Here is the next chapter, please R&R, it helps shape the story. Unfortunately, there is a low amount of fluff, so if you want more, comment, if you are happy with this amount, comment.
Yuri woke up in a large room, it would be totally dark if not for the moonlight. The floor was made wood, she could see that in the dim light. She heard a door open, a few footsteps, then the room was flooded with a blinding light. Yuri looked around and noticed she was in the auditorium. She then looked in the direction of where the door opened and saw a girl with dark blue hair that went to her waist. The girl said with a smirk "Hello Yuri, my name is Yumi" Yuri's mouth opened in shock "this was Yumi?" "I thought you had become a NPC!" Yumi looked at her with eyes devoid of emotion and and said "What's a NPC? I don't understand what you mean..." But then her eyes went back to normal and she started laughing. "It's not that hard to fake, I mean, how different are we from the NPCs? Not much!" Yuri asked "Why did you create 'Angel Player'? And when?"
Yumi looked at her with a smile. She proceeded to bring a wooden chair near Yuri and took out a pair of glasses and put her bag on the floor. she then pulled out a laptop from that bag and turned it on. She typed something into the laptop and clicked on some things, typed a bit more, finally she turned the laptop around and showed Yuri. "The version my friend Kanade has is 1.2.5, however if you notice this is version 3. I gave Kanade 'Angel Player' as a means of protecting herself from this worlds dangers" Yuri asked "If you were her friend, and could use 'Angel Player' then why would she need to defend herself?"
Yumi frowned "I was tired, of this struggle, of this world, of it's god forsaken rules and abnormalities, I couldn't take it anymore. I tried to convince Kanade and Asuka to come with me, and leave this place together. However Kanade was waiting for someone, and Asuka couldn't leave her brother, who for whatever reason didn't want to leave this world when I asked him. So I used this world's rules against it, I created a program that lets you create material and transform it. 'Angel Player' is also the reason why you guys can create your own weapons from dirt." A teardrop fell to the floor "Once the program was done, I gave Asuka and Kanade copies, and committed 'suicide' by using that program to erase my memory, to in effect cause me to fade into the next world" more tears fell to the floor "But that plan fell apart miserably, and Kanade and Asuka forgot about me, because the program didn't erase my memories, it can't do that, it erased this world's memories of me" Yumi started crying.
Yuri looked at this girl, her enemy in multiple ways, and felt pity. "Kanade never forgot about you, Keisuke didn't either" Yumi looked up and explained "I fixed their memories eventually, after studying what I caused, and reversed the process, but by then Kanade appeared to be a lifeless shell, a NPC, and Asuka and Keisuke too, I fixed their memories, but it was too late" Yuri said "But Kanade isn't a NPC, she human, she only appears lifeless, but she's back. and Asuka can be brought back too I imagine" Yumi looked at Yuri, puzzled "Kanade is normal again?" Yuri nodded Yumi asked "And what have you guys done that I failed to do in 3 years?" Yuri hesitated for a moment, not knowing the answer before she found one. "Love, we gave her someone to love her, and for her to love back" Yumi looked at Yuri. still skeptical, and asked "What about Asuka? She had Keisuke to love, and she still turned" Kanade said "I don't know, why don't you ask her? She could be normal again."
Yumi closed the laptop and nonchalantly said "Bullshit, she can't or won't come back" she put the laptop in the bag, zipped it shut and started walking towards the door. Yuri yelled "HEY, why am I here?! Why am I tried up!?" Yumi looked at her and said "Because you will only complicate things between me, Kanade, and Asuka" Yuri yelled out "And what about your minions?! Who are they?" Yumi sighed, turned around and said "Only NPCs, this program can manipulate many things, minds, objects, atomic structure, it effectively makes me god in the eyes of this world, or more specifically 'ADMIN' of this world." Yuri was angry now "What the hell did she mean 'complicate things'? That bitch!" Yumi bowed and started walking towards the door again saying "Don't worry, everyone will be released when this is done" Yuri yelled at her "What do you mean everyone?!" Yumi said "Your friends, Keisuke, some other key players" Yumi opened the door, held it open with one hand, shut off the lights and said in a sing-songy voice "Goodbye..." As the door closed with a SLAM!.
"Damn that bitch. I wonder who she's captured, most likely Fujimaki and Oyama as she sent those clones to the Nurse's Office. Keisuke and Asuka have also been missing so I'll add them to that list. I wonder if Kanade and Otonashi are safe..." She looked around and noticed that she was totally alone, and tied up. Her hands were behind her back, she thought "Wait, did they remove my knife?" She reached under her shirt and found the knife, she started cutting the rope that was binding her and was free soon after. She walked around and found her 9mm pistol and other knife that they must have found in her waist. Yuri blushed lightly "Goddamn perverts searched my unconscious body, hope they didn't frisk unnecessary areas..." She looked out the window to see two guards outside and thought "I can probably take them on, but there are sure to be more of them around. I need another route..." She looked around and saw an emergency fire exit, she got an idea.
Outside the two guards, which were clones, were carrying two AK-47's and were standing guard to make sure the leader of the group called the "SSS" couldn't escape. They were warned to not touch her but to use lethal force if necessary. RRRIIIIINNNNGGGGG the fire alarm went off the first guard yelled "Shit! she must have gotten loose and went out the fire exit on the other side!" They started running around the building.
The door they left behind opened a creek, then Yuri walked out and ran quickly to the Girl's Dorms. "Stupid Idiots" she thought to herself as she made her escape.
