Kuronue's Return Chapter 7 rewritten...by.. KaraKurama
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FLASHBACK CONTINUED
When Axis performed the enchantment, Kuronue bent over in pain. He twisted and writhed on the bed. His hands held his chest and he clenched his teeth very hard.
A few moments later, the pain was gone. His hands felt the area where his injuries had been. His broken ribs had been mended, sore, but not broken.
How do you feel now, Kuronue," asked Axis.
"Much better, thank you. Still sore, but the breaks are mended."
"I'm sorry. I haven't completely mastered fully healing broken bones yet. That was the best I could do."
Midnight turned to a bowl of water sitting next to her on a table. Picking it up, she sat down beside him. She slid her hand under his head and helped him to sit up.
She held out the bowl to him, "Here, drink some water. It will help."
"Thank you, Midnight."
FLASHBACK ENDED
Kurama and Hiei were sitting on the couch in shock when Yusuke and Kuwabara showed up.
'What do they want now?' Kurama muttered loud enough for only Hiei to hear.
"Kurama, why are they here?"
"I don't know, Hiei."
Kurama stood up and turned to Hiei, "I don't want them here. I finally get Midnight back and they show up! Can't a fox demon get a little peace and quiet around here? I flied to America to get away from them and they show up anyway! I've had enough. They need to stop following me!"
Kurama went to talk to the two detectives.
He appeared by their sides in a flash.
"What are you two..." Kurama's sentence was cut short as his cell phone began to ring.
"What the hell is it now?" Kurama muttered as he answered it.
"Hello, Kurama. This is Koenma. I need you and the team to come to my office immediately! Bring everyone, even your sister! Hurry. Goodbye."
Kurama hung up his phone and put it away.
"Who was that?" Botan asked.
"Koenma. He said he needed everyone right away, including you, Kuronue, Midnight, my sister and her friend."
"Alright. I'll open a portal." Botan said, gleefully.
Botan opened the portal and everyone stepped in.
End of Chapter 7
Azhure here: Hey Everbody this chapter was rewritten by KaraKurama my co-authoress.
Shoutouts: Thanks so much KaraKurama your hte best. this is much better than the version I wrote. talk later
Kitsune: Hey kitsune were have u been no reviews i reviewed Shadowfox
anyway
reasons why I will not be on much!
starting August 15th- Marching Banda! I'm a vet. 2nd year of marching.
starting Augurst 29th- School! yeah i'll be a freshman
I'll try to update more but then again I have the biggest writers block imagineable.
later
Azhure out