The Six Golden Tickets

Chapter 7: Doomsday

Well it's the big day for the six lucky winners to arrive at the factory. It was bright and early that day, all six of them were standing out side the gate. Willy was inside behind the door's to the main lobby and was peaking out through a peak hole on the door. He was very nervous. Charlie was also there with him and said "Go on, don't be scared."

Willy shook his head no, he didn't want to see that girl Allison again. So Charlie grabbed a microphone, that was hanging up on the wall for him to talk into a loud speaker outside and said "Open The Gates."

Willy's took a deep breath and got a hold of him self. Charlie was still holding the microphone and said "Come forward."

The winners walked through the gates and up to the main entrance doors. While they were walking in the gates had closed behind them. Charlie then said "Welcome to the factory."

He hung the microphone up and looked at Willy and said "Come on Willy, It wont be that bad."

Willy nodded to agree and said "I will do the tour on one condition."

Charlie smiled and said "Sure, What is it?"

Willy smiled at him and said "I can not do this by my self. No-Way. You have to come with me."

Charlie nodded to agree.

Outside the main lobby doors all six of them stood in a line next to each other. Victoria was looking at her nails, Scarlett (Violets mother) just kept looking around at the competition, Roxanne was chewing gum with her mouth open and spit on the ground, Allison was smiling thinking that her plan was going to work, Dianna was standing there getting a little impatient and Dawn was on the end of the line on the far left, she just stood there staring at the door.

Allison looked around at everyone and said "You know, I used to date Mr. Wonka."

Victoria was still looking at her nails and said "That's nice, darling."

Scarlett gave her a dirty look and said "Like we care."

Roxanne and Diana just shrugged their shoulders and didn't care either.

Allison ignored Scarlett's remark and continued to brag looking at Dawn to see if she would care to hear what she had to say.

Dawn shook her head like she didn't care and said "I'm sorry were you saying something? I couldn't hear you with all that mumbling."

Allison looked at her offended. She just turned her head up thinking whatever and finally shut her mouth.

A few seconds later the doors slid open with the puppeteers singing the Willy Wonka song.

"Hehehe,hahaha, hohoho, Willy Wonka, Willy Wonka the amazing chocolatier,.haha, hoho, Weee!"(A firework shot off to the sky, it exploded in the color of chocolate.)"Willy Wonka, Willy Wonka, everyone give a cheer, hurray! He's modest, clever, and so smart, he barely can restrain it. With so much generosity, there is no way to contain it, Weeee, to contain it, to contain, to contain, to contain, haha,ho-ho-ho, hurray!" (There was a short instrumental brake and two puppeteers came around with a big banner with what looked like fire crackers sticking out of the banner. The other ones are dancing around, and they continue singing.) "Willy Wonka, whooo, whooo, Willy Wonka, whoooo, whooo, he's the one your about to meet, Willy Wonkay, whooo, whooo, Willy Wonka, Whooo, whooo, he's a genius who just cant be beat. The magician man, a chocolate whiz, the best darn guy who ever lived, Willy Wonka, here he is!" After they sang the song and background music was still playing. The banner two of the puppets came out holding, started lighting up, it sparkled like sparklers and lit in different colors spelling out the name Willy Wonka on the banner. Loud bangs shot out from the sides of the puppeteers, shooting off fireworks into the sky and the fireworks spelled out Willy Wonka, brightly in the sky and it showered over everyone.

Everyone stood there confused accept Dawn. They all accept Dawn, thought this was a bit childish.

Dawn on the other hand was clapping and said " Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore! That was so cool!"

Out of no where a voice next to Dawn said " I know! Wasn't that great! I made some improvements on it and it's a lot better then it ever was! It's just, eh-heh, WOW!"

They all looked to their left and Willy was standing there at the end of the line of them clapping his hands in excitement. They all looked at him funny. He walked up around to stand in front of them and Diana said "Oy, Who the bloody heck are you?"

He stood there smiling still a little overjoyed from that show. He took a deep breath to try to calm him self down, you could see his breath on the air due to it being so cold out side. He looked at everyone and said with a funny look on his face "Good morning starshine, the earth say's Hello!"

They all looked at him funny again , they were all dumb struck, accept Dawn she had a big smile on her face. She was smart so she figured out who he was. He was looking back at them with a straight face thinking they had no sense of humor. They all looked at each other in silence. Dawn then said to brake the silence and to say something funny in return "Hello earth, starshine say's good morning Mr. Wonka."

