Chaos Chapter 7: beserker mode, a final fantasy xii fanfic

Ok, I have wrote over 6,000 words now and not one of you have gave me a review, *sighs* could someone please be nice enough to send me just one review. I really need to know what you want. It is almost christmas and all I want is one stinking review. I've invented a brand new character anyways for this chapter and I feel like keeping Cecilia alive for now.

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Fenren and Flare selpt in the Rv that night. The peace was stronger more than ever now that Amon had a new respect for Pricly. Fenren had seen pricly fight hallows with his sword being summoned but he had never seen him in Bankai. He saw Pricly not only as a power never to be trifled but as a power that he wanted. No not wanted but needed. His powerful thirst for power has reached it peak. He must learn all the stages of Bankai and his hidden powers. Until then he will fight people more powerful than himself, more scary, the type that loved to beat someone or something till it stops twitching. Fenren had felt the fearsomeness of the Arrankai and Pricly battling. How cool he was, was only feeding the thirst to fight the only way to keep that thirst is to fight but he must not become the enemy he must learn how to control it at its worst. Fenren deep thinking after his and Flares friendly chit-chat had pervented him from sleeping nearly the entire night. He barely got a hours worth of sleep so now he had to drink nearly a entire pot of coffie just to know that he would stay awake throughout the entire day.

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There was a knock at the door. Mikal the General of battle tatics said, "I'm busy tonight." the knocking continued, "god damn it I am busy I will turn it in and pay the fine tommorow." The knocking continued. Mikal ran and opened the door. "Wh.. Vaiola," she fell into his arms she was burned by death fire luckily she was a lycanthrope so she was able to tolerate most fires. He picked Vaiola and ran to the infermery. "Doctorgod, she was burned by deathfire!" An old man talked to the nurses and asked them to finish up this case and walked over to a table. He looked at Mikal and Mikal imediately put her on it. The doctor got a cream out and told Mikal to take off all but her underwear then leave. Mikal even though he was a teenager he knew this old man very well and did exactly as he had said. hours past and yet nothing happened. Mikal began to fear that the doctors amazing reputation for never letting anyone die was at a end. Then he remembered who this was, this was a man who would give his own life for a patients. The type of man who lived to the heros code, "To fight till your very last breath at all costs." Only few men at a time have ever lived this code and god damn it this man was one of them. Gabriel, The head aid walked out and motioned for Mikal to come in. Mikal followed him in and saw a smiling Vaiola, he smirked. She coughed then said, "so about that book I nearly died trying to get from the werepyre castle. You owe me a date now," after saying this she pulled out a book and waved it in front of him. It was the secrets of the norm arua. Mikal sighed, "when your healed," he gave her a wink. The doctor god smiled, "your fine Vaiola, now go get some food. I suggest the White Dragon for all types of food." Mikals eyebrow raised, "listen I've got to finish a 10,000 men release to war form by tommorow and then I've got to decide which ones are to go, to be short I am to busy." Vaiola looked at him with a puppy dog face her brown eyes was about to break his heart, "Fine! just stop it." She giggled in delight.

Mikal helped her into his yellow electric sports care with a battery that can last for hours, upon hours going 300 mph. Luckily for her sake he always followed the speed limit. The speed limit was 65 hours per hours so he went at 70 already having the great, "how dare you stop me, " speech ready. when the towns lights neared he looked at Vaiola and smiled, "thanks." She put her hand in his black hair and ruffled it up, "the date is thanks enough. The rest is you owing me for that book." Mikal laughed "I be sure to check it out." She looked puzzled and asked, "what do you mean, you own it now. You even payed me to get it." Mikal kept laughing then there was gunfire right before he was going to speak. He appearently was a good driver because he had all but the last bullet for the reload miss the car and that one bullet shot the back wheel, causing them to spin out and crash into a tree. Mikal was barely awake after the crash while Vaiola was out cold. Mikal punched the door out of the car and was about to get Vaiola to town when the entire clip of bullets from the machinegun hit his chest.

The sniper said in amazement of Mikal appearently being unharmed, "what the fuck." Unluckily Mikal heard this and he pulled out a revolver shooting the sniper right in the mouth. There was clapping behind him and another voice said, "so you live up to your reputation of being the castles best warrior. But, brother I fear there must be a eye for an eye." Mikal turned around and shot all the bullets at the Hera. Hera took all the bullets just like Mikal had done. Hera breathed in and shot a firery breath at Mikal. Mikal merely put his hand in front of him and as the fire went around him and the car he laughed then said, "Hera, my brother. You are still to weak to try and kill me. Why don't you run off and work for those hallows like you have been since that war started." Hera stopped and pulled out a flare and shot it to the fueltank of the car. Mikal went and caught the flare and turned to where Hera was. "damn it you wasn't trying to kill me, you was tring to see how dangerous I was for the Arrankai. When are you going to learn that being the evil scientist will kill you." Mikal walked to his car and got Vaiola out right as she was coming to. She muttered as he picked her up bridal style so that the way they could pop easier. Pop.

