Story:
The Love by lexboss
Star Rating: 2.5 out of 4 stars.
Review: I'm gonna be honest. I only looked at this story because it had Evelio's name on it. He decided to beta story of Romance. Now, knowing Evelio, I think he had a good reason for doing a love story. He does romances, but not too often. This was something else: An incest story. I'm not sure if people here accept these characters being together because they're not real, but damn well they're gonna be beating the heck out real incest couples (even the gay ones). Let's begin:
We start off with some soft emotions here, isolation and abandonment (that are portrayed in this). Nicole notices Gumball being depressed and not being around his siblings. He reveals that Penny told him that she doesn't love (see what I did there?) him anymore. (I don't know if the writer decided to put them as a couple, but it's believable. So I give it pass.) Nicole comforts him, as a mother should. After doing so, Gumball wants to play with her. She does so and thus begins a sort of platonic relationship, but soon drifts to the incest. The story doesn't just make itself a love story, but a disturbing mystery and erotic lemon.
What I did like about this story was it was able to pull off dramatic and its usual tendency of just being for sex. It also had Evelio to improve so grammar errors, but it was earlier so I give it a pass for the other missed errors. It fights off its usual odds and continues to keep running than stopping.
What I didn't like about this story is the fact of all this sudden character change and plot holes. In my opinion, Gumball is a horny teenager with bipolar disorder. Nicole is someone who cares, but isn't being pleasured enough in bed.
The stuff I can't pin on is the fact that this is mixed. It's so good that it's bad, or it's so bad that it's good. You have a good romance story, but a family that goes too far in the "love thy family" part. It's kind of like being slapped across the face but enjoying it.
I can't say it's bad or good because it would be prejudice with incest, so I would advice others to read this to either have their own opinions. This is mostly likely the most controversial love story of the year.
Summary: When you lose your girlfriend, head for your mother, but beware of the consequences. In the mind of lexboss, she brings to life a couple that has everyone talking about whether it should exist or not, but the eyes of EvelioandZgroup, he caught a story that will sure get you and not make you stop till it's over: good or bad.
~ I'm Fan Fiction Critic/Reviewer Henry Peters