Willy shifted his head to look at her and a smirk came on his face. He liked what she had said in return and thought she was smart by figuring out who he was, he felt glad that one of them at least had a sense of humor. Those feelings he had when he saw her on TV, all started to rush back. But he did not show it. Well he tried.

Then Allison looked at Dawn with a snobby look on her face and said "Uh, excuse me but this pedophile is not Willy Wonka."

Willy shifted his eye's to look a Allison, he was very offended by what she had just said, in a offended tone of voice he said "I am not a pedophile!"

Victoria went back to looking at her nails said "Well dear, if you are Mr. Wonka, then why haven't you arrived on the chair in that little childish show you put on for us."

Willy shifted his lip to the side with a straight face and went to answer. Scarlett cut him off and said in a seductive tone of voice "How else was he supposed to watch the show?"

Willy shifted his eye's to look at Scarlett. He then turned his head and made a face like he was going to gag. He then looked back up at her with a forced smile on his face and said "Precisely!"

Roxanne looked at Willy while chewing her gum and said "Whatever, were not children you know. Why did we need to see a kiddy show?" She then spit on the grown after sying this.

Willy looked at her in digust, with his eye browsed raised and said "Because I thought it would be fun."

Dawn shook her head at everyone complaining and she said " Well I liked the show Mr. Wonka. I thought it was fun."

They all turned to look at her like she was just as crazy as he was. He smiled at her and said "Why thank you!" He then turned around and led them into the factory.

Charlie was standing against the wall in the main lobby, where they have walked in. Willy smiled at Charlie and waved him on to come over, thinking you got me into this now your going to go through it with me. While walking in he said "Just throw your things anywhere. Oh by the way, This here is Charlie." He then shifted his eye's to look at Charlie so they would look at Charlie too.

They all said hello and waved at Charlie accept Roxanne. Roxanne looked at Willy then looked at Charlie and under her breath she said "Pedophile."

Willy heard this, he turned to look at her shaking his head no, he looked up and down at Roxanne with his eye's, she was standing there chewing with her mouth open. He gave her a disgusted look and said in a low tone of voice "Uh-Ew!"

He then forced a smile on his face. Turned around and said "This way."

Willy led them down the hall way to the tiny door, on the way he stopped walking and said "It's a good thing your all adults and didn't have to bring any P…" He puffed his cheeks out choking on the word, "P…" He puffed his cheeks out again "P…"

Charlie helped him out and said "Parents?"

Willy shook his head with a smirk and said " Yeah. That."

Roxanne laughed at him and said "Boy, do you have issues."

Allison looked at Roxanne, thinking she was going to look good by defending Willy and said "Shut up, like you don't?"

Roxanne, gave Allison a dirty look for that.

Victoria was looking at Willy with concern and said " Darling, maybe you should consider seeing a psychiatrist for that."

Willy just closed his eye's. He couldn't believe how everyone was being so rude accept for Dawn. Don't think he didn't notice this either. He was observing everyone's behavior. Dawn was just listing to everyone else and stood in silence, observing everything herself.

Diana looked at Willy thinking he was nuts and said "Oy, am I surprised, you seem to be far from reality. You can not possibly be the real genius who runs this chokkie factory, this bloke seems to be a bloody idiot!"

Willy was offended. He looked at her with an offended look and said with spite "MUMBLER! You know you really shouldn't mumble, I don't seem to understand a word your saying!"

Dianna looked at him with dirty look and said "Wacker."

Dawn well, she just couldn't believe how everyone was being so rude she just shook her head in disappointment.

Willy just ignored Dianna, he turned around and said "Come on, this way." He then began walking.

They all followed him some more and just before they got to the door, Allison had a thought. She got next to him and said "Oh Willy, do you remember me from school? I used to be your girlfriend. I am very sorry for what I did to you."

Willy's eye's lit up and he had crashed into the door. He rubbed his head, looked over at her and said 'MmnNo. What on earth are you talking about?"

He then turned his head away from her and made a sour face. He then unlocked the tiny door and Roxanne asked "Yo, why's the door so small?"

He turned around to look at her with a smirk on his face and said "It's to keep the big chocolaty flavor inside."

Everyone looked at each other wondering what he meant by this. He then opened the doors to the Candy Room and their eye's lit up. There was new addition to the Candy Room, besides Charlie's house. Little chocolate birds were flying around now in this room and one flew by the door. He led them all into the room. Everyone was quiet because they were amazed.

