IMPORTANT QUESTION THAT CAN CHANGE THE SEQUEL!

IMPORTANT QUESTION THAT CAN CHANGE THE SEQUEL!

I just saw the movie Frozen (1-23-14) (I know I am really late) but... I noticed how similar I could put it with Jack Frost, the ice and storm, the fact they lost their parent(s), how they have a concerned sibling (Anna and Khione) and just Frozen in general was amazing. When I saw Let it Go, I was utterly shocked and thought how well that'd be if Jack Frost had taken a turn for that, where he was restrained and let it out.

So I wanted to ask you all a question.

Would you rather have the story continue as planned (Original sequel) or go for a Frozen crossover?

I know some may dislike the idea and want it to be entirely Percy Jackson but then again the sequel wasn't going to have much with HoO but I'll give you a breakdown (Without spoiling the specific details of how this story ends) of the original sequel without the crossover.

Original Sequel:

The original sequel was going to have "Jack", try to ignore all the hype of a Demigod life and try to stay as a normal human and go to a high school, but Artemis went to look for him because she felt like she was missing a piece of herself without him. However, Jack lived under the name Percy Jackson, at one point, he succeeds and forgets everything, the only memory is his sister, and even then she pretends she's human. Yet Artemis doesn't give up.

Frozen Crossover Sequel:

In the Frozen crossover it'll change slightly to where Percy/Jack runs to their Kingdom five years before the coronation, when Elsa's power is revealed he goes and takes the blame for Elsa. Elsa is interested in how Percy is able to control it and make it look like he is the one causing her troubles. Even so though she goes and runs away in fear of harming Anna.

Do you like the idea?


I grabbed my daggers and held them ready to strike when something insane occurred. The creek was lifted and spun in a circle, his eyes were dark, and misty, but beyond that I could see the tears fall. "You'll regret EVER mentioning my old name. I don't think anything in my miserable life is a blessing every sole detail is a curse! My powers I can't even control, but right now... I have enough of a mind to focus it on you!"

Shards flew out and were held in place. He spoke with hate, "I dare you to try and escape, don't even think a hunter will rescue you, these are set to move on their own to block off arrows, neither will I gain support, because I am going to take time in taking you down. I don't care if I win at this point, I am going to make this day you're worst nightmare."

His eyes flashed dangerously before he raised his hands and slammed them down, a shockwave occurred, he's using his powers of the Earth shaker?! The rocks bounced around, at this he hadn't budged. I see.

He is trying to get me closer, because I can't just stand this I need to move, but there has to be a trap... I can't think on my feet with this, I might as well see what he has set.

So I charged in, but I was knocked back, a storm? "My sister has made me her champion. Minor Goddess or not, I still am able to do things much easier. For she is Khione, the only one on Earth that understands my pain!" He cried out, I knew now, he thinks nobody understands him, nobody but the one person he has been with, and the one person he thinks cares for him. Yet he hasn't seen his father cry for him. "I'll show you everything me and my sister feel!"

The storm picked up and it was hard to see him as he wore white clothing and he was pale with the frozen hair and everything it makes him invisible in this blizzard. "This is for every single day my sister feels forgotten," He said as I felt an arrow hit my palm knocking my right handed dagger out of my hand. "This is for every pain I've felt since I was born," My other dagger fell and was buried in the snow or blown away. I couldn't tell.

"This, This is for our miserable lives we have lived being forgotten and alone in this world." A flurry of arrows were shot out. Just how powerful is he?!

The storm died down, and I was shocked, his hair was melted, it was black, the intensity of the storm must have heated up from his movements and melted his frozen disguise, he wasn't even panting. In fact he didn't even look tired. "Gods say they can do anything, yet we still have evil in this world," He stalked forwards slowly, fear drew in on me, if he wasn't tired yet I was defenseless what could I do? And clearly using his past is just suicide.

