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DISCLAIMER: SARAH JANE DOES NOT OWN ANY THING EXCEPT AUDREY, CATHERINE AND RUSSELL GRANGER, AND ANARA, AND HER OWN IDEAS, NO MATTER WHAT THE GOVERNMENT TRIES TO TELL HER, SHE KNOWS IT'S NOT POSSIBLE TO TRAVEL THROUGH TIME YET BUT SHE REMAINS ADAMANT THAT SHE WILL, SO MUCH SO THAT SHE CONTINUES TO USE SMALL CHILDREN AS HER TEST SUBJECTS. OH GOD HERE THEY COME AGAIN, NO-ONE WEARS WHITE AFTER LABOUR DAY!! NO, NOT THE STRAIGHT JACKET, AHHHH!


RemuPOV

After finally persuading my 7th grade class to take my 4th grade class outside to practice some spells - like the ones I know Harry taught them when he was teaching the Dumbledore's Army - I went up to see Audrey. I found her laying in the middle of my floor, her brother leaning against the wall, chewing something that I suspect is a kin to Droobles and Catherine sitting in the chair opposite mine filing her nails and also chewing this, I don't know, thing. I struggled with what to say. Russell seemed to sense this.

"She's asleep, so you can say whatever you want." He said to me. Catherine rolled her eyes at me then looked away.

"Firstly, I need to know who that man was. Secondly, why did Audrey have such a reaction to seeing him? Thirdly, why is that man the thing that your sister fears most in the world?"

I had every intention of continuing my tirade but Catherine stood up so abruptly that it caught me by surprise.

"Firstly, that's Max Cooke, he was one of our adoptive 'parents', secondly, I have no idea why Drea reacted that way and thirdly it's none of your business, it's our lives that you intend to get to the bottom of, and if Drea was awake she'd tell you the same thing."

Catherine then proceeded to storm out of my office, huffing and puffing. I sighed and moved to sit in my chair and motioned for Russell to take the place of where his sister had just been. I opened my mouth to start talking, but he started talking first.

"Firstly, that is Max Cooke, and he was one of our adoptive parents. Catherine wasn't trying to be so rude, she really doesn't know. Audrey and I decided that it'd be better to keep Cathy out of the loop. She's fragile and so friggin' innocent there's no way she could handle all of our shit. Audrey's the protector of our family, there's nothing she wouldn't do to protect us, but sometimes she's blinded when it comes to Catherine." Russell's voice turned from informative to cold, like he was trying to keep his emotions in check. "When Max first adopted us the only thing that a person could use to tell Cathy and Drea apart were their eyes. Drea's got such pretty eyes, such a dark blue, they have subtle hints of green too, Cathy has grey eyes well they're light blue really, but they're almost grey. So anyways, on the first night we were staying with Max, Cathy was in the bathroom when he comes in and says 'Right, you Cathy come with me' and Audrey could have said 'I'm Audrey, not Catherine' and it would have been done with for her, but she saw the look in his eyes, and she knew that Cathy would get hurt if she said anything. Every night Max would take Audrey into the garage and every night she'd come back with more and more cuts and bruises. She promised me that he never raped her, but I couldn't be sure. One night, at dinner, Max called Audrey 'Cathy' and Cathy not knowing what was going on spoke up and said 'Sir, she's not Cathy, I am.' Max was bloody furious; he started throwing things at Audrey, calling her a stupid slut. And then he grabbed me, and said that he was going to kill me and then he stabbed me in the forearm." At this point Russell stuck out his arm and pointed to the place where, under his tattoos, I knew that the scar was. "Like you saw at dinner last night she went fucking mental. She knew that Max had a gun under the lounge, a rather stupid place to keep such a thing, but then again he was a very stupid man, but anyway, Audrey walked up to him and stuck the barrel right between his eyes. 'You don't have the guts' he says, she just laughs and blows his brains out. And until the day that she dies I'm pretty sure that she will be scared of Max Cooke. She saved our lives that day, and on many other occasions. I don't think I will ever be able to fully show my sister exactly how grateful I am that we have her. Audrey has taken beatings, and endured far worse than Catherine who will remain ignorant of this until she's ready to take it. It should have been me, all those times when she saved my arse. It should have been me taking the beatings, and giving them equally as much. But it wasn't. It was Audrey, just 'cause that's who she is."