They was in the infermery again. The Doctorgod was sleeping in the back so Mikal put her on a table and said, "I'll be back." He walked down to the back door and knocked on it waking up the doctorgod and walking in. The Doctorgod walked to Mikal and said, "I see bullet holes in your clothes but no sign of penetratration, what is the problem." Mikal shook his head, " a sniper made us get in a wreck almost at town. I need you to check on Vaiola see if she has internal bleeding or anything." The Doctorgod went over to the table where Vaiola was sitting on and looked at her. "try moving your bigtoe." After this she tried for a good few minutes and said, "can't it feels cutoff." The doctorgod nodded and made a mixture out of herbs and certain pills. He then boiled it in water till the water was a murky yellow color and told her to drink it. She drank it wanting to puke and gagged out, "it tastes like an ancient book which was bland back then." Mikal laughed and said before the doctor had the chance to talk about the past, "move your toe now." She tried and it barely moved. "Hey it works, Mikal it works!" she jumped onto Mikal hugging him. Mikal laughed but quickly stopped and looked at the Doctorgod. He was nodding and mouthed, "It will regrow in less than a day make sure those shoes stay on." Mikal nodded and said, "come on we still gotta get my car." Vaiola frowned and said ,"fine but lets take a alchemist so that the way there is no pushing." Mikal sighed knowwing that alchemists costed a bunch of money and he just spent most of his paycheck on her for the book.

Mikal was broke, dead broke he even had to use his credit card to pay for the fixing from alchemist. It costed nearly 30,000 gold. (30,000 gold is the equivilant to 30 million dollars U.S. At least in my stories.) Mikal was grumbling on the way back to the castle. Vaiola thought it was her fault till he said "expensive ass, mother fucking, son of a bitch car," barely loud enough so that she could hear without him noticing. They drove up to the gate and he stopped, "don't get shot now." they both smiled and she waved as he drove to the car garage. The alchemist was in the garage building a motorcycle for a man who is buying it for a 1,000 gold. Mikal had to resist the urge to kill the man for highway robbery, but even with his status as a general he couldn't get away with the murder of a innocent life. Mikal made sure everything that he strted to mutter was not heard by the alchemist. He from the garage walked to the castle, to the libarary. He tried to open the door but appearently Vaiola had locked it up and went to bed. He took the example and went to bed himself. even though the amount of money that he was paid with his job only wen into his hobby of collecting books. most of the books end up into Vaiolas care at the libarary. But a few of the end up in his quarters or study. Now his ideaof a few was unlike most people his idead of a few was more like a few hundred to the normal person. Mikal found his bed in his room with barely any walking space because of mountains of books. Before he was able to sleep he had to take of 6 or 7 books off his bed. "I forgot how dirty this room was. How long has it been a month or 2. Maybe even 3 or 4 since I last came in here."

Fenren and a few other people felt the amazing energy of a Arrankai. This one unluckily was the leader and most will die from his rage of losing 2 of his most elite men. Pop. He was there killing every man or woman that got in his way Pricly turned into Bankai and started to fightthis man but this did not last. Pricly was about to be killed when the Arrankai had summoned his blade and was at half of his remaining power. Scar ran and fought the Arrankai putting it down to around 40% of energy. Scar even though he had summoned Bankai was barely anything against this monster. People started to run. Right as he was about to kill Scar A bullet hit him right between the eyes distracting him for a moment. Fenren ran over with his shotgun and sword and unloading every single shell he had onto the Arrankai. After this they fought for about as long as he and Scar fought but the Arrankai still had around 35% of his energy left. Fenren was about to be blasted apart, when Flare ran into theway and absorbed enough energy to keep Fenren unharmed. Amon laughed, Fenren was glowing yellow his beserker mode was unleashed and now he was so powerful that when the Arrankai attacked Fenren, Fenren broke its' skull. He wiped the brain, cartlidge, bone, and blood on the ground. Amon started to laugh and said, "good job but she is still live and kicking." Fenren walked over to where Flare was and indeed he could feel he faster than nomal pulse. It came from the mass amount of energy she had just absorbed. Fenren started to stop glowwing and everybody who was still alive looked at Fenren and did not know whether to run away or congragulate him as the glowing stopped. Fenren fell flat on his back.

Her eyes opened and saw that everybody was in the Rv. Cecilia was the one driving while everyone else in their group. Flare saw 2 other people in the Rv. i was Hawk-eye and Amon they was talking about something but Flares headache pervented her from listening. Cecilia explained what had happened and also that everyone went home through a portal that was around a mile away from where the battle took place. Flare looked at Fenren wondering why he had gone into beserker mode until, "He loves you you dumb broad. if it wasn't for you nearly dieing we all would be dead." Scar and Pricly was starting to wake up. Cecilia had explained to them what happened to. Hawk-eye suddennly said, "congrats Fenren now there is less than a dozen people on this half of the planet I hope your proud." Amon laughed at this and Pricly kept the rest at bay. Amon said for once in Fenrens defence, "be nice to the rat, he did save our lives. Also because of him you are now my 2nd in command."

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Well there you have it, another side plot that will soon fuse into the main. Also in the next chapter I will kill off Cecilia so please tell me what you think of her ultimate ending. I need reviews to, I mean I can only make up this shit for so long and work on my own. This is my first story, remember?