Scarlett walked up next to Willy. She stopped him from walking, she smiled at Willy with a seductive smile and said "You know, I still remember what you said about chocolate and love Mr. Wonka. I must say, I totally see what you meant by that." She then batted her eye's at him. She then turned to all the other women who were looking at her confused and she said "Did you all know, chocolate contains a property that releases endorphins, which gives one the feeling of being in love?" She then looked at Willy again batting her eye's.

Dawn rolled her eye's and said under her breath so no one could hear her "Show off."

Willy caught this and giggled to him self.

Everyone else looked at her like she was just trying to show off too, because she had been to the factory once before. So they didn't pay any attention to her.

Willy on the other hand looked at her like he was a little scared and in a nervous tone of voice he said "That's right." He then continued to walk a little more to try to get away from her and said "This way."

They all followed him around in the room, then Victoria said while looking around "This is pure genius Mr. Wonka. How come you haven't asked us our names?"

Willy continued to walk and said "I don't see why it would matter."

Victoria walked up and got in front of him. She put her hand out to shake hands and said "Well, I'm Victoria darling, I would like to tell you I have a handsome business proposition for you and was wondering if you would be willing to listen?"

Willy got a little startled, he gasped, then glanced at her with his eye brows up and said "MmnNo, I don't care."

Willy then walked around her. She was a little insulted, but figured she would ask him again later. Allison, persistent as she is, now ran up to him and hugged him from behind and said " You know darn well who I am Willy, I'm Allison, your childhood sweetheart."

He got startled again, he tried to gently push her off and said "I honestly don't know what you are talking about."

She wouldn't let go of his arm. Then Scarlett walked up next to Allison and said "Get your grubby hands off of him." Allison gave her a dirty look and she did. She just turned her nose up and stood there with her arms folded. Scarlett then asked "Willy, You have to remember me from my last visit here. You know, Violets mother."

Willy nodded his head forcing a smile on his face and said "Y-yeah, how can I forget." Then he turned his head away from her to make it look like he was going to gag. He then looked straight ahead of him and continued to walk.

Roxanne now tapped him on the shoulder, he turned around and got startled. Roxanne said "I'm Roxanne obviously, nice digs you got here man."

Willy nodded his head, he was a bit annoyed with everyone doing this. He thought here we go again and he said to her politely "Oh."

He then turned looking at the other ones who did not introduce them selves yet. He shifted his eye's to look Diana and said "You, you must be Dianna." He then shifted his eye's to look at Dawn.

Dawn had her hands behind her back, she looked back at him with a blank look on her face, she didn't say her name because she figured he didn't care to know, judging by how he was reacting to everyone else introducing their selves. When he looked at Dawn had a smirk on his face and said with a soft tone of voice "And you. You must be Dawn."

She smiled at him and nodded her head yes, she then said "Uh-huh, I am. How did you know?'

Willy gave her a very warm smile and said in a low whisper to answer "It's called television."

"Oh!" Dawn said while blushing from feeling a little embarrassed, by asking such an obvious question.

Willy then turned around and began to walk again. They all followed him to the chocolate river bank. He pointed up to the waterfall and said "You see that?" He then glanced up at it, then looked back at them and continued to say "The waterfall is most important. It mixes the chocolate. Churns it up, makes it light and frothy. By the way, no other factory in the world mixes it's chocolate by waterfall."

They all looked in amazement. Willy then walked over to Charlie's house and said "You see this house." Then he smirked at them and said " Well, it's off limits. This house is where Charlie lives. We wouldn't want to be rude. Now would we."

Charlie nodded his head smiling and said "Yeah, don't go in there. Everything in this room is eatable. Well, accept my house. So go on, enjoy your selves."

Willy nodded his head smiling at Charlie proudly and said "Precisely! Do try something. Please do. Everything in this room is so delectable, so gosh darn good looking."

Roxanne looked around the room, she then looked at them and asked "You mean we can run a muck in here, eating anything we want?"

Willy nodded his head yes and said "Uh-huh. Just don't get in over your heads."

Roxanne smiled at him and said "Sweet, your alright dude."

Everyone then split up to check out the room and try some of the candy.

After a few minutes, Allison spotted Willy by him self, she walked up to him and asked "Willy dear, are you sure you don't remember who I am?"

Willy sighed, nodded his head quickly and said "I'm sure."

Allison sighed, she shook her head and said "Come on, I now you must hate me. But don't pretend that you don't know me."

Willy turned his head to the side and rolled his eyes. He then looked up at her with a serious look on his face and said "You know. I'm not the only Willy Wonka in this world. I'm sorry, but you must have the wrong one."