"You Gods claim you do everything for the better of the world, yet that's why you have the hunt, because that's a lie. That's why I lived a miserable life, why I am being judged by someone who favors girls? Pathetic. Because of gender, I am assumed to break hearts, yet I am the one dying, I am the one dying for SEVEN YEARS! Seven years I had no mother, Seven years I felt alone, seven years I could have died, and yet I save your hunter to be met with arrows pointed at me. I freely speak to a God for I fear no death, yet when I point out nothing but truth I am turned on. You think you can understand!? A goddess like you could never understand me, I am 'Just another despicable male' aren't I?"

I backed up only to have the ice fragments stop me. "I'll show you, what every male has felt because of your sexist decisions, what I've felt for people like you who are so cruel to others. I don't care, that girls are treated like so, my mother was raped in front of me, I was beaten, yet was there any god to save or pity me? Was there anyone who felt sorry!? Millions will cry for one famous person, yet when millions are suffering in unlivable conditions, who will cry? Nobody, we cry ourselves to sleep, yet girls, girls get pity from a goddess and the opportunity to live forever...

"I can't wait for this stupid prophecy to end..." He said gripping his fists, "Because when this is over, I will disappear from this stupid life of a Demigod!" With that he brought his forearm up "Let's see how you feel being the one who nobody will cry for! This is for every innocent male that has gone through your judgements unfairly!"


I somehow managed to focus on Artemis. How dare she, she knows how much my past hurts me, she's seen my weakness, and she decides to exploit that?! FOR A GAME?!

That's not right. I was angry, no I am infuriated! As I brought my hand the shards released their suspended animation and charged in at Artemis.

I ended it as I walked passed the place where the creek resided and replaced the crystals and let it melt. She was panting but in tact due to the fact she is a goddess. I growled, "Thought it's funny?! To use something like my past for a STUPID GAME?!" I yelled and she flinched. "It's not! MY MOTHER DIED, AND YOU DECIDED TO MAKE FUN OF THIS ALL FOR A GAME?!"

I shuddered. "I should have known," I was crying, but I was angry as well. "You're just like every despicable human I've meet. You don't care about feelings, you don't care about anyone but yourself. Break them to get what you want." I snarled. "When this stupid prophecy is over... I can't wait to forget everything, especially goddess' like you." I said dropping the flag.

This is why I have to lock myself away, this is why I want to forget, so I don't have to be hurt anymore. So I can live a normal life like a human.

No Demigod hype, no missing father, no dying mother memories, no living in a forest, no more monsters, no more, everything. I want to forget everything. I wanted my life to all just be a bad dream.

But this bad dream was just one I wouldn't be waking up from anytime soon.

I walked away. A flash was above my head, gasps in the trees. I tuned them out and held my hands to my head. I wanted to leave this world, I wanted to escape this eternal suffering.

Yet even so, in my unstable condition, someone dared touch me. They tapped my shoulder, I exploded. The river froze and a pure ice version of Snow came in which is his battle form, Shard. My eyes were slits. "LEAVE ME ALONE!" I yelled as I froze my fingers in an ice claw. I slashed at whoever it was and heard a cry of pain, I didn't care if it was a boy or girl, I wanted to get away.

I wanted to leave my memories. I just wished to forget everything that brought me pain. I just couldn't take it anymore, the pain the heartache, the taunting...


I was hurt, not only physically had I tired out from the stress of that last attack, but... from emotions and mental strength. I was hurting, but not for my sake. I took a step too far. He was a male, but he was a broken male.

It was as if I had broken a plate and only decided to smash it further.

No, you're a maiden Artemis get it through your head, he's a reckless boy, he'll take advantage of your pity you give him! If he were telling the truth he'd get over it, he's been through it for five years what is mentioning it compared to that? Right?

I went stood up but not before I saw something, a female camper went up to him and apparently tried to calm him. The river immediately froze and a ice clad dragon emerged from the dark clouds above as a blizzard formed, "LEAVE ME ALONE!" Jack yelled before freezing his hands in what looked like a wolf claw and slashed at the girl.

He ran...

