Hi it's the Author again. No duh. I decided to do this author's note to answer some questions/comments from reviews. Even though there aren't that many yet. Anyway, on with the answering. First, the format. I would like to apologize to all for that mistake. I did not realize that was happening. I was just copying and pasting the chapters into the document manager and adding the authors notes. I will take care of that in the future. I even did it in the previous chapter.
Next. This one has only been commented on by one person so far, but I realize it will likely happen again so I'll just fix it now. The concern is that the story is too fast paced and that I shouldn't skip stuff like how Hermione and Hayley met up. About the fast pace part, that is something that I did on purpose. I didn't want to spend ages on summer vacation boring you guys with endless details that really don't matter. I decided to stick with the plot for now and not add countless words telling you about how Hayley spent her time waiting for stuff to happen. The same thing is true for leaving stuff out. I didn't want to include stuff like that because it doesn't really matter to the plot, and can easily be imagined how you want it.
Now, I ask you. Do you want to wait longer for chapters so that i can include meaningless, boring details that don't matter to the plot? Or do you want the chapters faster, with all the information that is important and nothing more/nothing less? Another issue that came up is the name. As I have already told you, the name is temporary until there is a name that a lot of people like. When that happens, I won't rewrite every time I wrote her name as Hayley, I'll just start using her new name. Rewriting it would just be a pointless waste of time that would require less time spent writing the actual story. Plus I would have to re-post all the chapters, which would really be ridiculous. Finally, the last issue is that Hayley accepting becoming a girl so fast isn't very realistic. I happen to disagree.
With all the crap that goes on in her life, why would something like that be such a huge issue to deal with? I mean seriously, compared to a Dark Lord coming after you and a giant basilisk trying to eat you, as well as a mass murderer turning out to be your innocent godfather who was betrayed by one of his best friends, becoming a girl isn't so bad. Besides, with that came the mass benefits, like being a dragon/human hybrid with super natural abilities and lots of cool powers. So really, I don't think its that unrealistic.
Alright, I think that's everything. If I didn't answer your question (Unlikely), write a review and I'll pm you the answer unless I think its something everyone should know. That should do it! Have a nice life and review my story. Seriously. Review it. Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase? *Exaggerated sad puppy eyes look*