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Fanfreddyfic: T-That l-l-lady...she just murdered someone in cold blood...I HOPE SHE BURNS IN HELL ALONG WITH EVERYONE ELSE WHO CAUSES PAIN TO OTHER PEOPLE!

Mangle6 (author): Well then your going to hate Pristine even more!

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The group of kid's had finally been able to catch up to Nat and Pristine. Each one of them was out of breathe, including Amber, they all saw Nat had ended up tripping and falling. He was just getting up with Pristine towering over him,

"Aww does Natty-watty need to work on his first steps." Pristine said.

"LEAVE ME ALONE!" Nat said, as he tightened his hands into fists.

"Aww! But a baby like you always needs someone around to tell you how much of a waste of space you are!" Pristine said,

"SHUT UP!" Nat said. Pristine scoffed rolling her eye's,

"Why should I? You existing ruined my life!" She said. Nat then let out a scream and before anyone could stop him he punched Pristine in the nose. The rich girl let out a scream and fell on her back, once she got out of her daze she got up looking furious as her nose was broken and bleeding.

"I ruined your life!? We used to be friend's! Best friend's even! But you decided to become just as rich and snobby as your mother! I'm surprised you haven't killed me! Isn't that what your deranged mother did!" Nat said tears in his eye's, Pristine's jaw dropped she then reached into her pocket and pulled out a ribbon wand. But the handle was made out titanium as it was painted a platinum pink. While the ribbons we're a different shade of yellow to gold buy the edges of the ribbon seemed to glisten almost as if those parts we're sharpened. Royal gasped as her face went pale, Mike and Amber looked at her as the girl got into a fetal position.

"Oh look a ribbon wand! Le gasp! Are you going to dance me to death?" Nat said his tone cold and sarcastic, Pristine huffed she then twirled the ribbon and aimed it directly at Nat. The ribbon coiled around Nat's wrist and Pristine then pulled. Nat let out a bloodcurdling scream as the ribbon righted around his wrist, digging into his skin, and causing blood to spray. Mike's eye's widened as his cheeks lost all color, the boy then passed out. Amber caught Mike and held him in her arms but as she looked between Nat and Mike she knew what to do.

Amber then flew away casting a worried glance over to Nat. The young farmer was then pulled towards Pristine and the rich girl kicked Nat in his privates. Nat screamed and fell on his knees, finally Pristine pulled the ribbon off and then began to whip her enemy while he was done. The boy yelled and screamed at every bit as Nat made sure to cover her eye's.

"Nobody talks about my mother like that! At least my mom was destined for greatness! You and your entire family is destined to live in dirt and be useless for the rest of your days!" Pristine said,

When a shortage in the whips happened Nat got up and tackled Pristine. The farmer boy then grabbed Pristine by her hair and began pulling it out if the roots.

"At least I earn the things I have! And I'm not related to a monster that killed a parent!" Nat screamed, Pristine then used her back legs to kick Nat off of her. The young farmer ended up crashing into the pig pin straight into the mud. Pristine laughed,

"My mother was a goddess! Your dad was the monster! He spilt up my family! I'm glad he's dead! He's worthless just like you!" She said. Nat then got up but this time he was holding a sickle,

"Don't you get it!? My dad was trying to save you! If your mother was alive you'd have no self-confidence and being tortured!" Nat said. He then ran towards Pristine and cut the girl using the edge of the sickle. Some of the gashes on Pristine we're deep while the other's had barley grazed skin. It was then Pristine got the message, Nat didn't want to hurt her. For some reason or another Nat was only trying to do the minimum damage he could get away with.

But Pristine wanted to hurt Nat, she wanted him to suffer, she wanted him dead. And didn't care about anyone but herself and only her. Pristine then flicked her ribbon wand and Nat blocked with his sickle. But the young farmer wasn't expecting the ribbons to wrap around the handle of the sickle. Pristine then pulled back the ribbon, snatching the sickle from Nat.

The girl then grabbed the handle and put her ribbon wand in her pocket. She then came charging for Nat and the farmer just looked at Pristine.

He was completely frozen in fear.

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"EMBER!" Amber said, as she landed by Ember and Lottery who looked as of they we're making some sort of deal.

"What in tarnation has got you so riled up Amber?" Ember said,

"Na-Nat….Pri-Pristine….fighting." Amber said as all the flying and running had wore the demon down.

"What!?" Lottery said,

"Help." Amber said. The two parent's looked at each other and ran until they heard the sound of screaming. The parents found Nat who was covered in large gashes and was bleeding profusely. But still the boy was punching and kicking Pristine. Some of his previous hits had given Pristine bruises while other's broke skin.

Royal was still in her fetal position as her eye's we're wide and she was shaking.

"Nat!" Ember said, and as soon as she sat that Nat halted his attack. Nat smiled warmly as of saying: 'Thank you for showing up!' but as soon as he tried to take a step towards his mother Nat passed out.

"Nat!" Royal, Amber, and Ember said. Ember ran over and lifted Nat,

"No, no, no. Nat please I've already lost your father don't go too." Ember said as she cried. Lottery picked up his daughter looking concerned as be remember the day he held his ex-wives limo body in his arms.

"We need to get them to a hospital!" He finally said, the group then ran to the hospital Royal included. But as Royal followed her pupils we're completely black.

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Rufus stared fearfully and pleadingly into Cherry's eye's. But Cheery was unrelenting as she got ready to fire the gun. Rufus closed his eye's and the barrage of bullets came. The father screamed as tears streamed from his eye's, blood and guts flew and splattered against the ground. Once Cherry was satisfied, she then dropped the gun and smiled.

"This is what happens to idiots like this man here….Pristine." Cheery said, Pristine then popped out from behind a tree. She looked uncertain as her mother picked her up and walked away the dogs surrounding Rufus. The dogs got ready to pounce but suddenly they all yelped instead as bullets went into their bodies the sound of pows going off. The dogs collapsed and Rufus was surprised to see Nat. The boy then dropped the gun and ran over to his dad,

"Dada!" Nat said as he flung himself over hid dad's chest.

"I'll be okay champ." Rufus, "I—I'll always be with you." Nat cried staring into his dads dimming eyes. Rufus then took his cap off and placed it onto Nat's young head,

"I—I love ya son. And…I…I need you to promise me to keep that hat safe. Okay?" Rufus said his voice growing weaker. Nat was sobbing at this point but he nodded agreeing to his dad's last wish.

"Pr-Promise." He said,

"Make sure to look out for the farm. But….also make sure to look out for your mom she needs you." Rufus said. Nat again nodded as he sobbed tears pouring from his eye's. Rufus smiled as he secured the hat on Nat's head,

"Rem-Remember Nat, you-you're the best and you always will be." He said his eye's slowly closing as he went silent.

"Dada?" Nat said,

"Dada!?" He said again growing fearful. Nat then began to sob uncontrollably as he hugged his deceased father.

He would never let him go.