Somewhere in New Jersey:
Danny decided to call that number that called him. He scrolled through his phone untill he found the number. It wasn't anonymus so he called it back. After nearly a minute when he wanted to stop the call, finally someone picked up."Hello?"
Chin:
Chin was sitting with Malia at home and they were watching a film. When suddendly Chins phone rang. "Who calles that late?" Malia asked."maybe its McGarett Chin said, stood up and went into the kitchen. Their he answerd the phone call. "Chin" he said. "Oh hey Duke. Why are you calling that late? Is everything alright?" "I'm sorry to bother you at that time, but we have a case. We found a car and the inmates are disapeared. You have to come""Okay I'll call Kono. Have we got any Infos about the car yet?""No, everything I know is that a women reported a car accident and there is noone in the car. Looks like a kidnapping. I'll be there in about 5 minutes then I now more."
After the phonecall. Chin called Kono to let here now that they have a new case. 10 minutes later he arrived a the crimescene, exactly at the same time as Kono. They got out and walked to the totaly damaged car. Duke walked towards them. "Guys we have a problem. We just got from HPD to who the car belongs. It's McGarrets car..."
Sorry for the short chapter and the long waiting. I haven't got much time at the moment. But i didn't want you to wait to long so i wrote a small chapter. Hope you like it.
What do you think is it good so far? I know me grammar isn't the best because englisch is not my mother tongue.
The next chapter will be about Steve and Grace.