"Why are you telling me these things?" I asked Russell when it appeared that he was done.

"Because, I think you needed to know, if you were going to pursue my sister." He replied with a smirk.

"Mr. Granger, I have no intention of pursuing your sister, she is my student!" I exclaimed

He laughed "Please, I saw the way you were looking at her when she came in, she's of age, and if you're worried I'm going to tell someone, I wouldn't want to ruin this for my sister, she really likes you."

"How do you know she likes me?" I asked, my curiosity getting the better of me

"Teanna sent us a picture a while ago and she instantly was crushing on you. And when she found out that you were going to be teaching here she nearly broke Catherine's back when she was jumping around. It was a sight to behold. I suppose, people would consider her beautiful." He replied, I hadn't failed to notice the way he had smiled at the mention of Miss James.

"That is true. But she deserves someone young, someone who can give her everything she deserves."

"HA! As is someone young could handle her, they'd just want to fuck her and leave her. She deserves more than that. But what she wants and needs is another question entirely."

I waited for him to continue and when he didn't I realised what he wanted. I sighed and asked "What does she want and need?"

"She needs someone who can accept who she is without wanting to change her. For example, she's never going to be able to be a housewife, she's too independent, she prefers to work for what she wants instead of having it presented to her on a silver platter. She needs someone who she can talk to about her past, her present and her future. She needs someone who knows when to talk, when to listen and when to leave her the fuck alone. She wants someone who will treat her as an equal, and someone who will treat her like a princess at the same time. I'll explain that contradictory statement now, someone who will listen to her opinions and worries, and at the same time worship her, respect her and love her. She wants someone who isn't afraid to be whom they really are on the inside, and she wants someone who has read at least 100 books. Audrey's super smart, but she knows when to show it, and when to fade into the background."

"Your sister sounds like a most amazing young woman."

"Well yeah... but I am her brother so I do see her stupidness too." He chuckled and cast a quick glance at Audrey's sleeping form.

"Russell, I feel that you should know this, because it's a pretty important factor in my life." I paused, hesitating "I'm a werewolf. Every month under the full moon I turn into this beast, unless I take the Wolfsbane Potion religiously. It would not do well for your sister to be around me if I forgot, or could not get it."

"Well, it's good that she's so bloody good at potions then. When we were at Anara, there was this girl two years below us and she had the same... affliction as you, and every month without fail she'd brew the aforementioned potion for this girl."

"What happened when you left?" I asked

"She died a few months before we found out about Hermione, a few kids found out her secret and attacked her when she was on her way back from the shower one night and she died in the hospital a few days later, it fucking tore Drea up inside." He replied solemnly

I was once again going to continue talking but Russell turned around and I saw Audrey sit up slowly yawning.

"Wow, a hysterical mental breakdown sure takes a lot out of a girl. What've you guys been talking about?" Audrey asked.

I started to splutter and cough until Russell jumped in with a statement not so far from the truth "We were talking about magnetic force, how no matter how hard you try to deny it positive and negative magnets will always attract." He said whilst looking pointedly at Audrey. As he did she blushed the most adorable shade of red and when all the blood rushed to her face all my blood rushed to my groin. I shifted uncomfortably in my seat, and Audrey raised her eyebrow at me, and then shook her head laughing.

"Well, I think I'm going to go ahead and try to find the kitchens, I'm feeling slightly peckish after that little scene." Audrey said and started to stand up.

I didn't understand how she could just act like it was nothing.

"I'll take you." I found myself offering, and I was caught between desperately wanting her to accept and knowing that she shouldn't.

"That'd be great Rem-Professor..." She corrected herself in front of her brother, blushing again.

Russell seemed to not notice anything - although I was willing to bet he was just acting so this didn't turn into a full-blown awkward conversation.

Last night she'd come to my office claiming that Professor Black had said that I wanted to see her.

