Loosely based on the 1999 movie "10 things I hate about you". I highly recommend you to watch it if you haven't. This is a fan fiction that is centred on the teenage lives of Anastasia Steele and Christian Grey alongside their friends and family. This is my first fan fiction that I am determined to finish and I would very much like you to enjoy this journey with me. Enjoy and don't forget to follow, favourite and review (FFR) :)
Homecoming Disaster:
"So, I'll pick you up at 7pm?" Elliott asked over the phone to Liza
Liza giggled like the typical schoolgirl she was. Finally she had everything that she wanted. She was going to Homecoming with the most incredible, sweet and hottest guy she had ever laid eyes on. "Yes, 7pm. I can't wait!" Liza said huskily.
Elliott inwardly groaned. He couldn't believe he had the guts to ask Liza out to the dance. Well she actually prompted him to do so, but still he gathered the much-needed courage. She was just magnificent, a siren, someone who he could spend a lot of time with and never get bored of. Unlike what he was used to, Elliott was determined to make things work with Liza, and treat her like the queen she was.
Elliott cleared his throat, clearly day dreaming about Liza. "Perfect, I'll see you soon. Laters baby."
Liza blushed before bidding her farewell. Collapsing on her bed, whilst clutching her cell phone to her chest, she found herself falling hard for Elliott and she was ecstatic about it.
The night of the Homecoming dance fast approached, and within a blink of an eye, it was Friday. Both Steele Sisters were getting ready for the big night out. Anastasia was a vision, in a silver grey long sleeve gown. The dress oozed classiness as well as sexiness, the thigh high slit showed off her long lean legs. The bodice was made of mesh, covered in beautifully intricate, delicate Swarovski crystals and silver flowers. Ana was a beauty; she felt confident and comfortable and couldn't wait to knock Christian off his feet.
Meanwhile Liza was the epitome of girl next door meets prom queen. She was in a lilac two-piece dress, with a crystalized top and a flared out skirt. Liza was cute, chic and stunning. Despite the two contrasting looks of the sisters, they had to admit, they both looked good and compliments each other whilst getting ready.
Anastasia carefully made her way down the stairs, towards the front door where her Uber was waiting.
"Bye dad, I'm going to Homecoming!" Ana shouted towards Ray, whom was currently sitting on the couch watching a documentary about hyenas giving birth. Lets just say, compared to hyena childbirth, humans had it slightly easier.
"Funny sweetie." Ray said deadpan whilst continuing to watch the documentary. Ana could be hilarious sometimes, Ray thought.
But then Ray heard the familiar sound of the front door slamming closed and instantly got up. He was even more shocked to see Liza prancing down the stairs.
"What's that?" Ray questioned
"A dress for Homecoming."
"Hmmm, I keep hearing that word. Homecoming."
Liza rolled her eyes, before the doorbell rang. She opened it and revealed a nervous looking Elliott Grey decked out in a tuxedo.
Ray's eyes widen.
"Hi!" Liza said whilst fluttering her lashes.
Elliott was dumb struck. "Wow. Eer… wo-errr.. WOW!" Elliott stuttered, making a fool of himself.
It was Ray's turn to roll his eyes.
Liza giggled and took the arm of Elliott while directing him out of the door and away from the prying eyes of her father.
But Ray wasn't going to let this go. "Stop. Turn."
Liza really thought she had gotten away with this.
"Explain." Ray said whilst tapping his foot against the oak flooring of the foyer.
Liza sighed. "Okay, remember how you said I could date if Ana dated. Well she is dating. Remember Christian? They're perfect for each other, and that's perfect for me because Elliott asked me to go to the Homecoming dance with him, and I really really really want to go. So since Ana has gone then I guess I am allowed to go based on your rule."
Before Ray could say anything, Liza and Elliott were out the door.
Anastasia climbed the stairs that led to the venue where the Homecoming dance was being held. She searched the place trying to find Christian, only to feel a tap on her shoulder. She swiftly turned around and met stormy grey eyes. Her eyes widen as she took in the fine specimen of a man in front of her.
Christian was a beauty. Dressed in a black tuxedo that was tailored to every inch of his rock hard body, he oozed dominance and style.
