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Aki stood downstairs waiting for her sister. She looked down at what Tamaki had bought her. She had to hand it to him though, he did have great taste. She wore a long dress, it came to mid cafe, the bottom of the dress was a dark pink and flowed out, the top was a lighter pink and hugged her curves, the strapped were a dark pink and ruffled. She wore light pink gloves same has the top of her dress. She wore a silver necklack with a ruby in the middle, and light pink high heels. She curled her black hair.

She watched has her sister came down. Of course when she saw how good her little sister look she had to out do her. Kanna wore a charcoal grey halter top dress. The neckline curved down, the straps were beaded. At her hip on the side a brooch came and pinch up the dress making it tight and showingg her curves, it flowed out and fell just below the floor. The top tide around to her mid back, the bottom stopped at her lower back. She wore a thick silver bracelet on her right wrist and white open toed pumps with rhinestones. She came her flowing blonde hair slighly curled and down.

"Are you ready little sister."

"Yes Onee-san. Ootori-san sent a limo, it's waiting outside. You look really pretty."

"Thanks." She walked out a head of Aki, who rolled eyes.

Ouran had a beautiful ball room, Aki stood against a pillar while her sister was out on the dance floor. She was dancing with Kyoya. Who knew what that guy was up to.

Mitsukuni came up to Aki with Takashi. "Hey Aki-chan, aren't you going to dance."

"I would, but I'm afraid I'm not very good."

"Oh, well..." his eyes got big, then he smiled, "Takashi can teach you. He's a great dancer. Right Takashi." Honey looked up and gave him, The Eyes.

"Yeah." He held out his hand to Aki, she blushed and took it. He brought her out to the dance floor. He held her waist, while she had her hand on his shoulder, they held hands. He spun and took her across the floor. She felt has her feet weren't touching the floor.

Mitsukuni was right, Takashi was a great dance. Aki was fond of him, he was nice, sweet, thoughtful, he followed everything Mitsukuni asked of him, he protected him. Takashi was a great person all around. She was glad she knew someone like him. Some one who just seemed so, noble. She really wanted to be his friend, one of those friends that he protects and looks after like the host club members.

She smiled at him, "I really like you Takashi." the song ended, and Takashi let her go. Aki blinked surprise did she do something.

Takashi looked to the side, "I'm sorry." He walked away.

Aki blinked, she was really confused. All she did was say she liked him, he was a good person. "Excuse me princess, may I have this dance." Aki turned to see Tamaki. She bowed and accepted him hand.

"Thank you very much for the dress Tamaki, I really like it."

"Well it looks very good on you."

"You looked vey beautiful tonight, Neito-san." Kyoya smiled his pretty little smile

"Kanna, please."

"Well Kanna you look beautiful."

"Thank you."

"So you are a student at one of the Ootori hospitals."

"Yes."

"Do you like it?"

"Everthing is great, the people, teachers, and other students."

Kyoya could think of better things to do then talk to Kanna, but Aki had interested him. She was so different when he saw her at home. She was silent, polite, and did everything her mother told her. She was more respectful, yet at the fair. She was more outgoing and teasing. Why had her demeanor change so. Who was the real Aki anyway. It seemed Kanna was no help. Judging from the way the two glared at each other they weren't on the best terms.

"You've been glaring at Kyoya and Kanna for quite some time." Tamaki stated innocently

Aki came back to reality at Tamaki's voice. "I'm sorry Tamaki, it's not Kyoya I'm glaring at, it's Kanna, she's pretty sneaky at times. I'm just trying to keep on eye on her."

"Why don't you like your sister. You're lucky to have siblings you know."

Aki was a bit suprised at Tamaki's observation. She thought he was a total dramatic idoit, even Haruhi had told her he was an idoit. She smiled, "Because I'm the third child my parents had. My older siblings walk the path my parents set for them. While I am exceptional at everything I do, it's not enough. I have to be more, but I can't. They don't see me for who I am. The person I want to be, is not who they are expecting. I was born to fail. I can't seem to win with them."

"Why are you pretending to be something else? For their acceptance."

"I'll never have their acceptence. I'm just a shadow in the background, the third, invisible."

"Do you want that?"

Aki smiled at him, "I'm not sure want I want."

Tamaki smiled at her. He had helped Kyoya realize what he wanted, but he didn't know how to help Aki. He hoped she would realize that she didn't need approval from anyone to be herself.

"May I cut in." Tamaki turned around to find Kyoya with a smile on his face.

"Of course." He bowed to Aki and left her with Kyoya.

"Having a nice time."

"Actually this is torture."

"So you only remember your manners when your mother's around."

"Nonsense I always remember my manners, doesn't mean I have to use them though." The song ended, Aki bowed, "Thanks for the dance but I'm getting nausiance."

"You know your sister is an beautful and interesting girl." Kyoya wandered what made Aki ticked, if any subjects were, taboo, for her. Her sister seemed like a good start.

Aki stopped and turned to face Kyoya, she keep her face blank, "Then you should get to know her better, I'm sure you'll find her to be a lovely person." She turned walked away wanting to laugh, Kyoya had no idea what he was getting himself into if he was after Kanna.

"Hey Aki-chan?"

Aki turned to see Mitsukuni in his cute little white suit, "Yeah?"

"Do you know where Takashi is?"

Aki blinked in suprise, after their dance he just walked off she wasn't sure why or where he went. "I don't know where he went."