Kanade and Otonashi were in Otonashi's room on the couch watching a horror movie. Otonashi was surprised but not complaining about the fact that Kanade was hugging him tightly and sitting on his lap during the scary parts, Kanade was happy she had an excuse to sit on his lap and hug him. Right as the character in the movie turned a corner, Otonashi's phone rang behind him, causing him to jump a little. Kanade paused the movie and sat on the couch as Otonashi picked up his phone. Otonashi saw the caller ID was Yuri and answered "Hi Yuri, what's u..." before he was interuptted by Yuri saying "They got Keisuke, and the other too, Fujimaki, Oyama, Hinata, Yui, and some others aren't responding to my calls, they've gone dark" Otonashi got a little nervous and picked up his Glock and walked over to the window to see 10 guys running into the boys dorm. "Shit, they're coming for me too, I saw them enter the dorms" Yuri responded "Well, take care of them, they may be NPCs but they will use Lethal force on you without a second thought" Otonashi said "Ok, we'll meet at the cafeteria in 20 mins, you try to contact anyone else you can" Yuri responded "Ok, got it, you bring Kanade with you, I imagine you're with her?" Otonashi stammered "M-m-maybe, see you there" Otonashi hung up and told Kanade "Some guys are trying to capture us, they are coming here now, we got to go. We'll meet Yuri in the cafeteria" Kanade frowned "This date will continue later" She got up and activated Guard Skill: Hand Sonic, Version 6 and her forearms were protected by metal greaves, and her hands were protected by steel knuckles with some sharp blades protruding from her fingertips. Otonashi stated "I'm never going to piss you off again, Those look like they hurt..." Kanade said quietly "Do you like my new design?" Otonashi nodded as they heard their attackers outside their door. Otonashi got an idea.
Outside the door, 4 clones lined up in a breaching formation. All had pistol drawn but the one in front of the door, he had a sledgehammer to break the lock then kick in the door. The one clone in command said "Do it" and the one in front swung the sledgehammer down on the doorknob, breaking the lock, then swung around and hit the place on the door where the chain would attach to. The door didn't budge, the boy tried to kick it, it didn't work, he kicked it again, to no anvil. The other clone said "Hit the hinges" The boy with the sledgehammer moved again to hit the areas where the hinges attach but 4 bullets poked through the wooden door, all hitting the boy in the chest. The boy fell backwards and slumped against the back wall, bleeding heavily. "Shit! They killed him!" The boy's body started to turn into a black smoke, finally disappearing, leaving no trace behind. The 3 remaining clones started shooting through the door, firing until all their ammo ran out, which was 3 magazines each. They listened for any sounds of something falling or someone dying.WHAM! A fist punched through the door from the other side, from the hole fell out a hand grenade. It exploded as it hit the floor before any of the clones could react, killing them all.
Inside, the couch Otonashi and Kanade placed against the door was shredded from the bullets that went through it. On the floor, Otonashi was on top of Kanade, shielding her from the explosion. Kanade said "Do we really need to meet Yuri? I would rather stay here..." Otonashi got up, blushing, and said "I would rather stay too, but these guys most likely came with reinforcements that will be here shortly." Otonashi and Kanade moved the couch away from the door. Otonashi entered the hallway, pistol drawn, seeing no one there. He said "Clear!" Kanade walked out of the room and picked up one of the pistols off the ground and said "Pass me a magazine, at least I can help you this way" Otonashi passed her a magazine and asked "Do you remember the rules of a firearm?" Kanade looked at him and said "I'm not a little kid Yuzuru!" She said as she walked away. Otonashi thought "She forgot" Kanade was thinking "What was rule number 1 again?"
Yuri was at the cafeteria, she was 5 minutes late because she had to avoid patrols of the enemy, yet she was still the first one there. Yuri looked out the window and saw a sight she sighed in annoyance at, 4 clones were preparing to breach into the building. Yuri took out the grenade she always keeps on hand, and pulled the pin, counting down. "5...4...3...2..." and she threw the grenade at the door. Just as the clones opened the door wide and tried to enter the grenade exploded mid air BBBOOOOMMMM all the clones lay dead on the floor, and soon faded into thought "Shit this area is compromised...I need to call Otonashi" She took out her phone as she left the building and called Otonashi, no answer... She decided Kanade would most likely be with him, so she dialed her number, "Hello?" Kanade's voice asked. Yuri said "Kanade, the cafeteria is compromised, meet at the girl's dorms, my room. Kanade, if you're with Otonashi is with you, bri... BANG...him...BANG... I'm being swarmed at my current position, if I BANG-BANG-BANG don't make it, just try to find a Yumi, and shoot her..." Yuri hung up quickly and started shooting at the new clones that were following close behind, with fire axes and makeshift nightsticks, it would be painful if she were to be caught by that mob, however, these clones came nowhere close to the speed Kanade would fight with her at before they made peace...
Kanade pulled Otonashi's ear and told him what Yuri told her. Otonashi then thought of something important "How should we get in? We can't wait outside like sitting ducks" Kanade said "The door will most likely be left unlocked, Yuri does not usually lock it." Otonashi then asked "Now how would you know that?" Kanade then said in a calm matter "When me and Yuri were still fighting, I would sometimes enter her room and observe what type of person she is, or what she was planning." Otonashi laughed a little, and asked "what if she locked her door?" Kanade activate Hand Sonic and said "Then we break down the door."
I'm not sure when the next chapter is going to be released, I have a lot of things to do in the coming week, so I might post the next chapter either really soon (i.e. tomorrow or Sunday) or really late (i.e. Next Monday, the 15th) The next story I was thinking about writing is only in the early planning stage... (Note : it will not begin until this one ends.) (On an irrelevant note, I might write another fan-fiction, but it won't be a Angel Beats one...) I appreciate reviews and I will try to get the next chapter out soon, until then, bye.