Now, I'm sure some of you probably don't know but the sequel for You're So Far Away has been up for 10 days now and hasn't gotten a single review. I don't think its cuz my writing sucks. I figure that you don't know that it's up. It's called Forgive Me For I Have Sinned. That was the most voted one out of them all. I encourage you to read it and hopefully review because I will not write a single word of the second chapter until there are at least 3 reviews. I mean it when I say REVIEW OR I WILL NOT CONTINUE. So I will show you a segment of the first chapter so you will be intrigued to read the rest and hopefully for the sake of the fic, review.

Forgive Me For I Have Sinned

(Preview)

He embraced Riku tightly. Riku had for some reason been drained of his energy and couldn't break free of Krait's tight grasp.

Riku looked up at the vampire, "Let me go."

Krait put a finger to the boy's soft lips, "Quiet my love. All I need to do is bite you three times, and you will be mine. Riku, my love, with this first bite I will mark you as mine so no other vampire can take you away from me. You will address me as your master."

Riku tried once more to break free, "Bullcrap, I will never call you my master!"

Krait laughed, sending a shiver down Riku's spine, "Once I bite you Riku, a bond unlike any other will form marking you as my own. Even you won't deny it. You will be unable to refuse anything I ask you and will take any roll that I request with no hesitation. Whether that roll is slave or mate."

Riku dropped his head, "No…"

Krait kissed Riku's forehead, "Yes, my darling."

The vampire, without losing his firm grip, tilted Riku's head to the side so he could easily sink into the teen's slim neck, "Sweet dreams my love." He leaned down and sunk his sharp fangs deep into Riku's skin.

Riku gasped at the sharp pain but soon moaned as he started to lose consciousness, "S-Sora…forgive me."


Sora read the letter over again. Why would this guy wanna kidnap Riku? He decided it was time to find some answers. He couldn't let Riku down. Riku went after Sora when he ran away. Sora should do the same. But he needed some help. He was pregnant and Riku would never forgive him if he went out alone only to lose the child. Once again, he dug through some useless shit until he found his keyblade. Hopefully, Roxas could be some help.


Roxas was watching the news at home when he saw something he couldn't believe, "AXEL!!!!"

Axel walked into the room yawning, "Hey babe, what's wrong? You woke me up."

Roxas shook his head, "Sorry, but you can't believe what I saw on the news. I recorded it on TiVo so you can watch it!"

Axel shrugged, "Okay, let me see it."

Roxas rewound the TiVo and played it for Axel. When it was over he turned to the redhead, "It's him."

Axel stood there in awe, "Krait Judoka."

Roxas nodded. All of the sudden he heard a familiar name come from the TV screen, "Wait a second…" he turns up the volume and he and Axel listen.

Krait Judoka, the only known vampire to date in the world, has apparently captured another victim for him to call his own. A 17 year old named Riku Strife, son of Cloud and Kadaj Strife. Judoka left a note in Strife's home where he and his boyfriend Sora Shinra, the adopted son of Rufus and Reno Shinra, were residing. If you have any information on where Judoka may be or Strife, please contact the police immediately. When Shinra reported the kidnapping, he mentioned that it was strictly urgent that he be returned as soon as possible but would not say why. Judoka has a history of kidnapping young men ranging from 15 to 19 and they are never seen again. He is on the Top Five Most Wanted list for the FBI and the CIA. It is important this vampire be caught and Strife be rescued safely. In other news…

The TV screen went black as Axel turned it off, "Roxas, what can we do? Sora is five weeks pregnant and probably frightened. He's been through enough and then one of the Organization XIII's worst enemies shows up and kidnaps Riku."

So there's the preview. I strongly urge you to read and review it because if there are no reviews I can guarantee there will not be a second chapter.