Pretear Discovering Facebook

Chapter 7

Mannen tagged Sasame and Takako in a video.

Kei and Goh liked this.

Comments:

Kei: Nice kiss Sasame.

Goh: You both were making goo goo eyes at each other, that's so weird.

Takako: Hey, how's it weird to flirt with the one you love?

Sasame: It was a nice angle though.

Takako: ..

Hayate: It's about time you guys stop teasing Himeno and me.

Sasame: Oh yeah, that reminds me.

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Sasame tagged Hayate and Himeno in a video.

Comments:

Hayate: You are dead Sasame.

Sasame: Hehehehehe :D

Kei: Wow, watching Himeno and Hayate actually isn't weird to watch. :P

Himeno Awayuki: That's not weird at all!

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Hayate: I thought "dates" were suppose to be private.

Comments:

Mannen: Not for me, I have plenty pictures of Sasame with Takako and Hayate with Himeno.

Sasame: How the heck did you get pictures of Takako and me? I didn't even hear you..

Mannen: It's a master skill of mine, bro.

Himeno Awayuki: ...

Mannen: ...?

Himeno Awayuki: It's mainly my fault.

Hayate: ?

Himeno Awayuki: I gave him that camera...

Goh: Nice move Himeno, you better watch your back.

Hayate: And you better watch yours fire boy.

Yayoi Takato: Mannen, you will pay for ruining Himeno's love life with Hayate!

Himeno Awayuki: He didn't exactly ruin it.

Mannen: Everyone's having a convo on my status!

Goh: It's not your status and what does it mean to you?

Mannen: They're are meant for instant messaging, not on comments!

Kei: Free country.. (not completely)

Mannen: Since when was Japan a free country?

Goh: Since the day you became too dumb to read a history book.

Mannen: Another convo!

Mayune Awayuki: And too dumb to read a comment.

Himeno Awayuki: Nyah... we don't care Mannen. :P

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Mannen tagged a picture of Goh.

Mannen, Himeno Awayuki, and 10 others like this.

Comments:

Kei: How childish...

Himeno Awayuki: Ahahahahaha, sorry Goh, but you look so funny in a skirt!

Goh: I'm totally going to break your camera Mannen. -_-

Hayate: Um... wow O.o

Sasame: LOL XD

Kei: Sasame, that makes you seem like a teenager.

Sasame: Well I am only 18 in Leafe years...

Himeno Awayuki: O.o

Himeno Awayuki made Leafe group.

Leafe Group Wall:

Hayate: Leafe group?

Comments:

Himeno Awayuki: Couldn't think of a better name.

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Leafe Group Wall:

Mannen: Nice, we can talk in a group now. :D

Comments:

Kei: How annoying.

Sasame: I agree with Mannen. :D

Kei: You just love pestering us don't you?

Sasame: I pester cause I love. :D

Hayate: You smile way too much, Sasame.

Sasame: AND you don't smile enough Hayate. :)

Hayate:...

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Himeno Awayuki added Valdimir Stalin as a friend.

Comments:

Mannen: Who the heck is Valdimir?

Hayate: I had the same idea...

Kei: Is it a girl or a boy?

Himeno Awayuki: Why are you so anxious to know?

Mannen: Tell us!

Himeno Awayuki: Nope..

Mayune Awayuki: 'Gasp' Don't tell me he's that super hot transfer student!

Goh: So it's a he..

Kei: He's 'super hot'?

Himeno Awayuki: Can we talk about this on IM?

Goh: What's so wrong about talking about it right here?

Mannen: Yeah...

Goh: Mannen, you say it's wrong to have a convo on comments.

Himeno Awayuki: HEY JUST TALK ON IM!

Hayate: Why do I feel like I'm being ignored?

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Himeno Awayuki messages Goh, Kei, Sasame, Mannen, Mawata Awayuki, Mayune Awayuki, and Takako.

Himeno Awayuki: Hey guys.

Goh: So who is this Valdimir?

Mannen: And what do you think of him?

Sasame: Do you see him everyday?

Himeno Awayuki: Stop hammering me with questions!

Kei: Then tell us!

Himeno Awayuki: He's only a friend..

Mayune Awayuki: A hot friend...

Goh: Himeno, are you cheating on Hayate?

