sandra

Sky

Aw man we were so close

suddenly we hear nemo cry out

Help me

Everyone turns around and sees nemo in the net gill and I swim into it

Swim down gill orders everyone got into it.

It works the net falls into the water

Small good it does the dentist gets nemo into a bag

Roll out the window I'll catch up.

Nemo gets caught before he gets out

And the dentist puts him in a bowl

Gill sandy don't let me go belly up

Don't worry nemo we won't let you go belly up I promise

i yell

You are gnna be ok

just then darla appeared

Were dead!

i yelled

Aaliyah pov

It was morning

we hsad been up all night dory and i were dead tired while marlin was not tired i had dark rings under my eyes

DORY looked around tiredly

All right, do any of these boats look familiar to you? she starts to nod off before starting to sink.

i yawn verry quietly before my eyes close

No, but the boat has to be here somewhere! Come on, , we're gonna find it.

i woke up quickly

huh! Uh right we are so very.. very close

argh wheres sugar when ya need it

DORY also wakes up

I'm totally excited. she yawns Are you excited? a huuuge yawn escapes the drowsy tang

Same yawn here.. can't wait to see.. sandraagain …

No yawn time to huge yawn rest…

MARLIN turns around to see us yawn hugely

Dory, wake up, Aaliyah wake up. Come on.

he gently taped us trying to wake us up

i saw something that made us both wake up.

DORY

gasps Duck!

MARLIN laughs

That's not a duck. It's a-pelican! relizing the danfer we scream

Whooooaaaaah!

Aaaaaaaaaaaah!

i

Shrieks

before yellin dive dive

too late

The pelicsan scoops us up and tries to swallow us

We scream as we fall

Marlin managed in stopping his fall with us

lying against his back

marlin glares at the walls

We didn't come thus far to get eaten.

the wall spasms

woah hang on everyone we are going up

We made it back to the mouth

Grab the tounge

I ordered

we all did so

When the pelican opens his mouth the we saw see nigel and poor dory scream

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Not agaiiiin

Love a duck! nigel

Slaps geralds back

The three fish fly out

I gotta find my son Nemo!

NIGEL

[gasps Nemo? Hey, hey, hey! It's them ! Y'know the one we were talking about!

The one that's been fighting the whole ocean! Hey, I know where your son -huh?

Hey, wait! Come back! Stop!

, keep going! He's crazy!

i gasped weakly

Water need.. gasp .. water

I got something to tell 'ya!

Splat

Mine.

dory and i whimper

Whimpers

Okay, don't make any sudden moves. Hop inside my mouth if you want to live.

Hop in your mouth, huh? And how does that make me live?

Because I can take you to them

MARLIN

snnorted Sarcasticly

Yeah, right.

marlin.. gasps please wheeze.. water .. cant …. breeeathe dory moans

No. I know your son. He's orange, he's got a gimpy fin on one side.. accompanied by a young clownfish fully grown

That's Nemo!

marlin leaps excitedly

i yelp

Marlin don'tt aw barnacles

GULLS suddenly

Went crazy

Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine!

DORY was ppulled by some

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

i was dodging the gulls beaks with marlin.

Helllllllllllllllllllp!

i wail

NIGEL scooped us all upthem up

Fasten your seatbelts!

he Scops water

i was releived

Oh yes gasps thank youy sir!

Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine!

DORY and i looked out and whooped

Whoooooo! Woohooooo!

wheeee

Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine!

DORY laughs happily

Ha-haaaa! Ha ha ha ha!

i smiled this is fuuuun almost like a rollercoaster!

MARLIN didn't think so

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Marlin was not really having fun

NIGEL then yells

Everybody hold on!

dory and marlin yell

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

i was waiting for it

Haaaaaang oooooooonnnn!

Nigel cleared the gap while the sea rats hehe fail dang got stuk

Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine!

i couldn't resist

Now those are dumb birds

i Cracks up.

sandra pov

The dentist getsc the bag nemo is in to give darla but frowns

Poor little guy he muttered

Nemo is lying belly up

Sharkbaot gill tells in horror

Nemo then winks at us as the dentist

Starts to walk to the bathroom

Gill look he's ok he's playing dead so he can get out of here.