I had mentioned to Sirius that I thought her to look like an interesting, and she was beautiful, but never had I thought that he would go as far to send her to my staffroom, although I suppose I should have known better, it was after all, Sirius.
Apparently she'd gotten lost and run into him in the halls, he later told me he found her punching a wall.
When she had arrived, I invited her in and we had tea. I'm not really a big tea drinker, I much prefer the heavier stuff, and I think that's probably from hanging around Sirius for so many years, and even though I'd be willing to wager a substantial amount of money on her being able to drink me under the table, it is not at all appropriate to offer Firewhisky to a student. So yes we drank tea, and spoke about how it was starting at a new school in her last year, she said it'd be tough, but she was a tough chick. Also, she wasn't alone; she had her friends, not to mention her family.

She kept calling me Professor. I was having a hard time just sitting there, so I told her as long as we were out of class she could call me Remus. I thought this would help, but the way she said my name it called out to both my human side and my animal side. I don't think she meant it, but it was so tantalizing, I had to lie and say that I was tired and had to go to bed, when really the only place I was going was to have a very, very, very cold shower.

I was brought out of my silent musings by Russell telling Audrey that he'd meet up with her later, a goofy grin took over his face and I could only assume that Teanna was going to be wherever he was headed.
After checking that my erection had subsided I got up and walked over to her.

"Ready?" She asked, looking up at me.

"Sure, come on this way" I replied.

We walked together down to the kitchens in a comfortable silence, I'm not one to try to fill the silence with meaningless words, and I could tell that she wasn't either, mostly by the fact that she didn't try to fill the silence with meaningless words. When we reached the kitchens and opened the door we went inside and told the house elves what we wanted. I asked for a slightly undercooked steak and Audrey asked for a bowl of Mi Goreng. After about two minutes I felt the need to break the silence.

"Can I call you Drea?" I asked suddenly.

She laughed, "Sure."

"Drea," I paused. "What do you think about werewolves?" I asked, even though her brother had told me about her friend, I think I just had to hear it from her.

"I had a friend who was a werewolf, I loved her dearly, every month I'd brew the Wolfsbane Potion for her every month, until she died." She ended abruptly and took in a deep shuddering breath. "I hated those kids so much, even before what they did to Stacie. She was such a nice girl, and when we found out about her, uh... problem, she thought that we were going to run off and tell everyone her secret, but what we did was we all became Animagus'. I know it sounds uber cliché but we all went into an internet café in Bathurst and did this quiz online about what our animal form should be, Russell was the coyote, Audrey the fox, and I the panther. It was great. We'd just run around the bush, you have to be careful not to let anyone see you, 'cause none of those animals are ever really seen in Australia, except the fox," She laughed "it would have been disastrous, I remember one day we were down in Sydney and someone said that they saw a Panther running around, everyone went into a panic, lucky I could just turn back into good ol' Audrey whenever anyone came to near..."

I was flabbergasted. Her and her siblings had done for this girl what my friends had done for me. If I do take Audrey and make her mine like Moony is constantly screaming at me to, it would make my monthly transformations a whole lot easier, I wouldn't have to worry about her as much.

"Of course, when Teanna found out that we were all Animagus' she all but demanded to be taught how to do it." She continued, laughing a little. "Teanna did a test but it said she was a moose. I'm pretty sure she still owes the café a new computer. So instead she asked everyone she knew what animal they thought she would be if she wasn't human." She now shook her head and laughed again. Teanna seemed to be someone the whole Granger family could rely on for a good laugh. "Most people said a bear of some sort, you know 'cause they look cuddly and I guess if well trained you could hug a bear, but even though they look all cuddly and cute, they are deadly and vicious underneath. Plus, bears are pretty awesome."

Audrey furrowed her brow but smiled at the same time. "When she first transformed, we thought we had taught her wrong because even though she looks like a grizzly, she always looks like a cub. I guess that would be a side effect of her inner child breaking free, oh who am I kidding? Teanna doesn't have an inner child, she has an inner adult."

She laughed again and I couldn't help but join in, it was just the effect Drea had on me.

I stayed there with her as we ate our food.
And even while eating, I couldn't keep the same grin that Russell had left my office with off my own face.