Himeno Awayuki: How can you even ask that? Of course not!

Sasame: Well, you hesitated to answer us at first..

Takako: And you probably think he's hot too...

Himeno Awayuki: He's okay..

Mayune Awayuki: Are you crazy, he's the hottest Russian man alive!

Takako: I didn't know Russian guys could be sexy..

Sasame: ?

Mawata Awayuki: Sooo how'd you guys become friends?

Himeno Awayuki: I just happened to bump into him every place every day.

Mannen: Sounds like a stalker to me.

Kei: Does he like you?

Himeno Awayuki: I doubt it..

Goh: I'll see about that.

Himeno Awayuki: Why are you guys so worried?

Mannen: Listen Himeno, I didn't give up on you for Hayate for nothing...

Goh: You probably would even get her if you tried, you're way too young.

Mayune Awayuki: I didn't hack you guys for nothing either.

Mannen: Age is nothing when it comes to love.

Kei: Okay, this was an akward moment.

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Himeno Awayuki's Wall

Valdimir Stalin: Hello beautiful.. ;)

Comments:

Himeno Awayuki: O.o

Hayate: Who the heck are you calling beautiful pal?

Valdimir Stalin: I do believe I was calling Himeno beautiful.

Mannen: This proves everything Himeno!

Himeno Awayuki: Shut up stupid!

Goh: Hey Valdimir?

Valdimir Stalin: Yes, person I don't know?

Himeno Awayuki: Goh, shut up!

Hayate: Why would he need to shutup?

Mannen: CONVO!

Kei: Go jump off a cliff Mannen! It's not your status!

Goh: Anyways...

Himeno Awayuki: Goh, please don't!

Goh: Why shouldn't I?

Himeno Awayuki: Just because!

Hayate: Because what?

Himeno Awayuki:...

Goh: Anyways, Valdimir, what is Himeno to you?

Hayate: Yes Valdimir, what is she to you? I want to know..

Himeno Awayuki: No guys let's not start having a convo on my wall, this is starting to be like a chat room.

Mannen: HA!

Kei: Be quiet Mannen!

Goh: Why Himeno? Are you hiding something from us?

Himeno Awayuki: ... W-why sould I be hiding anything?

Goh: Mr. Stalin, would you please answer?

Valdimir Stalin: If your asking that I like her, that wouldn't be even close..

Himeno Awayuki: Phew..

Goh: And what do you mean by that?

Valdimir Stalin: Why should I tell someone who I don't even know?

Mannen: So close...

Himeno Awayuki's Wall

Valdimir Stalin: Himeno, can you talk to me after school tomorrow?

Comments:

Himeno Awayuki: Okay..

Goh: What, are you going to ask her out?

Valdimir Stalin: And what if I do?

Hayate: I'll rip you to shreds.

Valdimir Stalin: So, what does my little princess mean to you?

Hayate: Back off, she's mine!

Himeno Awayuki: Calm down Hayate!

Valdimir Stalin: She doesn't look like anyone owns her..

Himeno Awayuki: You are not making it any better Valdimir!

Valdimir Stalin: Then would it make it better if you became my girlfriend?

Hayate: I told you to back off!

Valdimir Stalin: You have no right to tell me that.

Himeno Awayuki: He kinda does.

Valdimir Stalin: In what way?

Hayate: I'm her boyfriend!

Valdimir Stalin: It doesn't seem that way.. from the way she flirts with me.

Hayate: WHAT?

Himeno Awayuki: WHAT?

Mannen: CONVO!

Kei: I told you to be quiet!

Sasame: This doesn't sound good..

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Hayate messaged Himeno Awayuki.

Hayate: Himeno...

Himeno Awayuki: Uhhh, yes?

Hayate: Is there something I should know about?

Himeno Awayuki: Uhh

Hayate: Who is Valdimir?

Himeno Awayuki: He's a senior at my school.

Hayate: That's not what I wanted to know...

Himeno Awayuki: Well that's all there is!

Hayate: I know when you're hiding something Himeno.

Himeno Awayuki: I'm not hiding anything from you!

Hayate: Then why did that guy just say you flirt with him?

Himeno Awayuki: Umm

Hayate: Himeno, do you like this guy?

