Well, I was going over this story and came to the decision that I am no longer satisfied with the quality of the story. I feel that I have improved as a writer since starting this and therefore, I want to make this better to reflect that.

I plan on revising this story by making it longer and giving it a clearer story line. I might not get straight to it, but this is what I plan on doing. I think the finished product would be better If I do that.

I know that some people have reviewed and said they liked this. Another of my reasons is that I want to make this better for them as well.

So, if you agree or disagree, please tell me.