HermPOV

I've not spoken to anyone since my 'sisters' broke the news of my pure blood status.
I wrote a letter to my parents, telling them what happened. I've yet to get a letter back. I was going to talk to Draco, and I nearly did, but I couldn't, he just looked so sad.
It looked like someone had just killed his favorite pet.

I was seriously offended when Sirius, or Professor Black I suppose, said that Ron and Harry defeated Voldemort, not mentioning my major involvement in it. I was there, and I worked so hard to help them, and Ron and I tried a relationship but he was just simply too self-absorbed. That prick broke my heart and I guess that's part of the reason I'm hesitating now with Draco.
It's been hard enough to watch Ron with Luna every morning, feeding each other, but it would be unbearable if I had to endure someone doing that with Draco too.

I walked into the common room to find Audrey, Teanna and Draco sitting on the floor on assorted colourful cushions, Audrey and Teanna both holding guitars and laughing.

"Okay, okay you guys you said you'd play for me, so play." Draco said when they had finally stopped laughing.

Audrey and Teanna looked at each other, nodded, and then they both started to play.

You say the sweetest things and I
Can't keep my heart from singing
along to the sound of your song
My stupid feet keep moving
to this 4/4 beat, I'm in time with you
Whoa, to this 4/4 beat I would die for you (die for you)


(Someone stop this)
I've gone to far to come back from here,
but you don't have a clue
you don't know what you do to me


Won't someone stop this song,
so I won't sing along
someone stop this song,
so I won't sing..


I never let love in
so I could keep my heart from hurting
The longer that I live with this idea, the more I sink into this 4/4 beat
I'm in time with you
Whoa, to this 4/4 beat I would die for you (stop this song)


I've gone to far to come back from here,
but you don't have a clue
you don't know what you do to me
I've come to far to get over you,
and you don't have a clue
you don't know what you do to me


Can't someone stop this song,
so I won't sing along
someone stop this song,
so I won't sing


Your lovesick melody
is gonna get the best of me tonight
But you won't get to me if I don't sing


It creeps in like a spider
can't be killed, although I try and try to
well, don't you see I'm falling?
Don't wanna love you, but I do


(Lovesick melody) Can someone stop this song, so I won't sing along?
(Lovesick melody) Can someone stop this song, so I won't sing?
Your lovesick melody
is gonna get the best of me tonight
But you won't get to me, no
you won't get to me 'cause I won't sing

When Teanna played the final chord I was dumbstruck. I didn't know Teanna could play, she sounded amazing, and I had no idea Audrey was so talented.

"So you guys are in a band, and Catherine is the lead singer?" Draco asked

"Yeah, I play bass, Teanna on guitar, Russell on drums and Catherine on lead vocals and back-up guitar." Audrey replied

With this note I walked back out of the common room and into the castle, just one more thing that I can't handle, my best friend is in a band with my 'sister' meaning that she's known about them since before I did, yet she never said anything to me. Well that was like a slap in the face.
She never said 'Hey 'Mione, you might wanna ask your rentals if your their only kid.' or even a 'I met a bunch of Granger's while I was in Australia, you might wanna check to see if you guys are related.'

It was so unlike her... then again, she might have forgotten, that wouldn't be unlike Teanna.

TeanPOV

Audrey came back into the common room with Draco, and apparently she promised to play a song for him, so we played a Paramore cover, one that I had demanded we learn after realizing my feelings toward Russell, at the time I had hoped it would be a hint to him that I liked him... but now I'm pretty sure that he doesn't even feel that way about me.
Why couldn't I have fallen for someone in my league? Why did I fall for the talented, smart, funny, interesting, friendly guy?
Russell Granger was most definitely out of my league!

After we had played, the three of us talked for a while until Audrey reminded me that I had a detention, with Russ.
I didn't think it necessary to change my clothes, so I said my goodbyes to Drea and Draco and left to go back to the charms room.

It wasn't until the portrait hole had closed behind me did my freak-out mode kick in.

Sure I had been on detention before, but never with someone I had a minor, mild, no... major crush on!

I had probably had detentions with boys who had had a crush on me at the time but never this way around.

