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CHAPTER 7
Loren: well this is a funny story Mel bought your concert tickets from her brother who I really don't trust and he sold her fake tickets then the security guard kicked us out. so Mel wouldn't give up she try to broke in at the back door then your manager came out talking on the phone and he saw us then we told him everything that I love you so much we were ready to make a crime then he let us in.
Eddie: WOW.. am glad he let you in (smirking) and you love me huh!
Loren: ya me too and get over yourself (she said blushing)
Eddie: thank you Loren!
Loren: for what?
Eddie: for giving me another chance….
Loren: any time (blushing) as much as I hate to say this. I have to go home
Eddie: (looking at his watch) ok
Loren: (blushing) ok
"Eddie thought she's so cute when she blushed …now they are on Loran's drive way.. They got out of the car and Eddie walked Loren to her door"
Eddie: I had fun tonight
Loren: me too and thank you for every thing
Eddie: my pleasure and we should do it again
Loren: I'll like that.
Eddie: well good night MISS LOREN TATE (he said as he kissed her on the cheek and whispered in her ears) just so you know I'll never leave you like your father I promise.
Loren: (blushing) ok good night Eddie Duran (as she kissed him on the cheek)
"This is the best day of their lives then Loren went inside her house and saw her mom sitting on the coffee table crying. She got worried and hugged her mom and asked what happened."
Loren: mom what's wrong? What happened?(said worried)
Nora: Trent happened. (Said crying)
Loren: oh mom am sorry did he say something to you?
Nora: he told me he will never leave me alone and he'll take you away from me one way or another (said crying harder)
Loren: mom forget what he said. Am not going anywhere. He's dreaming and you have the real thing. Besides am 18 years old I can decide and choose for myself and I choose you. Ok mom I'll always choose you (she said as she hugged her mom)
Nora: I know sweetie but am scared he have money and he can do anything he wants.
Loren: I can have a restraining order tomorrow ok don't worry about me
Nora: it's my job to worry about you
Loren: I am 18 years old mom your duty is over I can take care of myself and I'll always be your little girl.
Nora: ok sweetie now I feel a lot better you look tired go to bed .. we will talk tomorrow good night sweetie I love you (she said as she hugged her)
Loren: I love you too mom good night.(she said as she hugged her back) walking to her bed room.
"The next morning at Loren's school. Loren woke up pretty exited little did she know she have a English test which she totally forgot about…now she's walking to where Mel is standing"
Loren: hey Mel
Mel: hey Lo (Mel said with turning around to face Loren) what are you happy about ..
Loren: I don't know when I woke up this morning I felt like I can do any thing
Mel: good for you…but please tell me this got everything to do with the rock star?
Loren: (blushing) may be
Mel: well prepare to do this test right so this happiness of your will stay the same..
Loren: (panicking) WHAT! WHAT TEST?
Mel: OMG don't tell me you forgot about our English test?..
Loren: OMG OMG OMG that is today?
Mel: ya sweetie (laughing at her best friend) it's on our first pried…
Loren: I'm screwed (mumbled to herself)
Mel: WOW what did that rock star did to you!?
Loren: shut up Mel..
Mel: you like him!…you totally like him..!
Loren: yes I like him Mel..but this is way too much
Mel: what is way to much?
Loren: we had two date's and I already forgot my test and it's easy to imagine our next date am gonna have amnesia!
Mel: (smiling) so there is a next time?
Loren: OMG Mel after everything that I said this is all you heard?
Mel: what I can't help it .. so tell me is there a next time..?
Loren: may be
Mel: don't lie to me Lo ..i know when you are lying..
Loren: ok fine he said last night was fun and he would love to do it again..(Before she continues talking her tweeter alert rang it was from Eddie it said..)
"I have the best night of my life last night with this amazing girl ..thank you LT for the amazing night you made it the best nights of my life."
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