Himeno Awayuki: No!

Hayate: I thought love was all about trust and honesty!

Himeno Awayuki: It is!

Hayate: Then why are you lying to me?

Himeno Awayuki: I told you he means nothing to me!

Hayate: I'm starting to think differently...

Himeno Awayuki: I'm serious!

Hayate: I'm sorry Himeno, but I don't think we can be together anymore.

Himeno Awayuki: What? NO! He's only a friend, he has tried flirting with me, but I backed away!

Hayate: You should have thought of saying the truth before.

Himeno Awayuki: Please Hayate... I just didn't want you to hurt him..

Hayate: Now you're defending him.

Himeno Awayuki: Ahh, please don't take that the wrong way!

Hayate: Too late. I'm sorry Himeno...

Himeno Awayuki: Hayate no, please!

(A/N: I hated doing that, but I wanted to make the story attract more attention.)

Hayate changed his status to single.

Comments:

Kei: What?

Mayune Awayuki: Are you kidding me?

Goh: What the heck?

Sasame: WHAT? D:

Takako: What did you do for her to dump you?

Hayate: I dumped her.

Goh: WHAT?

Sasame: From all that hard work and you break up with her!

Mannen: That was a stupid move Hayate!

Hayate: Shut up, all of you, I've made my descision..

Mawata Awayuki: Don't you love Himeno anymore?

Mayune Awayuki: Curses..

Hayate: Y-yes, I still love her!

Takako: Then what made you do that?

Hayate: I don't know if she really loves me anymore...

Sasame: Oh Hayate...

Mannen: Poor Himeno, she must be so depressed right now.

Hayate: How do you think I feel?

Goh: Then you shouldn't have made that stupid move!

Hayate: I did what had to be done! She might have been cheating on me!

Kaoru Awayuki: She's not the type to cheat...

Natsue Awayuki: I may have only known Himeno for a few years, but she's too trustworthy to do anything to hurt you.

Hayate: I'm sorry Mrs. Awayuki, I've made my descision for now.


Sitting in the dark corner of her room, Himeno sobbed for what seemed like years to her. She never felt so much pain ever since her mom died.

"Himeno, open the door!" Her family shouted through the door, they were knocking on the door loud enough to wake up the animals on the estate.

'Just go away.'

"Himeno please, we need to talk!"

'Please, I want to be alone!'

She could feel her tears running down her face soaking her clothing completely. Himeno was drowning in her own sea of despair.

'This doesn't mean, I'll become evil.. no one deserves to feel my pain.'

"Himeno, open the door," Mayune shouted.

'I just want to be alone.'

Crawling to her closet, she opened up an old shoe box and found her pocket knife her dad gave her after her mother died.

Looking right at it, she reached for it but hesitated. 'No, I'm stronger than this.'

She was about to put the shoe box away, then she flashed back to Hayate's message, feeling more tears running down her skin. Her heart felt as if it was jabbed by Hayate's wind sword.

'I'm lying to myself, I'm no stronger than when Mawata was rejected.'

Himeno picked up the knife and pulled up her shirt. 'This is only going to hurt a little bit.'

'This is stupid, I can't let myself become worse!' Himeno shook her head and pulled her shirt back down; she opened the bedroom windows, then threw the knife outside so she wouldn't see it again.

'I've got to be strong! Letting myself become emo is not going to help!'

She threw her fist in the air with a big smile on her face. 'I'm not the Pretear for nothing!'

Himeno punch the air a few times and did a round house kick from behind. 'Even if I'm sad... It's not the end of the world! I'm much better than to think about cutting myself.'

Satisfied with her kicks and punches, she slipped in to bed, very confident about school the next morning. 'I better get some sleep, before I become sleep deprived.'

Shutting her eyelids with a peaceful look on her face, she pulled the covers up to her neck and passed out in to dream land.

'Goodnight mom... goodnight... Hayate.'


Lol, I didn't like how the ending turned out before, so I changed it... The fact that Himeno becomes emo, wasn't a very well thought out idea. The sudden mood change only will make the story worse than it probably was before. So I decided it's about time to change that and let Himeno pick herself up from a broken heart and try to move on. But... I'm not going to keep them seperated for long, that would kill me. Anyways, plz review! ;D

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