My only possible reaction was to gape. He... he attacked her out of cold blood for nothing?!

I knew he was a despicable male. Just like every one of his gender he is still going to harm girls.

I went to my cabin and waited for my hunters to return before we leave.


I was in the forest when I felt a cold chill. "Are you okay, Jack?" The voice asked laced in worry.

"I'm fine, Khione, just... okay, I'm not fine. Artemis... brought up my mother again."

Long pale arms wrapped around my torso holding me in a comforting hug. "It's alright, you'll forget her one day, and you won't have to remember that devious man who harmed your mother. One day, just wait for it." I only nodded despite facing away from her. "You still have to finish this prophecy, I may hate the Olympians, you're father is still included but I can't hate you, but I would rather not be ruled by a man who killed his father for power. Zeus, well he didn't do it originally but he could give us minors some recognition."

Pain struck, "Even if I saved them Artemis would still hurt me, emotionally, physically, and I am already mentally in pain from today..." I felt like frostbite was gnawing at my heart. It was slowly killing me.

She quickly whispered, "If you ever need to talk to me, don't worry I'm always able to talk to my little brother." She whispered before snowflakes stirred from my storm that hung with me.

Everyday I felt alone, and when Khione is with me, for some reason despite knowing her as my mental stability and the only person I could count on even though she wasn't family family. I still felt alone. My hands were developing light blue snowflakes on them and I clutched my shoulders before snow travelling to the Poseidon bunk.

I layed in bed until the day rose, not dreaming, not having a nightmare, just what death is like, you aren't aware, it's not darkness, it's not light, it's... nothing.

Day rose quickly as Apollo took his reckless care of driving his sun Chariot. I woke up and headed to the big house.

"Chiron?" I called for the centaur, "Chiron?" I asked again creating an echo.

"Per- Jack? What is it?"

"I would like to go on a quest, for the lightning bolt. I know what to do, my sister has kept me informed on what to do and right now, it's completing the prophecy, I might as well get used to going on quests."

Chiron was still bemused, "Just who is this sister, there is no other child of Poseidon is there?"

"Khione, the goddess of northern winds. She... she became my step sister, she looked after me since I was seven but more like a sister than a mother." I admitted, "I would rather have that remain a secret to the other campers, however as for the wine god, I don't mind. May I go?"

He considered this before nodding, "Seeing that you were troublesome during the Capture the Flag, I suppose this will do to subtle the anger of whichever god or goddess you angered when you struck the girl."

I didn't care as I nodded and left. "The oracle is in the attic yes?" He nodded and I went just there.

The room was scattered with filth and dust. Cobwebs everywhere and dust layered over many objects. I could see things that were retrieved last year, to ones found over a hundred years ago, even thousands.

At the end a mummy was there that said "Oracle of Delphi" I bowed to it thinking it may be kinder if it were alive, "Oracle, I ask of you for a prophecy for Lord Zeus's Lightning Bolt location."

A green mist was there, what I saw made me cry my mother was the Oracle's ghastly image.

"You shall go west, and see the god that has turned.

You shall find what was stolen, and see it safely returned.

You shall be betrayed by one named friend.

And you shall fail to save yourself in the end."

Great... from this I can already see what is going to happen, one of the Olympians are tricked. I'll get the bolt back, I'll be stabbed in the back by a camper, and probably end up with a couple curses.

I sighed as I bowed to the Oracle when the green image disappeared. The haunting image of my mother was out of my sight, hopefully no longer in mind. However as I made my way down I saw Chiron, "What was it about? You're here so obviously you survived to have one."

I nodded and retold him and what I expected, he nodded gravely at the last one. "Well you should pick two people as it is better to go with three, it is a good number for us, the big three, three male eldest gods as well as female and so forth."

Having no choice I groaned but nodded. "I hardly know anyone other than Mira and I don't feel like letting an innocent six year old go on a dangerous quest, I'll bring Grover, tell him to pick whoever there nothing specific in the quest about certain demigods." He nodded and went to wherever Grover went.

