TADA! New point of view. for half of the chapter cause i couldn't think of anyting else to write for the first character. Yes i know it doesn't say a P.O.V. but you'll figure out who it is soon enough.
Today you guys get a rant. No shout outs today. nope. Usually i am totally good with 3 reviews for like a whole story but thoses are usually from different people! Why can't any of you (Besides Lara D who is like the best reviewer ever : P) just review. please. Im not going to be mean and say no more chapters until other ppl reveiw but ill just be sad. And im totally open to hating to. if you hate this tell me why ill try and fix it. but you have to review to make this story better.
Now on with the story with some twists and turnnnsss. (Dont own max ride, blah blah blah)
THAT NIGHT
"Dude, you can't go after her! You barely know her." Fang growls at me.
"She won't be expecting me though! And you were sneaky enough to look where the mission told her to go. So I can fly there and be her partner. Tay-Tay can go with Fang…"
Max interrupts me, "Jeb put us with a certain purpose. We can't mess with it because what if the mission depends on the specific two people to be there? He might have put us with them to make our strengths stronger and our weaknesses disappear."
"But she'll be expecting everyone else!" I look to Max losing the battle.
"Which mean she probably will be expecting you," Fang looks over at Max and smiles.
I frown, "So!"
"We can't do that. We have to follow orders, dear." Max gives me a small smile. I whip around and head up stairs to my room. (A/N Know the character yet? Here have a hint)
How could she go with Fang over me? Why did Jeb think that Fang is now great for Max and not me anymore?
Yet, the change wasn't that bad. Tay-Tay was a lot more interesting than Max but so was Phoenix. Both of the new older girls were. Phoenix was hardly on my mind compared to Tay-Tay. She is on my mind like a movie playing random memories of when I saw her or she was doing something, replay, fast forward, pause, and stop are not used because it's just too nice just to watch it the way it is. The girl was making my brain mush.
"Dylan we need to get going." Speak of the devil. I look at the girl, her hair chestnut and flowing to the middle of her back. She has he classic smile on, the one that brightens her eyes.
"Okay. Be ready in a sec." I grab my book bag and stroll to the balcony at the end of the hall.
"To," She looks at the note. "Parkersburg, West Virginia."
She smiles as she gracefully takes off. I follow suit a little clumsier but she doesn't seem to notice.
"So, I heard you were a test tube baby," She breaks the silence with a beautiful crimson blush.
I laugh, "I think it's just one of those things that make me different from the rest of the flock. It doesn't offend me or anything so no need to worry."
"Angel must have lied 'cause she said not to ask you about it," That makes me frown. Does Tay-Tay listen to everyone's advice and follow it or just do whatever she wants? "I'm sorry, I know I probably should have listened but I'm so curious about it. You look so old but you're hardly seven or even six."
"I don't feel like a six or seven year old. I really feel nineteen; I'm just more naive than most nineteen year olds."
She chuckles, "You won't stay that way for long with me around, babe."
"Since you were dying to know about how I am a test tube baby, I want to know if Taylor Sara Taylor is your real name." I glance over to her to see her cheeks flushed with color.
"It's really Billy Joe Taylor. I'm not like Phoenix who would love to have a more guy name than Olivia, so I changed it to my favorite name at the time and became Taylor Sara Taylor or Tay-Tay for short." She makes 'short' higher than the rest making me laugh.
"You are one interesting character Tay-Tay."
"It's Taylor to you now. And thank you." She smiles. I feel like a totally idiot smiling hugely at her, but I love to see her smile like that. She looks so cute! Like a little kid.
"You're welcome," We fly in a comfortable silence from then on. It was nice just to know she was there besides me. For the rest of the time we are together we will be trusting each other with our lives and right now I feel like I can trust her with everything.
WITH IGGY (A/N 'Cause I know you want to hear from him)
I cannot believe this woman. She could be anywhere from the Rockies to Bluefield. And she has to be a trooper so she probably is farther than I can fly. It's not like I can see where the hell I'm going! I just keep on flying in the direction Fang and Max told me to go. And I don't even know if I'm flying in a God damn straight line!
Why'd the girl have to go and take off like that? Most of the stuff I said was half true. She's irritating and loud but that's about in other wise she's really nice to tease and talk too. The Bath Room incident was amazing. The look on her face was priceless. Now, I may be known as the perv in the house but I will not encourage that by saying anything else. The best part was when she fell on me. The moment right after she fell was when she looked so beautiful it is just mind blowing; how her hair feel over she wide, shocked eyes, the faint but defiantly there blush, and her mouth open in an 'O'. I did not blush because of the nasty perv thoughts in my head but how I saw us together, but with clothes on, in a park or something; a place without Erasers or missions, just us. Not that it's going to happen 'cause she pretty much hates me.
I don't blame her for hating me, I was pretty mean. I just don't like, at all, how she got Fang to talk and smile so much. He never did that around us. He gave us smirks at jokes but she gets a laugh out of him! It seems unfair that we have known him for almost all of our lives and he's known them for what five years! I couldn't believe what Angel showed me. She made me jealous of Fang by showing me a picture of Phoenix prego and I didn't even know her than! How fucked up is that?
Then I spot her in the black. Sitting on something, "Don't even start okay? That is not funny at all Claire."
Who is she talking too? Maybe she finally went insane! I swoop into some trees really loud but she doesn't seem to notice, "No, no! You have it all wrong. I am going to do this little mission by myself… What? Oh, I know. I don't need Iggy helping me protect a little girl. I did fine with my flock."
I walk closer and hear growling and barking. I stare at Olivia as she now illuminates a gray wolf, "That doesn't make any sense. What do you mean teaching us how to… No, no way! Jeb wouldn't do that would he?"
She strokes the wolf's head looking around, "I knew he was trying to play matchmaker, but why me and him? I'd take Gasman over him any day," She pauses listening to the wolf bark. "No, I am not harboring feelings. You know I still miss Caleb. Even if he is a Wolfie." She starts laughing.
I take a step forward and what do you know step on a freaking stick, "I cannot believe you just said that Claire. Oh God, that is gold!"
I step out into the clearing, "I'm not even going to say a 'I'm glad you finally made it'."
I hear the wolf growl at me as I walk closer to her, "I wasn't expecting one, but you should be glad because it was either Dylan or I."
"Hm, well, I'm a little glad. I don't want to have to listen to him talk about Tay-Tay for a freaking year!" She laughs as I stare at her in somewhat of an awe. Where was the smart ass comment about picking Dylan over me? "Listen, I may not like you, a lot, but it doesn't mean I'm going to take my sister's future husband away from her."
"You really think they're going to married?" I sit next to her. I stare out into the distance of darkness.
"She fawned about how his code was almost just like hers and to her that means soul mates." She stretches and nods to the wolf who then pads over to a tree and lies down but keeps both eyes open.
"Code?"
"You know your genetic code? Well it's the same concept for the lock on your brain. If Tay-Tay figures it out she'll know every little dirty secret you have and more," She grins evilly.
"What do you know about me then?" Could she know how I think she's beautiful or cute? That I am maybe, sortta, in like with her? Or that Fang made a bet with me about if we could get laid? Maybe, she knows about the extra bomb I hold on to? No, she probably already knows about that.
"Please, she won't tell me a damn thing. Even when I threatened her," She laughs he golden laugh.
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