Okay I'm back. Sorry about the long update wait. 'I'm looking for a Beta Reader for anyone who is interested I want someone who is good at picking out grammar and spelling mistakes, can tell I a character is OOC, and get back
to me quickly. Thanks. And as always review and give me suggestions.
Reason
"Percy, come on let me in!" Annabeth cried trying to fiddle with the lock on Percy's apartment door.
"Why should I?" he asked playfully. "Because I'm you're girlfriend." she tried. "Not good enough." "Because you're my amazing boyfriend." "Thank you, but I'm going to need a better reason than that."
"Because you're my boyfriend you I have missed for the past 3 weeks while I was in San Francisco. And I'm you're girlfriend who spent all night thinking about how much I've missed you and couldn't wait to see you." "Nope." "Beacuse I
brought you ice cream and blue sprinkles." It was a lie but she did really want to see him. "You do?" Percy asked comming out of the appartment. "No but none of the other things were lies." Well since I've allready gone through the
trouble of oppening the door and comming outside I guess you can come in."
Spider(from readeatsleep)
Annabeth stared at the thing crawling around on the kitchen counter. It took all her courage not to scream and run from the room. She just stood there watching its eight legs crawl around. Finally she couldn't stand it anymore. "!" she
screamed. Percy came running into the room, Riptide uncapped. "Where's the monster?" he asked. Annabeth couldn't speak. All she could do was point at the spider on the counter. "Annabeth its just a-" Percy started before he
remembered her extreme fear of spiders. "Spider!" Annabeth finished sounding terrified. Finally able to move she ran to the living room. Percy took care of the spider releasing out the window. "Are you okay?" he asked her sitting down
next to her on the living room couch. "I I I I I I think so." she studdered skakingly. "He wrapped his arms around her not letting go for minutes. Annabeth almost forgot about the spider sitting there in Percy's arms.
Anklet
Annabeth and I walked down the beach holding hands bare-footed. Just the two of us were on the beach but I was sure Travis and Connor Stoll were leading a spy missionon us. I saw the beaded anklet on her left ankle. It was a thin
rope with eight small beads on it. I had seen it before but never really thought about it. "Annabeth, when did you get that anklet?" I asked her. "Oh that she said looking
embarrassed. "Ummmmmm. Luke gave it to me for my 10th birthday." "Oh I see." "I've been meaning to cut it off ever since I found out Luke was evil." " You know you don't have to cut it of just for me." " No. I want to. Luke is evil Percy.
He turned into Kronos. He killed Bekendorf and a lot of other demigods. He almost killed you more than a few times." " Here I have an idea." I said. I took out Riptide and carefully cut the anklet off. Then I retied the anklet around her right
ankle. "Now its from me too."
Perfect
"Everything just has to be so perfect for you doesn't it!" Percy yelled.
"Well not everything."
"Yes! Everything!"
"Percy-"
"The house has to be perfectly clean all the time."
"Not all the time it's a mess now."
"Exactly my point! You need everything so perfect!'
"Percy just-"
"Maybe I'm not perfect enough for you!" He yelled storming out of the appartment
"Percy wait!"
"What?"
"You are perfect enough for me." "I don't really care if the house is perfectly clean or whatever. You are enough perfect for me to last forever."
"Really?"
"Really."
There you have it folks. I really am running out of ideas. So any would be appreciated.