My foot hit the end of the last staircase as I stared ahead.

"Breathe you moron." I chanted to myself as I walked down the corridor to my detention.

But something about being in a room with only one other person and Russell Granger made it so my breathing and heart were going haywire.

"Stupid freakin' boys messing with my bodily functions." I growled to myself.

I stopped dead in my tracks as I witnessed Catherine exit Professor Black's classroom.

She didn't have a detention... then again; she might have needed some advice on some school work.

But from the grin on her face I would guess otherwise.

No! It was definitely to do with school. Definitely!

"Hey Cathy, you missed a wicked jam sesh just before. Drea promised Draco that she would demonstrate her awesome musical skills and I got pulled in. It would've been shweet if you were there." I quickly said as she turned to see me.
One of the quickest ways to diffuse awkwardness that I had found was humor.
It worked wonders for arguments and sadness too.
Cathy quickly muttered her goodbyes and walked off in the direction I had come rather quickly.

I just stood there, staring at the door.
I could just run off and say I forgot, I'd just have to do the detention again another time...
Actually, that wasn't a half bad plan!
And it probably would have worked if something hadn't slammed into me from behind causing me to fall face first into the ground.

"Ah, ground, how I have missed thy sweet embrace." I chuckled as I began to push myself up. I felt someone grab my arm and help me to my feet but wasn't prepared for to be greeted by that amazing smile and those amazing blue eyes.
Great! I had chosen the perfect moment to be my stupid Shakespeare fan freakish self!

"Sorry 'bout that, I was running down the stairs and missed the last one." Russell said with the same heartbreaking smile that had pushed my heart into overdrive every time I saw it.

"My stupidness must be rubbing off on you." I chuckled and rubbed my forehead where it had smacked the ground.

Russell grabbed my hand away from his face, holding in his own as he looked me directly in the eyes - which caused my breath to get stuck in my throat.
"You're anything but stupid. I especially don't think you're stupid."

I could feel the heat rush up to my face.
I hated my blush. When Drea blushed her cheeks burned red but in a way that made her more beautiful, when 'Mione blushed her cheeks went a faint pinkish red but it faded quickly, then there was Cathy. She had a cute pink blush that made her all the more like a doll from a shop.
Me? When I blushed, my whole face lit up brighter than the sky on New Years Eve.
I suppose I should be thankful that there wasn't much that made me blush. I guess it was a fair trade, the lack of embarrassment for my atrocious blush.

Then suddenly it hit me like a truck on the highway.
Russell Granger was holding my hand!!
And freakin' hell, his hands were soft yet at the same time still manly, and most certainly warm - unlike my hands which for some unknown reason where always cold.

"You're blushing you know." He chuckled, lightly touching my face with his free hand. "I must be the luckiest man alive," He sighed, lightly tracing under my eye. Suddenly he stopped, stepping away from me, removing his hand from my own and letting his other fall to his side. "Because you know, uh, not many people must see you, um, blush. You know?"

My face and hand were both still tingling from where he had been touching them just moments before.
"Yeah..." I sighed and turned to walk toward the classroom, secretly hoping he would decide to skip detention so I wouldn't be tempted to oogle at him the entire time.
I took a step toward the door but my feet decided now would be the best time to fail.
Of course, I just had to fall at an odd angle.
'This is going to hurt like hell' was all I could think as my body fell toward the floor for a second time in less than a minute.
And hurt like hell it did!
"OW!" I screamed out and grabbed my side where pain had erupted.

"Are you okay?" Russell immediately asked his face down next to mine causing my breathing to go crazy again.

"You two are la- Teanna are you okay?" Sirius - I mean Professor Black asked as he exited the classroom.

"Yeah, the ground and I have an agreement to meet up every few minutes. We often discuss how the walls always bitch about me ignoring them when I go away on trips."
Both Russell and Sirius laughed at my lame joke and helped me up.

"Well your detention started ten minutes ago so we better start."

"What are we doing?!" I asked jumping up quickly. This was Sirius after all; he wouldn't be too strict hopefully.

"Cleaning the room" He answered brightly. The way he said it was like our detention was eating a bunch of chocolate.