I gasp oh no not the trashcan nemo wake up I shout

gel arrives with us.

Where's nemo marlin anxiously said

There I gasp pointing

Nigel get in there marlin orders

I cud go en fer

Oh yes you can

Marlin whaa... Aaliyah exclaimed

ChArge

At seeing Nigel the darla screamed.

The dentist tried to grab Nigel but accidently drops nemo on a tray.

Dentist grand Nigel,

Gotcha

In despair marlin cries out nemooo!

,aND AND SHOVED HIM OUT

Out and Stay out

i groan

Nemo opened his eyes

Dady?

Darla grabbed the bag and started to shake it.

i gasps: oh no gill we gotta do something and quick.

Quick out of the tank gill ordered me

me and gill jumped out of the tank and began to slap darla's head

Darla in fear dropped the bag and it broke luckily nemo landed on the mirror

After slapping on the darla's head a few times we fell off onto the table.

Gill landed on on side of the mirror while sky landed with nemo

Sharkbait. sandy Tell your dad and friend ..I said..hi. Go get 'em. And with that he flopped himself on the opposite end of the mirror catapulting us into the went down with a yelp

The drAIN IS LIKE A WILD ROLLERCOASTER RIDE poor nemo and screams

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Daddy!

i reassured him we awere almost to the ocean

Whoa! Hang on !

Aaliyah

I'm so sorry. I truly am. nigel then flies away.

Marlin goes underwater dory and i follow

Dory wants to offer some comfort to her friend. Hey

Dory if it wasn't for you and Aaliyah and I wouldn't have mAde it here so thank you.

Marlin reaches for my fin

What where are we going?

Aaliyah It's over marlin sadly sighed

Nemo is gone...

i had to stoop him

Nobdont say that he's not gone I just know it.

Please dont go dory SaId .no one's ever been around me for this long before and if you leave... Dory chocked down a sob I just remember things when I'm with either of you because when I look at you I can feel it and I look at you and... I'm home she said in a chocked Voice

Please I don't want that to go away I don't want to forget

elsewhere

sandy and nemo shot out of the hole woah she yelled as a crab triebd to grab them she grabbed Nemo's fin' this way quick

They then began yelling

Dad!

Aaliyah!

Meanwhile sanme dy and dory still trying to keep marlinb from leaving

I'm sorry girls but I want to../

i then heard a sound shhh! Guys

Do you hear that

Marlin listen and sadly states sadly it sounds like

dad!

Aaliyah

Marlin!

Marlin looks and sees 2 orange fish swimming arouynd

Nemo? he Turns around ang gasps

nemo!

nemo hears his dad and yells

Daddy!

Marlin filled with joy raced with me and dory to the two clownfish

Nemo!

DaddY!

Alliyah! sandy yells happily

Sandra i yell gleefully we all hug

nemo oh nemo. Youre alive I don't believe it

i was laughing

I told you

Dory looked nervously you were dead I saw you and gasps here you are we found you you both aren't dead…

I was only faking it so I could get out nemo said.

sandy and nemo look sadly looks saddly

Marlin we were sorry we were wrong to talk back to you and disobey you

Nemo nods im sorry daddy I don't hate you.

Marlin hugs both of them

Nonono guys I'm so so sorry

i smiles well id say we all learned a thing or two from this journey

i smiles at everyone come on everyone lets go home. Dory you wanna come

With sure we can find a nice cave or two for us

Dory look shock can I

Marlin smiles come along dory

Dory squeels happily'

yaaay

i smile we can tell eachother what we did.

Now lets go home!

so we all made it home after a few days of swimming

nemo is able to go to school without his dad worrying

sandy and i smile knowing a year from now we will be having another adventure,

thanks for reading

finding dory will be done in a while

i just need to arrange what happens and i ned the script to look atv to help me thanks for understanding and don't worry i will update for the hollidays.

happy halloween all!