"Wow." Christian said star struck.
Anastasia inwardly smirked as Christian offered a single red rose.
"You too," Ana beamed. She scanned Christian head to toe before asking, "Where did you get a tux so last minute?"
Christian smiled, his Ana always asking the weirdest questions. "Oh, something I had laying around. Where did you get a dress so last minute?" Christian questioned.
"Oh, something, you know, I had laying around." Ana said coyly.
Christian let out a baritone laugh, and then offered his arm to the beauty beside him.
Together, the two souls danced the night away.
Ray was back on the couch after the eventful evening with his daughters. He knew he was being irrational, but he felt like his girls were growing up too fast. No Ray, you're scared that they might get hurt both emotionally and physically. Ray was overprotective, but he knew he had to overcome this one way or another.
Ray settled down again on the couch to watch another wildlife documentary, when the doorbell rang once again.
What now? Ray thought clearly irritated by the disturbance.
Ray opened the door, only to be met with another teenage boy.
"Hi Mr Steele, I'm Jax and I'm here to pick up Liza for the dance." Jax said smoothly.
Ray just stared at the boy before slamming the door in Jax's face.
The dance was in full swing, and both couples were having the time of their lives. Christian was spinning Ana around the dance floor, while she laughed. Once they came down from their high, Ana clung onto Christian as they slow danced.
"I'm sorry for being so difficult with you." Ana said. "I just didn't know if your intentions were pure." She admitted.
Christian smiled down towards her. But it didn't reach his eyes. He didn't know whether or not to say anything about Jax. But at this moment, he just wanted to forget the world and live in a bubble with Ana.
But this was short lived, as Jax came storming towards the young couple and pushed Christian away from Ana.
"Hey! What the hell is Liza doing with your nerdy brother?" Jax yelled. "I didn't pay you to go out with Ana, so your brother could swoop in and take out my girl!"
Christian's eyes met with Ana's blues. Eyes that were just a moment ago filled with adoration, harden like steel.
"I'm such a fool." Ana whispered before storming off.
Christian chased after her.
Watching the whole ordeal was Jason, who quickly sought out Elliott, who was getting a drink for Liza.
"I think shit has hit the fan." Jason said as he motioned with eyes towards a seething Jax.
Jason and Elliott made their way towards Jax, with Jason attempting- and failing- to ease the situation.
"Jax, friend comrade, pal-OOHH" Jason said before being pushed to the floor by Jax
Elliott rolled his eyes and begun to help Jason get up, but Jax began to rant.
"You've messed with the wrong guy. Now you and that little bitch are going to pay!"
Elliott was not having it. He turned around and faced Jax "Okay that's enough! You've crossed the line."
Jax smirked at Elliott before punching him in the face, effectively placing him right next to Jason on the floor.
"Oh come on! Get up you little punk!" Jax hollered, but before he could do anything else, he felt a tap on his shoulder.
There stood a very angry Liza.
Jax turned around only to be socked right in the nose.
"Shit Liza! I'm shooting a nose spray ad tomorrow!" Jax whined.
"That's for making my date bleed." Liza began
She then punched Jax in the nose again. "That's for my sister!"
And the final blow was when she kneed him in the balls, "And that's for me."
Jax slowly fell to the ground.
Liza trampled over Jax's body and helped Elliott up.
Ana quickly exited the hall, trying to escape the eyes of the faculty. She could not believe that she had been fooled by Christian-fucking- Grey.
"Ana! ANA! Stop!" Christian begged behind her. He rapidly caught up to her and grabbed hold of her arm, so she could listen.
"What?" Ana boomed. "You got what you wanted! Congratulations, I hope that money makes you happy"
"It was never like that!" Christian tried to explain.
"Really? What was it then? A down payment now and a bonus for sleeping with me?" Ana questioned.
"I didn't care about the money! I care… I care about you, Ana." Christian tried to reason.
Ana scoffed before taking a hold of the rose Christian gave to her at the beginning of this unforgettable night. She threw the single red rose towards his feet, and said. "You are not the person I thought you were. Leave me the hell alone."
With that, Ana ran down the stairs and never looked back. She didn't see the single tear the fell down Christian's cheek.
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