AN: Hello everyone! It's been a while since I last posted anything and technically I'm not right now. This piece WAS NOT WRITTEN BY ME. I say again this piece WAS NOT WRITTEN BY ME. This was written by a friend on Deviantart and who is now on , his account name is YRPotaku169. This was an art-trade as he likes to put it as. I wrote a filler chapter for his fan fiction Dark Desire Clan and he wrote one for my Venom Kunoichi. We made the agreement we could post the other's completed filler in our own story. I have his full permission to post what he wrote and he has my full permission. So once more people because sometimes no matter how many times you tell certain individuals they still don't get it, THIS WAS NOT WRITTEN BY ME. The original author GAVE ME PERMISSION.
Also I'd like to take this time right now to post up a response to a review I received from an Anonymous Reviewer that posted a review a few months back, this reviewer goes by the name "Some Reader." For most normal circumstances I don't normally make this open to other readers to read but since this was an Anon Review, I can't send a reply to the reader through normal means of a PM or email. So then I guess this where I make an ass of myself to my readers (that is of course unless those among you believe I have already made an ass of myself before, well then here we go again XD)
Now then "Some Reader" first and foremost I thank you and appreciate you taking the time to come back to my fanfictions on some sort of regular basis to read and review. Now then to what I don't appreciate and I will put this out now, I don't know how "your perspective" works. But I have in no way shape or form made any indication that I know anything about the Japanese Culture. I take this as an accusation and I don't appreciate that, now of course this may just be me being a whining little piss ant that can't take a little criticism but hey too late to stop me now. The only reason why I am using "Kami" so regularly is because it's a mannerism I picked up from other authors okay. I am a 20 year old American Born Chinese man that barely knows anything about his own culture, what the hell do I know about Japanese Culture? Please I can't fail miserably at "trying to show people you know Japanese culture" when I'm not even freaking doing it to begin with. Now I apologize if I'm and probably am being a dick that can't face a little critiquing, but hey this is me trying to set some sort of record straight.
Now as far as your problems go with the rest of Chapter 6, let me say also, now what I'm about to say may be interpreted as "not having passion in my work." But everything I write is a hit or miss with me okay? As much as I liked to aim for some sort of perfection, that ain't gonna happen. There is no commitment on my part in regards to foreshadowing with character development. My commitment is starting this story and continuing with it. Now does that mean my aim is "fuck the reader, I'm just in it for the writing?" No, it just means that I can't satisfy everyone and that every new chapter I put out can be a failure depending on the reader's interpretation. That's all there is to it, I can't make everyone happy and I can't just focus one reader either.
Now in regards to "What did Zabuza do wrong?" Now honestly this more than likely is my fault here when I was writing Ch6. But the aim wasn't about what Zabuza did wrong. The aim was that Naruko saw and felt the horrendous and heart breaking moments in Tsunami's life the moment she probed her mind. It wasn't an issue of what the others in said events did or didn't do; it was Naruko feeling and experiencing the pain of a widow that saw her father and son executed. She didn't care about finding out who did what wrong, whose sad sappy story has to be heard or some typical "they're actually not very bad people" bullshit or if she was even justified in her blames. This is a super powered woman who is easily affected by emotions who saw and felt the pain and sorrow of this one woman alone. And that was all the reason she needed to become hell bent on killing some certain individuals. She took into her being, Tsunami's sorrowful pain and became the physical manifestation of Tsunami's anger and hatred. She didn't need to, nor have to, nor want to understand their side of the story because she can damn near do whatever the hell she wants. I understand that you couldn't see what was wrong and what the reasons that were needed to facilitate such extreme actions. But the chapter and those scenes wasn't about if you saw if there was anything wrong with what occurred in the past of my fanfiction's plot, the point to it all was Naruko acted on the emotions and memories she took from Tsunami and pretty much threw caution and rationality out the fucking window. Pretty sure I've established that about her. Though I'm pretty sure all of what I just bitched about can be interpreted as me just pulling shit out my ass but hey my thought process is a drunk driver on the opposite end of a freeway trying to report himself to 911 for seeing a drunk driver.