The next day came by swiftly, I waited on the hill with all I needed, absolutely nothing. I left everything in my house, should a need fall I will simply grab it and return.

Grover came in, "Hey man sorry for the delay, I went to grab someone to tag along." I nodded before noticing who it was, Annabeth the girl who became frustrated upon seeing me.

"I have to go on a quest with him?! You are very lucky I want to go on a quest." She clicked her tongue and strode down the hill. Grover shrugged and we both went.

Neither of us made word as we travelled to a bus stop and awaited our first challenge.

That is, when I felt something. "Grover, Annabell"

"Annabet-"

I shot her a glare that silenced her, or was it the ice frozen on her lips? "Corrections later, unless you feel like attacking two Kindly Ones I'd suggest you shut up and get ready." I willed the myst a bit.

"What are you doing?" Grover asked.

"The Myst, it will help give me reason as to what I am doing." I said as I tired slightly from the use of the myst for I can hardly tell when I am done being clear sighted myself. "Which is very hard for me, my mother was clear sighted so I cannot be fooled even by my own abilities." I finished off.

Assuming I had done enough the Furies growled and stalked to the back before screeching, "Where is it?!" The passengers freaked as they saw they carried weapons, what were whips of fire to us was a much more dangerous gun to them. Why a gun? Well what else do you expect them to carry with them other than their purse how threatening is that suppose to be?!

"We need to get out of here." I told them as the two dived out through emergency exits. I joined by flashing myself using snow. The furies ripped through the roofs and revealed themselves fully to us.

"Where is it?!"

I rolled my eyes, "For the last time I do not have you're masters helmet! I thought I sent Alecto to tell him already, perhaps three times is the charm?" I asked as I pulled out my bow. Creating a frozen arrow I notched it into place waiting for either to make their move.

Waiting I saw the one on the right try to attack Grover. I shot before conjuring a snow wall in front of me as the other lunged. A print of the Fury was made in the snow and she died down slightly.

"Fire doesn't agree with snow Fury," I taunted as I drew my frozen blade. "Perhaps you'll learn what it means to anger a child." I said as I stabbed her and proceeded to throw my other dagger into the remaining fury.

"Thanks for the save there." Grover said.

Annabeth huffed in annoyance. I didn't care.

"Sorry about you're weapons though they seemed to have melted." He said in apology.

I rolled my eyes as I let the three items float in the air, "I have my sisters blessing and my own abilities, fire can hardly face me and expect to win. Douse fire once and the flames are weak, douse it twice and it certainly is out for time being, with my powers I don't care for that. Let's go, we have a long walk if we are to get to the underworld."


Hey guys sorry it's shorter then the last chapter but there are two reasons, 1 is the AN above (Which if you skipped I highly suggest you read it as this determines the path the story takes) also I have another question but it regards this story and it will be at the bottom.

I wanted to put down the facts right now, this story is going to have a sequel that much is certain, how long it takes, well... generally it's up to you.

I try for 5k words but honestly that is really difficult and often leaves the story abandoned for long periods of times.

I wanted to ask you, do you want this story to go by quicker? If so I may delete some tedious information lower the amount of detail, the other option is to actually simplify this and time skip to the next events that matter rather than simply waiting.

So that means shorter chapters (May drop to 1k to 2k words per chapter -AN) faster updates.

The reason for this is you have NO idea how much I want the question at the top answered. SERIOUSLY READ THE TOP AN!

I have been thinking of Frozen 24/7 considering I saw it literally four days ago... not much of a big deal, add in the fact I have listened to Let It Go over 300 times and wrote this entire chapter AN included, while listening, I can fairly say I want the DVD.

So please please PLEASE answer the questions again they are:

Do you want shorter chapters but quicker updates?

Do you want the Original Sequel (Original explained at top AN) or Frozen Crossover?

(BTW I already wrote the Frozen Crossover chapter 1 which I plan on revising later on this week and work on the further chapters because I cannot stop thinking of Frozen at all,)