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OMJB!! I am SO sorry for the delay in updating! I was being RATHER lazy to be honest! I was on ….buh…..i couldn't be bothered to write a reviewers response, but I am now on holiday for two weeks and a bit, so I promise to update regularly!

Reviewers response:

TwilightNerd: hey, thanks!

IStarEdwardCullen1221: Read on! Thanks

esmecullen14: hmm. Ok……still have no idea….though you helped! thanks for reviewing!

HorsesSW: thank you! Um….the tattoo? I still haven't decided!

SORRY PEOPLE FOR THIS!!

Isadianemill:ok. So I had two different responses to give to you. One nice and polite, and the other with a great amount of word that were mostly obscenities. So I'll go with a mixture of both. Minus the obscenities. Right. Your first three reviews were awesome. Just the kind of thing to keep someone like myself going, then the fourth review, kinda got me annoyed. Learn to read. (see, no obscenities) at NO point did I say 'maybe 60 words at the most' None. Nada. Nuh uh. IF YOU READ THE AUTHORS NOTE ON page 4, you would of seen the part that said:

'Uhhm……so like yeah….im gonna post this chapter and the next chapter together, (as they're both so short) but they should be taken as separate chapters because I wrote it like that….uhhm….five reviews (minimum) for BOTH this chapter and the next, cause im not mean or petty or shiz…so yah.

I meant for chapter 4 and 5 to be as one, but separated, because I didn't think it was fair to ask people to review for something as SHORT and ridiculous as that.

Also, I am not ordering. If it SEEMS like I am, well then, god, I am so sorry. But you know if YOU had your own fuc-right….no obscentities…..if you had your own mf-ing story, then you might have SOME idea about how it feels (warm and fuzzy inside) to get reviews. Its an awesome feeling to get that little bit back for writing some random crap that pops up in your head. I am on track. I am so on track, the track is burned out, cause im on it so much. And no offence, but i haven't lost any readers so far, and if I lose you as a reader, then, maybe, you know, that might not be such a bad thing . . . I don't mean to be mean, or rude, but treat others how you want to be treated. Obviously you like being 'told off' and thus, do I finish my rant to: Isadianemil. The end. Oh but before I finish with my reviewers response, I would like to ask you a favour Isadianemil . . . when YOU write your OWN story, let me know….i'd LOVE to review it!! – note the sarcasm. (GO WRITE YOUR OWN STORY!)

(im finshed ranting)

Ahem

pumpkintongue92: now that you mention it, I feel more and more inclined to write some of them in…its decided. I shall. Thanks for reviewing! I have a plan now! Hehe!

SillyLily619 here is your more!! Thanks!

BellaBooTwilight: its ok! Its awesome that you even bothered to review! Im just glad for that! Yep. I have some ideas for this story. I do indeed! Thanks!

00-VampireKisses-00: haha rachie-poo! SPECULATED start! Shame though! It would have been awesome If it were true! He is so dang cute! Keep reviewing!

Sky's cell buzzed once.

A second later, before the phone could even buzz again, he had sat up, snapped the cell open, and had it to his ear

"Storm?" he said

An angry growl was heard from the other end

"Storm. What's wrong?"

"He-he-she-he chucked me out! She's obviously gonna live with him now! Help me plea-"

She broke off, half crying half screaming.

"Wait there"

Five minutes later he was outside the flat, and hugging Storm.

"I can't believe it!" cried Storm stamping her foot.

"He just chucked me out!" she had stopped crying by now.

Now, her anger was at its peak.

"That stupid twat head! He could have at least given me warning! Not putting all my shit in bin bags! And on the fucking street! Well, im not gonna stand for this. I'm not! He has no fucking right! None! At all! I'm gonna go in there, slap that stupid bitch silly, and I'm going to rip off his ba-" Sky put his hand over her mouth.

She glared at him angrily, then started ranting some more, her voice muffled by his hand.

He looked at her calmly.

"Hush. You can go and collect your stuff later. But right now, you need to calm down"

She stopped struggling, and her shoulders sagged.

He moved his hand away.

"Ok. Fine." She said grumpily.

He nodded, and then turned to pick up her…'bags'.

He heard a loud bang, and someone running up stairs.

Sky cursed and turned around. The door had been kicked open. He sighed

He carried on loading the bags until he heard Storm start screaming.

He straightened up, and was in the flat before she had finished screaming.

"Shit. Who are you, and how did you get in here so quick?" asked a tall male, standing over Storm.

Storm stood up, and pushed her hair back angrily. She had a red handprint across her cheek. It was starting to swell quickly.

Sky growled.

"What did you do?" he said to the man, with his teeth clenched.

"I hit the bitch. She has enough mouth to call me a bastard for kissing Megan, but she can shack up with whoever she wants?! I saw you and her!" he replied, looking nervous.

Sky stepped forwards growling heatedly. He clenched his fist, but Storm was faster than him.

The man was rolling around on the floor clutching his…manly parts, moaning. She kicked him in the gut, and spat on him for good measure.

"Bitch darling? That's a compliment for me Tyrone!" Storm threw out sarcastically, before laughing.

She ran down the hall, into her bedroom.

She threw open her wardrobe, which had obviously been emptied, but Tyrone had left behind the stuff which he had bought her.

"Cheap twat!" she thought furiously.

She picked up her travel bag, and filled it with the many designer bags which were piled at the bottom of the wardrobe. After she had done that, she began stuffing her many many many shoes which were littered around the room. She moved to the dresser opening the draws to see what he had stashed away.

Tracksuits and many jeans. She kissed her teeth. Such an arse-fuck.

She had filled her large travel bag with everything. She then picked up her jewellery box, and her makeup box.

While she was doing this, Skyler, was breathing deeply, trying not to break the neck of the wiener by his feet. How…dare he! He hit her!

"Breathe," he told himself. "Breathe!"

He clenched his fists. If he didn't control himself, then he could do a considerable amount of damage.

He heard a noise, and looked up.

Storm was struggling with a large travel bag, and what looked like a treasure box.

He stood up, and was by her holding the travel bag with ease.

"are you ready?" he asked with a small smile.

She smirked

"hang on…"

She put the box down, and reached into the back pocket of her ex-boyfriend jeans.

She pulled out his wallet.

Skyler raised one eyebrow questioningly.

Storm grinned, and pulled out all the cash she could find. And a gold credit card.

She threw the wallet at Tyrone, picked up her box and turned to leave.

"Storm..." called Tyrone weakly

Storm turned and snarled. Tyrone flinched and cowered into the carpet.

Skyler chuckled.

Storm looked at him and smiled

"See ya shit face!" she called to Tyrone and blew him a kiss.

Tyrone just glared at her.

Storm giggled, and skipped out.

Sky strolled out of the room without a backwards glance.

A.N

Couldn't help myself. Pfft. Dang pens. And keyboard. ANYWHO! Um….i am so getting up myself, but…. TEN reviews this time. I know that its not really necessary, as you guys always meet my requests for reviews (and over them ) but, I want to make sure people actually LIKE my story, before getting carried away!. Ive already written….four chapters (NOTE! WRITTEN! I still have to get my lazy arse to TYPE them up! I prefer to write in my notebook. Its yellow. And A4. and a ringbinder. And….i wont bore you with the details, but I like it. So. Anyway…… this A.N is getting waaaaaaaaay too long so I shall go!

Buuuut! Before I go! If you review, you EACH shall get a virtual cookie! Maybe two depending on how good the reviews are!! Byeeeeeeeeeee!

Sahara xxx

p.s im baking them NOW! Get 'em while they're hot! Hehe!