In regards to what you said about the contradictions in the kiss Naruko gave Tsunami, as one of my friends put it "slowly and gently."
Personally I also really don't see how I was vague about Naruko absorbing Haku. She pulled her into her own body mass and made her a part of her. If you want some kind of example from another anime on how such a thing looks, just look at how Super Buu from DBZ absorbed Piccolo, Gotanks and Gohan. That's pretty much where half the idea came from.
About what you said about Hinata and having Zabuza's sword and all that stuff about grace. Well pretty sure Super strength isn't technically something that goes hand in hand with grace either.
I also understand that you didn't like Tsunami getting the symbiote. Well to rephrase things, first off she didn't get the symbiote; she got a piece of it. Pretty sure I was clear about that. And sorry to say you thought wrong about the symbiote only being for those that fight. I don't know what kind of hints I gave for you to have that kind of assumption but I apologize, because "symbiotes for those with combat training" is not and has not been my plan.
Now that's probably all I have to say in response to "Some Reader's" review or at least all I can remember on the matter at this moment. And also taking into consideration how I said I hated being accused, pretty damn sure "Some Reader" wouldn't appreciate my accusations either but remember what I said about my thought process. Well that painful ordeal is done with, for now I am done with making an ass of myself and bitching about what one person had to say. But hey I gotta get some kind of response out, I don't want to make an ass out of myself but if I did well too late now.
Anyway everyone enjoy the filler that YRPotaku169 made.
Filler: Trial Run
It was night in the Land of Rice Fields. Naruko and Hinata, still in their symbiote forms, had stopped and set up camp in a secluded forest clearing where they could simply talk and plan their next move.
Naruko was going through the various options that they had open, such as finding the other Tailed Beast hosts and uniting them against Danzo or forming a group of super-elite rogue shinobi that would do high-level missions for lesser wages.
She even had a name for this group.
"Nin-Mart!" Naruko shouted. Hinata gave Naruko a confused look.
"Well, it's either that or "Akatsuki", which sounded stupid in comparison." Naruko added
But as Naruko was explaining "Nin-Mart" to Hinata, the ex-Hyuuga heiress had a crazy idea form into her head.
"N-naruko..." Hinata stuttered a bit and had a light blush.
"So as we can see, we will dri-. Yes, my love?"
"I just had a crazy idea just formed in my head." Hinata said a little hesitantly, looking down with her bangs covering her eyes.
"Go on...." Naruko said as she held Hinata's hand to comfort her a bit
"Well...umm...." Hinata hesitated, because she wasn't so sure whether her lover would be willing, since Naruto was now Naruko, and her sexual orientation might've changed since then. But then, the symbiote replied.
"Don't talk. Just do it. She will like it."
Hinata concentrated, and she felt a rush of pleasure in her vagina. The area in between her legs started to bulge outwards as her labia seemed to enlarge for something to come through. At the same time what looked like a black latex phallus emerged from Hinata's cunt where her clit would have been. It grew and became erect, which made the Hyuuga start to dribble a bit of pre-cum from both of her sexes. Eventually, her cock reached a length of 8 inches before stopping.
Naruko, who had paused to see her mate grow this new member, had a small stream of blood running down her nose. Hinata smiled coyly as she showed off her new dick.
"You like?" Hinata asked with a mischievous smile.
"This sure is a reversal of roles, isn't it?" Naruko grinned as well, then got up and walked over to Hinata.
"Yes, it is."
"I actually confess that I was planning on maybe doing this a week or so from now, but since you've taken the initiative..."
"Just shut up and fuck me." Hinata responded anxiously.
Naruko guided Hinata's new phallus where it should go, and it became a bit more erect, gaining anther two inches. Naruko moaned as they slowly settled back down on the ground, the vixen on top and the new hermaphrodite holding her up.