"Fail!" I exclaimed and crossed my arm, marching into the room. I could hear both of them laughing even harder behind me.
I was surprised to see the half of the room covered in a layer of soot.

"First years"

"Another Seamus" I chuckled thinking of all the times he had managed to blow shit up.

"And it's back to basics, no wands here." Sirius ordered motioning to two buckets on a nearby desk I had missed in my quick look around the room.

***

Two hours later, Russell and I were still cleaning.

People who have grown up cleaning stuff with magic their whole lives are not used to these Muggle ways of cleaning.

"This fails so epically that fail doesn't even begin to describe it." I groaned as my hand cramped up again.

"Well perhaps this will ensure you arrive to class on time." Sirius said absently as he read the Daily Prophet.

He checked the watch on his wrist, jumping up suddenly. "I'll be back soon. Keep at it."

Great as if it wasn't bad enough that I had been unable to think of anything else during this detention, now I was going to be completely alone with Russ.

Sirius walked out the door and I heard him lock it so we couldn't run off while he was gone.

Fan-freakin'-tastic!

I continued cleaning the tables like I had been.

Russell and I had started off on opposite sides of the room but now we were close enough that if I took five steps back I would run into him.

The table I had been cleaning was finally done.

I went to move onto the next one when once again, gravity decided to play against me, this time with the help of soapy water that had spilt on the floor.

My arms instantly went out to grab a table but found nothing to grab hold of as I fell backwards.

I closed my eyes, like I usually did when I tried to imagine the pain I was about to feel was going to be less than what it actually was.

I was actually a very good liar, especially to myself.

And right now, I was lying to myself something chronic.

But somehow my body didn't hit the ground.

I opened my eyes to see Russell. He had caught me around the waist and was slowly picking me up.

"Thanks." I said, luckily my blush wasn't painting my face red... yet.

After seventeen years of falling on my ass, it's no longer embarrassing to me.

"I think I should stop walking completely, perhaps then I wouldn't spend half my time on the ground."

"How would you get around?" Russ asked, his voice sounded slightly off, but I couldn't place it.

"I guess I would have to pay someone to carry me around... then again, that might make them fall."

Russ smiled and said something that literally stopped all logical thought in my brain. "I'd carry you. Always".

He pulled me up fully and in close to him so I could feel his shallow breath on my face.

"What if I made you fall?" I asked with the last of the breath in my lungs.

"I've already fallen for you."

He leaned in close, the grip on my waist loosening and the one on my arm moving down to the other side of my waist.

His lips were literally a millimeter away from mine.

Tingles spread all over my body with a ferocity that I'd never felt before and it felt like a vice had been clamped around my heart and vocal cords.

Russ closed the gap between us, pressing his lips gently against mine.

If I had thought my brain was muddled before, it was nothing compared to the mess it was in now!

Three words ran endlessly through my mind: OH! MY! GOD!

He pulled away and rested his forehead on mine.

"Teanna" His voice was still that same off tone from before as he pulled me closer.

His right hand shifted to my cheek, brushing away my hair as he did.

"You're hair is so soft." He murmured and buried his face in my hair. "It smells like apples." He mused, kissing my forehead and down my cheek until he reached the side of my mouth.

"You're so beautiful." He whispered causing my heart to flutter even worse.

Just as he was about to press his soft lips back on mine, the door opened causing Russ and I to move apart in a way that could only be described as two positive magnets being pushed apart by each other.

Within a second both Russ and I were scrubbing hard at the desk again.

I swear to god! I will kill Sirius, I don't care that he's my teacher; I will kill him for this!


All of TeanPOV was written by TJ, 'cause I figured that since she is basically the character she should get to do her own scene right?

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Hey people! It's the co-writer/editor of this wonderful story!
So I would just like everyone to know, that I do actually say lame remarks like that of which Russell and Teanna say.

Also, it isn't just Sarah that loves your reviews, I love them too. :D (more than little faces! XD)

Note to Sarah, I found some mistakes... I fixed 'em 'cause I be cool like that! :)
Note to TJ, I found some mistakes, but I fixed them, 'cause there was words left out and some of the editing didn't make sense.
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