Update as of 1/6/2017: Looks like I've been hit by the Fanfiction police!
Basically, this story is not allowed to be on this site. I've moved it to AO3 under the same penname, drunkdragon. So it's still there, though you may have to navigate a bit. I will be leaving my notes here for posterity purposes, though.
Now a bit in regards to this story in particular, it's hard to say whether I'm calling quits on it or not. However, should a new chapter come out, I will either make a notice on this website, or put up a toned down version of the chapter and put up the full version on AO3.
Thank you for all your support and understanding.
A/N: And this is where the story gets less about sex and more about consequences, choices, and what it is that people really look for in a relationship. Now that doesn't mean there won't be sex, it's just going to take a slight backseat for now.
Still, it's easy to see that this fic has taken a different turn for now and begins to explore more of the relationship dynamic between the two. We see how Robin's kind of coerced into being a sub, but it's still easy to see that it's still uncomfortable for him. But with the introduction of Noire and what he currently knows, he sees that their future relation doesn't seem perfect and he believes her sexual preferences may be why.
Writing the chapter was kind of fun. The whole magic tome thing is nice, but a part of me wonders if it's too superfluous and lacks a real point. I do have an idea to build it up to something later, but then that veers from the original path this story would take in that it glosses over story and is more about the characters. I may still include it, but I'd have to build up that portion as well and make it into something that ties into Robin's growth. However, it was also kind of difficult. Noire and Robin's conversation was heavily edited from the initial draft.
Speaking of growth, as I've said before this is a story about Robin growing up of sorts. Granted, the subject matter is kinda out there. This is the first part where he starts to stretch himself in that what he thinks something is versus what it really is begins to be challenged and changed. I think I have it under control, but there will probably be tough spots in between.
Reviews!
Jason-Samuels: Yes, filler-y. I didn't like how that chapter felt, but it was a necessary evil of sorts I think.
InifinitEvas: And it was the worst thing that could happen to the two!... Maybe.
HellfireSupremacy: Yes, I did give a softer tone of sorts. My interpretation is that though she has her own preference, she doesn't want to scare off Robin while also wanting to slowly introduce him to being okay with the acts. As we see, though, it backfires in this situation.
GuyBrush007: And now all development has kinda hit the fan of sorts. But there is, naturally, more.
A big thanks to Dane Namor for proofreading the chapter. However, this also brings up another point. I am in need of someone to help critique chapters when necessary for this series. I won't always send you a chapter, but only when I'm stuck somewhere and I need help fixing it. I have someone in mind for now, but I wouldn't mind taking some additional volunteers. Send me a PM and let me know you're interested.
I do not own Fire Emblem.
Cya in a bit!