Willy then walked away from her to another location in the room. Dawn was in the same location he happened to walk too, but a distance away. Dawn was looking around the room in amazement. She then noticed Willy standing there. Willy had his back facing towards her, he was looking at the chocolate river. Dawn walked up to him from behind and gently tapped him on the shoulder. Willy, rolled his eye's before he turned to look to see who it was. He turned his head to look at her, then smiled and asked "Yeah?"

Dawn smiled at him while blushing a little bit from being shy and asked "Um, Mr. Wonka. I was, um, wondering. What does the chocolate river taste like?"

Well that smile she gave him, that just made that warm fuzzy feeling he had from the first time he saw her on TV, hit harder. He still didn't know what to make of this feeling either.

He smiled at her waved at her to come along and said "I'll show you."

He led her over to a wall near the river next to the waterfall. On the wall he had a cup dispenser with a dipping spoon hanging up next to it. He had this installed on the wall so no one would fall into the river this time. He took the spoon and a cup. He leaned down, filled the cup up, stood back up and handed it to her saying "Here. Go ahead, try it. It's very sweet and creamy."

She took the cup from him and said "Thank you." She then drank some of the chocolate and said "Oh wow! This is great. It's very delicious. Thank you again, Mr. Wonka. You didn't have to do that."

Willy smiled at her nodding his head and said in a flirty way "You're very welcome."

Allison spotted them by the river talking. She went over to them, stood next to Willy and said "Willy, Please listen to me!"

Dawn rolled her eye's, looked at Allison and said to Willy "I'm sorry to tell you this. Mr. Wonka But their seems to be a fly buzzing around your candy room. All I keep hearing is buzzing. And it keeps getting louder." She said this because she seen how she kept pestering him and didn't think it was very nice.

Willy put his hand to his mouth and giggled. Allison gave Dawn a dirty look. Willy smiled at Dawn and said "Oh, I know. I just hope it's not one of those gosh darn wangdoodles."

Dawn looked at him confused and asked "What's a wangdoodle?"

Willy pointed his finger at the air and said "Well-" He got cut off by Scarlett.

Scarlett who saw what Willy did for Dawn, she looked at Dawn as if she was foaming at the mouth, jumping to conclusions. She decided to go over to them. She was now standing over by them and she asked "Willy, could I try some of the chocolate from the chocolate river too?"

Willy turned to look at her, then he handed her the dipping spoon, pointed to the cups on the wall and said "See those cups? Go get one. Then use that spoon, to scoop out some chocolate. From the river."

She looked at him in disappointment. She was hoping he would get her some too. She walked over to the cups, got one and got her self some chocolate.

Dawn had walked away. She got distracted by a little chocolate bird that flew by her. So she decided to go after it. She couldn't believe it was alive, but made out of chocolate.

Allison then got in Willy's face, he backed up a little and twisted his hand around the ball on his cane. She was nearly face to face with him, she then asked "What is your problem?"

Willy held his head back as far away from her face as he could, with a disgusted look on his face and asked "What do you mean?"

"Grrr! Either your being a jerk, or you really got very stupid over these years." Allison said then she backed away from him folding her arms. She turned around to look at the chocolate river angry.

Willy gave her a evil glair from what she had said, he just ignored her, turned away and looked the opposite way. He then turned around and noticed Dawn was chasing after a chocolate bird. She looked like a big kid chasing a butterfly. He thought this was funny and giggled to him self.

Dawn how ever, was still chasing this bird. She was so amazed by it, she was fixated on it. Well this bird was flying right towards where Allison was standing. Willy, was still watching her and looked to see where she was heading. Willy was afraid she was going to fall into the river so he quickly said "Look Out!"

Dawn, not watching where she was going, still following the bird accidentally tripped on a candy tree branch when Willy had said this. As she was falling she looked at Willy and said "Ops." She then fell right into Allison knocking Allison into the chocolate river by accident.

Willy saw this, he quickly smiled. Not at Dawn falling. At the fact that she had knocked Allison into the river. He quickly stopped smiling and looked around at everyone who were staring at him. Accept Dawn.

Dawn was trying to stand her self up after her fall. She stood up, looked in the river to where Allison was now screaming for help and Dawn said "Ut-oh."

Willy now standing in front of everyone else looking in the river. He glanced at Dawn when she said this and smirked at her quickly with out her noticing, then straightened his face out, turning his attention to the river.

Allison was trying to swim out. But a big tube came down and started sucking up some of the chocolate. She could not swim against the current this tube was causing. Little by little, the suction from the tube was pulling her in. She looked up at Willy, who was standing there staring at her, she screamed at him "Willy! Willy! Help me!"

