to make it work. Sarah Jane can you help the Doctor distract Foster?" I asked. She didn't seem best pleased but she nodded almost immediately.

"What should we do?" Maria asked, gesturing to Clyde, Rani and herself.

"Help Sarah Jane, or try to get as much information out of Foster as possible." I said, being the leader felt weird.

"And Luke is going with you!" I added hastily, trying to get Luke to go with him, I didn't know if I could make him invisible too.

"No I'm not. I'm good with circuit boards, I could help!" He protested, he was doing a lot of that.

"Please Luke, just go!" I asked, more pleading really.

"I can help! Please," Luke looked at me with his beautiful blue eyes and I couldn't help but let him come, I knew there was 10,000 people inside him, and at least one of those 10,000 had to be a technician. I nodded, I knew I was going to regret this. I nodded at Sarah Jane and she went in, using her sonic lipstick thing to unlocked the door. I gestured to Luke to tell him to follow me. We ran to the other door and were there in less than a minute. I told him my plan.

"Look, I was planning to use the whole invisibility thing I can do to get in undetected and disable the circuit board using telekinetic energy, I might be able to transmit that power onto you. Did you get all that?" I asked, I was going at rapid speed we didn't have much time.

"Erm," Luke replied.

"I'll take that as a yes." I answered, again, probably speaking to fast for anyone to understand me, but anyway. His sleeve was rolled up on his left arm, I touched the bare skin and concentrated solely on Luke not being visible, just to see if it worked. I opened my eyes, and saw it looked like I was touching thin air. Then I smiled.

"Max, has it worked?" Luke asked me. I laughed and took my hand off his arm. He remained invisible.

"I can still se myself Max," Luke pleaded. He thought I'd let go because it hadn't worked.

"Shame, no one else can." I said sarcastically.

"I'm invisible?" he asked.

"Yup. Now lets go." I closed my eyes and was invisible in seconds. I used my telekinetic powers to unlock the door, I became visible again just to tell Sarah Jane we were here, and then was invisible again. I didn't know how it worked but I could see Luke now that I was invisible, so as far as I was aware, we were all in the room, I took a second to listen to the conversation Sarah Jane, the Doctor and Frosty were having.

"What was she made for?" The Doctor asked.

"Are you going to sell her?" Sarah Jane asked behind us. I heard Luke tense at the thought of me being sold. It wasn't hard to tell they were talking about me, when he said 'she' and 'made' it kind of gave it away. But I continued with the telekinetic talent until I was sure everything was completely mucked up. But then Luke flicked a switch and I moved some wires and it went really wrong, a massive explosion sending both me and Luke flying (not literally, although I'd have to try my wings out sometime). I lost my concentration and me and Luke were both visible.

"Ah, well, that's not gone quite as well as I hoped it would." I stated I could see Luke, and I could also see Rani, Maria and Clyde's shock and amazement.

"What have you done?" Frosty asked, sounding like he was about to cry. Nothing he touched worked on his circuit board. I think we'd completely disabled everything with a big bang. I looked at Luke and smiled, and we exchanged hi-fives. Frosty turned round, tears in his eyes, I think all of us teenagers in the room were trying to suppress laughing. A tall, menacing, grown man, was crying? I heard Clyde trying not to laugh behind me and I was sure the girls were suppressing giggles too, but more successfully.

"Don't laugh! My mother was killed by you, Sarah Jane! I wanted to do something in her memory." He sobbed, Frosty Flakes wasn't a strong as I thought he was.

"Have a funeral then. Look Foster, personally I did not know your mother, but I am sure, if she had any kindness in her whatsoever she wouldn't want to see you doing this." I took a step forward, not getting too close because he could still change into an alien and kill me. It may have been funny to watch an old, *cough, cough* I mean scary, man cry, but it still hit a soft spot I had. I really didn't like my soft spot. He remained silent.

"Just leave this planet, don't make everyone Ood, you've made millions from just selling the drink, take that money and go. Be a good little bane boy!" I added the sarcastic comment on the end. I went over and tried to help him, feeling he was taking in my little words of wisdom (I don't have many so giving them back would have been nice of him). His sobs did not cease.

"Max, be careful." Sarah Jane sounded cautious. I looked up at her and showed her that I was being careful. While I lost concentration, the man I was trying to help, who I was seeing as weak and emotional, turned from human to alien, and pulled me about three feet in the air, by my neck.

This is quite a long chapter, I know!!!!

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