While Hinata had the dick, Naruko still took charge, groping Hinata's breasts as she rode her partner. Hinata was also moaning as she kept building up, while Naruko took her hand off of Hinata's boob and placed it in the girl's female sex. Hinata gasped as she was pleasured on both of her organs, her body feeling like it was about to explode.
Then, when she finally couldn't take it any longer, she let herself go, and black symbiote cum gushed into Naruko. Naruko cried out in pure ecstasy as she was filled with the alien splooge. But Naruko also had her hand coated in a similar cum as Hinata's juices oozed from her pussy.
Naruko got off of her lover and started "cleaning up" by licking Hinata's cock, which caused more cum to get in her hair as Hinata continued ejaculating. Eventually, after a few more after-cums, the two symbiote hosts were more or less covered in their own products, which then melted and reintegrated with the symbiotes as Hinata's new penis shrunk back down into a clit.
"Ready for my turn?" Naruko purred as she kissed her love.
Hinata, still a bit exhausted from their recent bout, simply nodded as Naruko concentrated. Just above the vixen's pussy, a bulge started to form, which then shifted into two bulges, one dropping down while the other extending up and out. Whereas Hinata's dick was part of her original system, Naruko was creating a whole new set of organs, and, after a few minutes, Naruko had a foot-long cock with balls the size of oranges dropping down in a sleek, shiny sack.
Hinata cooed as she advanced on the erect member, and managed to fit it all the way into her mouth, with a bit of help from the symbiote, which enlarged her throat to accommodate her makeshift gag while adjusting her windpipe to directly connect with her nasal cavity, allowing her to breathe through her nose and her nose only.
It took some getting used to, but Hinata was able to exclusively breathe through her nose while sucking her partner's penis. But then, Hinata stepped it up by placing one hand on Naruko's sack while thrusting the other into her cunt.
Naruko eyes glazed over from the service she was receiving, and Hinata neither went fast nor took forever, just going long at a steady pace with a steady rhythm.
But then she cranked it up a notch by going a bit faster, something that took Naruko by surprise. She realized that Hinata was learning fast, and made a mental note to compliment her.
Finally, Naruko just let all of the pressure go, pumping symbiote semen into Hinata's mouth, who gulped mouthful after mouthful down, thanks to her temporarily-modified digestive tract. Naruko also came from her pussy, drenching Hinata's hand in her real orgasmic juices instead of the fake "semen" both of them had been using.
Hinata even repaid Naruko's service by licking the remnants off of the vixen's cock, and Naruko tasted her own vaginal juices from Hinata's hand.
Then Naruko, member still erect, picked Hinata up, turned her around, and placed the Hyuga in front of her as Naruko's dick eased its way into Hinata.
Hinata placed her hands on the penis and thrust it in her, which gave Naruko inspiration. Soon, Naruko was thrusting against Hinata, both of them moving in sync. But Naruko then placed her hands on Hinata's breasts, groping them as two pairs of fox-like canines nibbled on Hinata's ear. Hinata actually squeaked from all of the attention at the first bite, but enjoyed her lobe being sucked on.
Hinata thought she was going to orgasm, but every time she thought she had reached her peak, Naruko eased off of the gas and thrusted much more slowly, giving Hinata time to fall from that climax before thrusting again.
After about 5 minutes of this, Naruko, instead of slowly building back up to her normal pace, started humping Hinata madly. The two of them went past their own limits, and black splooge, combined with white juices, just dribbled from Hinata's slit as they both had possibly the greatest orgasm either of them had ever experienced.
A few minutes later, both hosts were just lying on the ground, their sexes restored to normal, trying to regain their breath. Naruko rolled over to Hinata, kissed her on the cheek, and looked her in the eye, a mischievous gleam twinkling in the ex-fox's windows to her soul.
"Wanna try that again?"
AN: Well I hope everyone enjoyed that filler done by YRPotaku169. Personally I thought he did a good job and I'm glad we did this trade. Anyway I'm doing what can right now to update my other stories ASAP, but hey there are other parts of my life that have higher priority than fanficiton.