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"Sooo, what do you want? Blood or pee?" Jane felt pretty awkward. This wildly attractive woman had been stood staring at her for a few minutes. So she decided to break the silence; she regretted it now, the woman had turned a light shade of pink. Jane had figured she was just another doctor, her mom hadn't told her any different and she was sure she had seen her leave with her other doctor the day she woke up.

Jane waited for a few minutes and still there was no response, she decided to try again. "Or do you want to shine a light in my eyes and ask me who the president is?" to her surprise this made the woman smile and finally look at her. "You don't have a concussion Jane, just amnesia" Jane got a weird vibe from this person; she decided to delve a little deeper. "So are you a doctor?" the woman took a step closer her bed, Jane decided to wait for a response this time.

"Erm well yes…no…yes…sort of" Jane couldn't help but find this woman incredibly intriguing. "So you are a doctor…sometimes?" Jane tilted her head, smirking slightly when she saw a hint of a smile on the woman's face. "I'm a doctor all the time, just not a medical doctor or your doctor", so who was this woman? Jane reasoned that they probably knew each other, but from where? Her mom had given her the impression she was a detective and definitely a workaholic. Maybe they went to school together. One thought was definitely bothering Jane, this woman had been here when she had woken up the other day but then she had left and hadn't come back till now. Jane realised she had been silent for a while now as she thought but this time the woman broke the silence, "how are you feeling Jane?".

"I am pretty good actually, except the whole not remembered anything or anyone thing. Which reminds me, how do we know each other?" Jane could tell the woman was struggling to think about how to answer that one, her face kept tensing; she kept opening her mouth to speak and then changing her mind, it was incredibly cute. Finally she moved closer to the bed and answered "well, we work together. We're friends…best friends. We have known each other for about 4 years now". Jane responded quickly, "how come I haven't seen you around? Not since I woke up anyway" Jane smiled, she still wasn't entirely sure of this person but she knew there was definitely something about her.

Maura was so tense; she could tell Jane was quizzing her about why she hadn't been to visit, she looked so much healthier than she had the other day; in fact she looked her usual amazing self. "Well, actually in all honesty I was scared. I know it doesn't really compare to what you're going through but you have become such an integral part of my life. I am terrified that everything is going to change" Maura looked Jane in the eye when she stopped talking to try and figure out if there was any sort of recognition, sadly she saw nothing but a mild amusement. It was Jane's turn to speak " well actually I have found not remembering anything to be quite calming, because I can't remember whether or not I have anything to be worrying about" Maura couldn't help but smile at Jane, it was so bizarre how someone could forget everything about themselves and still essentially be who they always have been. Maura was brought out of her musings by Jane, "so you work at the police station with me, Kovac and Fritz?" Maura couldn't help but laugh, immediately feeling guilty for finding this whole situation amusing. "Actually it's Korsak and Frost" Maura was immensely relieved at this point as Jane started laughing also. "Oh my god, really? I keep doing that, I am crap with names" , both Maura and Jane laughed at this for a good few minutes before they calmed down and Maura continued to speak "I'm the Chief medical examiner for the state of Massachusetts, I work closely with the homicide unit and the forensic department to solve cases".

Jane nodded whilst breathing deeply; her chest injury was still hurting her, Maura should have realized. She waited patiently for Jane to get comfortable once more. "Right okay, so you're a doctor that knows medicine but not a medical doctor and you are my best friend?" Maura nodded in agreement, Jane continued. "Can I ask you a favor? The quacks in this place said they will release me soon if I have a good care system in place at home and I know it's a huge imposition but could you possibly check in on me once in a while?" Maura was definitely taken aback by this; they barely knew each other, well the new Jane certainly didn't know Maura enough to trust her already. "Erm, if you're sure? But if you want me to take care of you I am going to do it properly. Good care in the aftermath of a trauma like yours is essential for a full recovery" even if she felt weird about caring for Jane she would not let her feelings of awkwardness get in the way of Jane's recuperation. She could tell Jane was relieved she had agreed to help her. Maura smiled reassuringly and sat beside Jane's bed, she felt completely at ease; even though they were pretty much starting out fresh Maura wasn't scared anymore.

This hospital is ridiculous; he had been hunting for intensive care for like an hour. Even the nurses had no ideas on which way he should go. In the end it was blind luck that he had found it, the doctor he had questioned in the car park last night had broken easily; he barely had to break two of his fingers before he gave away the detectives room number. That's where he was headed now and he would stick to the plan this time; go in the room kill the woman quietly and get back out before the alarm was raised. He was just round the corner now; He had requisitioned a white coat to slip past the nurses' station he slipped it on now and put his silenced pistol in the outer pocket, holding it tight.

He moved slowly past the nurse on duty, the detective's room was at the end of this corridor. He came to the door and listened carefully. She wasn't alone, that wouldn't be a problem. He pulled back the hammer of his gun; he wouldn't mess around this time. Just enter, shoot and leave. He smiled to himself; he would be sat in the dunkin donuts down the street within 5 minutes. He wrapped his hand around the door handle and entered.

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