Hey guys! Guess what? It's the first fight scene of the whole story! YAY!

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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.

A Couple Months Later

Kimiko was sitting in the stands watching the finals of the Chunin Exams. She was sitting near the new genins because her teammates had to sit with all the Uchihas.

Speaking of Uchihas, Sasuke Uchiha was fighting right now. He was up against some small, redheaded Sand ninja. It was supposed to be the best fight of the exams.

Sasuke had just attacked the Sand-nin with Chidori, and everything in the arena seemed to come to a stand still.

Sasuke and the Sand ninja were facing off when little white feathers began to fall from the sky.

Kimiko looked around and saw that spectators everywhere were falling asleep.

"A genjutsu?" Kimiko wondered as she focused her chakra, "Release!"

As the feathers disappeared, a loud explosion was heard followed by a giant smoke cloud around where the Hokage was sitting.

The Anbu ran over as fast as they could while Sand and Sound ninja filled the stands and started attacking whoever managed to release the genjutsu.

Kimiko formed several hand signs before shouting, "Crystal Style: Jade Crystal Blade!"

Two blue blades formed on her forearms as she rushed into battle. She had just cut down another Sound ninja when she heard someone yell, "Hey, Sasuke!"

She looked over and saw a pink-headed genin cover her head as two more sound-nin came at her.

Sakura covered her head waiting for death when she heard two thuds. She peeked out expecting to see Kakashi-sensei, but instead saw a girl with blue knifes attached to her arms, balanced on the bleacher in front of hers.

"Kakashi-senpai, you should look after your students better."

"Thanks, Kimiko. Sakura, just stay there while I trim the enemy's numbers down to size," said Kakashi cheerfully.

With that said both Kakashi and Kimiko jumped off and went to battle more ninja.

Kimiko bounded off only to be confronted by four sound ninja.

"Ha. This is gonna be a piece of cake," said one.

"She's just a little girl," said another.

"I don't even wan to bother with someone so weak," sneered the third.

"I'll take care of her," smirked the last one.

"You're underestimating me," warned Kimiko as they advanced on her.

"Crystal Style: Crystal Prison!" she yelled as crystals sprang up from the ground and entrapped the sound ninja.

Just then a kunai flew past her cheek, cutting it on its way.

"Ouch," complained Kimiko as she gently touched the line of blood on her cheek. She turned around, "Crystal Style: Hexagonal Shuriken!"

Several pink snowflake-looking shuriken flew out at her attacker. He dodged the attack, "You'll have to do better than that," he laughed, "I'm not as weak as them," he said referring to the crystal encased ninja.

Kimiko smirked and held up her arm as the blue blades reappeared. She lunged at the Sound ninja who dodged left.

She kept attacking him, but couldn't seem to hit him; he just kept dodging her attacks!

"This is getting pathetic," he remarked.

"Ahhh!" Kimiko yelled angrily as she attacked him even faster. He kept backing up until his back hit a pillar.

"Gotcha!" smirked Kimiko as crystal began encasing him.

Meanwhile

"Hold still!" shouted a frustrated Sand ninja as Tobi disappeared under ground.

The sand ninja fighting him looked around frantically.

"Why?" whined Tobi as he popped up again, "It's not fair! It's...two, four, six against one!" He complained as he went underground again.

"You think this is funny?" yelled an annoyed Sand ninja.

"Quit wasting our time!" yelled another.

Tobi popped up again and all six Sand-nin charged at him, kunais raised.

"Eep!" Tobi yelled in surprise as he hurriedly dodged all of their attacks, "Whew! That was close!" he said as he wiped imaginary sweat off of his masked forehead.

Shisui used his Body Flicker Technique to teleport behind the enemy ninja one at a time and take them out.

"Tsk. This is getting out of control," he said as more kept coming.

"Fire Style: Fire Ball Jutsu!" said Itachi as he incinerated five Sound ninja and went to attack another.

"Fine then. Ignore me." sighed Shisui as he took out another ninja.

"Come on girly."

"Give us your best shot."

"Fine. But just remember, you asked for it! Water Style: Water Wave Palm!" yelled Reiko as a strong jet of water came out of her hand, knocking her opponents over.

"Haaaa!" yelled another Sound-nin as he attacked her with a barrage of weapons from behind.

"Water Style: Water Encampment Wall!" yelled Reiko as water came up from nowhere and sprang up around her, protecting her from the man's weapons. As the water subsided, Leiko yelled out another attack, "Water Style: Paralysis Mist Jutsu!"

A green mist started to appear around Reiko and all the ninja she was fighting found that they were unable to move. Reiko smiled as she brushed her hair out of the way.

"Look the barrier!" said Gai.

"It's gone," stated Kakashi.

At that moment everyone looked up. As Kimiko raised her head to the sky, she saw Orochimaru being carried away by his team.

Her eyes widened.

The man's skin was deathly pale, with a thin face and long black, stringy hair. But the thing that scared her most was his golden, snake-like eyes that looked inhuman and deadly.

"Orochimaru..." she whispered. It was Him, the man that had ruined her life. She barred her teeth and started to run after him.

Shisui and Itachi were nearby when they saw her take off.

"We have to stop her!" yelled Shisui seeing her run after Orochimaru, "She can't take him on alone!"

Itachi nodded his assent. Both off them ran after Kimiko and caught up with her on the roof.

As they held her back she yelled, "Let me go! Let go! I have to...I have to kill him!"

As they struggled to hold her back, Shisui said, "You're crazy! You can't take him on! He's stronger than you; he's one of the legendary Sanin!"

"I don't care! Let go of me!" Kimiko yelled as she struggled against their hold.

"Leave him," commanded Itachi, "You can go after him when you've gotten stronger and are able to protect yourself against ninja like him."

Kimiko froze.

"If you want to be a ninja you should learn to protect yourself."

"Fine," she said as she shrugged the boys off and glared at Orochimaru as he disappeared.

Orochimaru's arms felt like they were on fire, as he fled the site of the failed invasion. Looking at the battle groung, he saw numerous Sound ninja encased in pink crystal.

He looked down and saw the girl that he had let live all those years ago glaring at him as Itachi Uchiha and another ninja held her back. Her eyes were like daggers.

Suddenly there was a loud crack followed by another, and another, and still more. All of the crystals had broken into fine pieces, and with them, so had all of the sound ninja frozen in the crystals.

Orochimaru frowned, "She could prove to be quite a nuisance. I should have killed her that night," was Orochimaru's last thought as Konoha fell out of his view.

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