Willy looked at her with a evil smirk on his face and said "MmnNo, Ask Jack to come save you."

Everyone looked at him like he was crazy when he said this. He turned to the side, with his hand out, glancing at her and said "Maybe, you should consider giving me Jack's number. You know. So he can be called. So he can come get you after your journey to the chocolate boiler room."

Allison's eye's widened in fear when he said this. Everyone else gasped and were afraid to be in that factory now accept Dawn, Scarlett and Roxanne. Dawn thought that he was joking around. Roxanne was laughing she thought it was funny. Scarlett giggled because to her that was one competitor down. Victoria looked at Willy and asked "You must be joking darling, you are going to help the poor dear, aren't you?"

Willy had the evil smirk on his face still, shook his head and said "MmnNo."

Charlie didn't like the attitude Willy was giving with what was going on and said "Willy, do something."

Allison had now shot up the pipe.

Willy sighed. He knew she was going to be perfectly fine. She was not going to the boiler room, she was just going to the mixing room. He just wanted to torment her a little more for how she treated him years ago. He knew she would be alright when she reached the mixing room. He shifted his lip to the side, he then looked around and made a sound "Lulah-lulah-lulah"

They all looked at him like he was nuts when he made this sound, accept Dawn. Dawn burst out laughing she thought it was the funniest thing she had ever heard. Everyone looked at her now like she was crazy, because she found the sound he just made funny. Willy smiled at her when she laughed, until an oompa loompa showed up and tugged on his jacket. He turned around to face the oompa loompa kneeled down and said "Allison seemed to have had a little accident. She fell in to river. I want you to go to the mixing room, take a stick and poke around until you find her. Help her out, kay?"

The oompa loompa nodded and then ran off.

Roxanne laughed when the oompa loompa came out. When the oompa loompa left she said "Dude! That was smaller then a little person, sweet. How come it's so small?"

Willy turned his head to look at her, on his left with a disgusted look on his face. He didn't like the fact that she had called the oompa loompa an it. He thought this was rude. He gave her a smug look and said "That! Was an oompa loompa. Imported from Loompa Land. They work here for those gosh darn coco beans they seem to crave so much."

Victoria laughed and said "There is no such place as Loompa Land."

Willy turned his head to look at Victoria, who was standing on his right and he said "Show's how much you know. Don't it."

Out of no where, they could hear the sound of drums beating coming from the tunnel where the chocolate river flowed through. Everyone could see this big hot pink sea horse boat coming through the tunnel with seats on half of it that looked like benches, these benches stretched across the boat. The other half had a bunch of oompa loompa's sitting with silver ore's in their hands to row it. One oompa loompa stood at the front of the boat, with a big drum he would beat on, to direct the other ones who were rowing. Once it was fully in the room it came to a complete stop in the river next to where they were all standing.

Willy smiled got closer to the boat, waved them over to get on and said "Let's get the show on the road."

They all got on the boat accept Willy and Charlie. They let the guests get on first to be polite. Dawn got on, she sat in the back row seat, on the far end. Scarlett sat in the front row seat in the middle. Roxanne and Dianna sat in the second row seat. Victoria sat in the third row seat in the middle. Willy went to get on when Scarlett looked up at him, batted her eye's and said "Oh, Willy." She then tapped the seat next to her for him to sit next to her.

Willy gasped, he puffed his cheeks up with a sickened smirk on his face, he turned his face to look at Charlie. Willy had a disgusted look on his face and said under his breath "Ew.." He looked at Charlie and nodded at Charlie to go sit next to her. Charlie caught his drift and did. Scarlett, not wanting to be rude to a little boy, smiled at Charlie when he sat next to her. She then looked forward in a little disappointment. Willy then got on and he decided to sit next to Dawn in the back.

When everyone was on, he looked at the oompa loompa behind the drum and said "Onward!"

When the boat started to move, Willy scooted him self a little closer to Dawn and nudged Dawn in the shoulder with his shoulder. She looked at him and smiled. He leaned over getting a little closer and asked quietly "How did you like the candy room?"

She smiled at him, blushing a little from being a little shy and said "I love it. I love the candy room. It's beautiful."

Willy giggled at the comment she made and said "I know!" This made her giggle too.

He had then started to talk with her a bit more. Scarlett noticed this and gave Dawn a look as if looks could kill. She now realized that Dawn was gong to be a problem.

End Of Chapter 7