Flaming Cinders
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Chapter 7: A Burden
Cinderpaw awoke to the dull throbbing of her body, Great Starclan it felt like she'd been hit by a monster! She opened her eyes and found herself looking at the bramble roof of the medicine den sunlight filtering through..wait sunlight! How long had she been here? The ferns rustled as Yellowfang padded in with some herbs in her jaws she dropped them in front of Cinderpaw.
"Your awake, Good it's about time eat these they'll help with your leg" Cinderpaw stiffened her mouth went dry "what? Whats wrong with my leg? Yellowfang shuffled towards the back of the den,
"it's broken but these herbs will help it heal now eat then sleep then we will think about other things" Cinderpaw obediently lapped up the herbs and settled down waiting for sleep. Suddenly Firehearts scent wreathed into the den and Yellowfang stepped outside
"How is she?" Firehearts voice was soft and laced with concern Yellowfang snorted, "She's fine stop worrying" Cinderpaw heard her lead Firehearts away from the den so Cinderpaw had to strain to hear them.
" Fireheart, Her leg is broken I'm sorry Cinderpaw will never be a warrior" there was a long silence and when Fireheart spoke his voice was heavy with grief " it's my fault if I had just gotten her to listen to me.." Yellowfang cut him off " Fireheart there was nothing you could have done it was fate and Starclan knows that apprentice had more energy than a thousand suns"
Cinderpaw didn't hear the rest she would never be a warrior! She was a burden to her clan! She bit back a wail of grief if she made a sound they would know she had heard and she might get in trouble she sighed and tucked her nose under her paw sleep came and she gladly descended into the warm blackness.
So did you guys like it? That's chapter seven
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